Comment from NickieT

Excellent

This is an absolutely beautiful poem. I love the clean simplicity and how well it fits the prompt. It has an everlasting love quality to it that truly speaks to the heart of the author.

 Comment Written 12-Oct-2019

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reply by the author on 12-Oct-2019

Thanks for your review. Glad you enjoyed.

Comment from moongirlwriter

Excellent

This is definitely more than a romance poem. . .Love You says it all appropriately and she is a lucky lady to have found such love. I hope you have found that kind of love in she as well. It is rare and sought after by us all. Best of luck to you with this piece.

 Comment Written 12-Oct-2019

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reply by the author on 12-Oct-2019

Thanks for your review. I actually think I'm the lucky one

reply by moongirlwriter on 13-Oct-2019

:)

Comment from gramalot8

Good

You have a nice acrostic poem. It is very simple in wording and flows very nicely. I think you could have elaborated your feelings a little bit more. Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 12-Oct-2019

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reply by the author on 12-Oct-2019

Thanks for your review Sometimes I find that simplicity is best

Comment from Pam (respa)

Excellent

-Very nice image
and presentation.
-I like the formatting
of your acrostic.
-Very good rhyme
and sincere thoughts
you write from your heart.
-It is obvious you love
her very much, and also
be able to be friends and partners.
-Good concluding lines, too.
-Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 12-Oct-2019

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reply by the author on 12-Oct-2019

Thank you for your feedback

reply by Pam (respa) on 12-Oct-2019

You are welcome.

Comment from Katherine M. (k-11)

Exceptional

This is a very joyful poem, which falls very clearly within the brief of the contest. Many words could be quoted for uplifting the reader, but I particularly liked
"Loving you will always be
the best thing I have done"
and the construction and sentiment of the Acrostic word.

 Comment Written 12-Oct-2019

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reply by the author on 12-Oct-2019

Thanks for your review

reply by the author on 15-Oct-2019

Thanks very much for the six stars. Unfortunately the committee do not see it as an acrostic poem as I use more than one line per letter.

Comment from JLR

Excellent

Your line breaks are very confusing the acrostic poem should sequence from line to line with out interruption. Also, I would encourage you to increase or make bold the acrostic letters for the readers ease especially.

 Comment Written 12-Oct-2019

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reply by the author on 12-Oct-2019

Thanks, this is my first go at this type of poetry. How do I bold the lettering?

reply by JLR on 12-Oct-2019

Go into the advanced editor link at the bottom of the writing template ther you change font size and typeface also...