Autumnal treats
What could be better than these?28 total reviews
Comment from rspoet
Hello JRL,
You've written an excellent sensory poem of autumn delights
that uses the senses to bring wonderful images of the season.
We have apple-cider cinnamon donuts in this area.
Nicely rhymed with very good descriptions.
Well done
Robert
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2019
Hello JRL,
You've written an excellent sensory poem of autumn delights
that uses the senses to bring wonderful images of the season.
We have apple-cider cinnamon donuts in this area.
Nicely rhymed with very good descriptions.
Well done
Robert
Comment Written 12-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2019
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Thank you Robert, enjoy the weekend.
Comment from rjuselius
this is a fine piece of poetry dear jlr! I had an American friend from Minnesota who made the traditional thanksgiving dinner. pumpkin pie has never tasted better.
thank you dear friend for sharing!
blessings and a larger than life squeeze!
rebekka xxx
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2019
this is a fine piece of poetry dear jlr! I had an American friend from Minnesota who made the traditional thanksgiving dinner. pumpkin pie has never tasted better.
thank you dear friend for sharing!
blessings and a larger than life squeeze!
rebekka xxx
Comment Written 12-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2019
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Thank you for the read, comments, blessing and squeeze!
Comment from RodG
You made my mouth water with this Florette. Who does not enjoy the taste--and scent--of pumpkin spice lattes or that wondrous aroma of freshly-baked pumpkin cake/bread? Nicely done! Rod
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2019
You made my mouth water with this Florette. Who does not enjoy the taste--and scent--of pumpkin spice lattes or that wondrous aroma of freshly-baked pumpkin cake/bread? Nicely done! Rod
Comment Written 12-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2019
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Thanks much Rod! Have an awesome weekend.
Comment from Heather Knight
It's the first time I see a florette. I like the name and the form itself.
You have written a lovely one. The rhymes are good, I can almost taste the cake (which is bad, I'm on a diet) and the picture is great too.
Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2019
It's the first time I see a florette. I like the name and the form itself.
You have written a lovely one. The rhymes are good, I can almost taste the cake (which is bad, I'm on a diet) and the picture is great too.
Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 12-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2019
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Thanks Maria, I bet the vineyards are colorful...have a good weekend.
Comment from Dihalia
I liked your poem. It made me hungry. Its a great picture of something hot and tasty in a wonderful season. keep writing. Job well done! I liked your picture.
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2019
I liked your poem. It made me hungry. Its a great picture of something hot and tasty in a wonderful season. keep writing. Job well done! I liked your picture.
Comment Written 12-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2019
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Thank you, be in awe if something special this weekend...
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Your welcome!
Comment from Susan X Smith
This poem flows nicely and well meets the contest requirements as outlined. You certainly stimulated my taste buds. I can't wait to join you in the Autumn repast.
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2019
This poem flows nicely and well meets the contest requirements as outlined. You certainly stimulated my taste buds. I can't wait to join you in the Autumn repast.
Comment Written 12-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2019
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thank you Susan.
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Nice image, JLR.
-You have written
a very good poem that
flows smoothly with
good meter and rhyme.
-The imagery is vivid as you
describe "that hefty slice of pumpkin cake"
and "apple cider cinnamon blast"
-One of the things I enjoy about
the season is pumpkin!
-I also like your opening line.
-Well done, thanks for sharing.
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reply by the author on 12-Oct-2019
-Nice image, JLR.
-You have written
a very good poem that
flows smoothly with
good meter and rhyme.
-The imagery is vivid as you
describe "that hefty slice of pumpkin cake"
and "apple cider cinnamon blast"
-One of the things I enjoy about
the season is pumpkin!
-I also like your opening line.
-Well done, thanks for sharing.
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Comment Written 12-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2019
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Thanks PAm
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You are welcome.
Comment from Alex Rosel
This is a particularly atmospheric poem, just perfect for this time of year.
the wisps of mist swirl intently -- I like the imagery here. I can see this in my mind's eye {smiles}.
Thank you for an entertaining read {thumbs up}.
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reply by the author on 12-Oct-2019
This is a particularly atmospheric poem, just perfect for this time of year.
the wisps of mist swirl intently -- I like the imagery here. I can see this in my mind's eye {smiles}.
Thank you for an entertaining read {thumbs up}.
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Comment Written 12-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2019
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Thank you Alex