Subliminal Imagery
Hmmmm....can you see beyond the words...?10 total reviews
Comment from moongirlwriter
Very cute. . . and very Halloweenish. I like the verse and I like the artwork you have chosen. Since I don't usually have a preference for "scary" this works for me. Best of luck to you.
reply by the author on 11-Oct-2019
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Very cute. . . and very Halloweenish. I like the verse and I like the artwork you have chosen. Since I don't usually have a preference for "scary" this works for me. Best of luck to you.
Comment Written 11-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 11-Oct-2019
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Thank you for your review.
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:)
Comment from Robert Zimmerman
Hello mystery writer. Your poem conforms nicely to the 5-7-5 standard. You did a nice job using alliteration in the poem. This is a well conceived and written poem. poem and I wish you well in the contest.
reply by the author on 11-Oct-2019
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Hello mystery writer. Your poem conforms nicely to the 5-7-5 standard. You did a nice job using alliteration in the poem. This is a well conceived and written poem. poem and I wish you well in the contest.
Comment Written 11-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 11-Oct-2019
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Thanks for your review!
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you're welcome
Comment from NickieT
I really enjoy your use of alliteration for this poem. The visual is well suited for the poem and your words make the reader pause and actually take a moment to think. Well done =)
reply by the author on 11-Oct-2019
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I really enjoy your use of alliteration for this poem. The visual is well suited for the poem and your words make the reader pause and actually take a moment to think. Well done =)
Comment Written 11-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 11-Oct-2019
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Thanks for your review!
Comment from Debbie Pope
I think that I just read the winner. Or, it should be the winner. One never knows how the voting will play out. But, I think it's good. That alliteration is very Halloweenish. I enjoyed it immensely and would not change one scary word.
reply by the author on 11-Oct-2019
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I think that I just read the winner. Or, it should be the winner. One never knows how the voting will play out. But, I think it's good. That alliteration is very Halloweenish. I enjoyed it immensely and would not change one scary word.
Comment Written 11-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 11-Oct-2019
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Thanks for your review!
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
This is a fun Halloween 5-7-5 filled with the promise of a wonderful celebration for Halloween. I shall shop today for the treats for the kids! Much enjoyed, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 11-Oct-2019
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This is a fun Halloween 5-7-5 filled with the promise of a wonderful celebration for Halloween. I shall shop today for the treats for the kids! Much enjoyed, love Dolly x
Comment Written 11-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 11-Oct-2019
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Thank you for your review!
Comment from Susan X Smith
This is a really cute poem and a good entry for the contest. It brought a smile to my face. I appreciate the alliteration. The picture was a great choice to complement the poem.
reply by the author on 11-Oct-2019
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This is a really cute poem and a good entry for the contest. It brought a smile to my face. I appreciate the alliteration. The picture was a great choice to complement the poem.
Comment Written 11-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 11-Oct-2019
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Thank you for your review!
Comment from Ogden
Oh, those alliterations! What chance can the competition have against that barrage, with their worn out ghosts and trick-and-treating?
Good luck in the voting!
Don
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2019
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Oh, those alliterations! What chance can the competition have against that barrage, with their worn out ghosts and trick-and-treating?
Good luck in the voting!
Don
Comment Written 10-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2019
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LOL! Sometimes we can get carried away with them, yeah? :) :) Thanx for the review, Don -- hope your weekend's going well -- take care! ;) Yvette
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You're always welcome, Yvette.
Keep alliterating! (i believe it has been said the soothing habitual sameness is healthful.)
Don
Comment from Iza Deleanu
I like the rhythm and cadence given by words such as witch wicked and window that culminated with tricky treats. Thank you for sharing and good luck with the contest.
reply by the author on 11-Oct-2019
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I like the rhythm and cadence given by words such as witch wicked and window that culminated with tricky treats. Thank you for sharing and good luck with the contest.
Comment Written 10-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 11-Oct-2019
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Thank you for your review.
Comment from Mark D. R.
Methinks the chocolate candy will melt if that pumpkin has a candle (-;
Your pumpkin does have that devilish or witchy look. Nicely composed verse for this Halloween contest entry.
P.S. For an edit: I think there is an extra space between 'pumpkin' and 'peeks.'
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2019
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Methinks the chocolate candy will melt if that pumpkin has a candle (-;
Your pumpkin does have that devilish or witchy look. Nicely composed verse for this Halloween contest entry.
P.S. For an edit: I think there is an extra space between 'pumpkin' and 'peeks.'
Comment Written 10-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2019
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LOL! ;) Thanx for the heads up, sir -- take care out there! ;) :) Yvette
Comment from Marilyn Lou Berry
You crafted an engaging poem. I also wonder what kind of tricky treats are inside. I like poems or stories that leaving you wondering something. Perfect chosen art piece for your delightful poem.
reply by the author on 11-Oct-2019
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You crafted an engaging poem. I also wonder what kind of tricky treats are inside. I like poems or stories that leaving you wondering something. Perfect chosen art piece for your delightful poem.
Comment Written 10-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 11-Oct-2019
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Thank you for your thoughtful review!
