Waiting For My Beloved
A silly one22 total reviews
Comment from lyenochka
I like your personification of Autumn and I guess summer and autumn are both masculine in Spanish. We didn't really have a summer and it feels like we're heading straight to winter!
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I like your personification of Autumn and I guess summer and autumn are both masculine in Spanish. We didn't really have a summer and it feels like we're heading straight to winter!
Comment Written 12-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2019
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All seasons are masculine except spring.
Thanks for reading.
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Interesting! In Russian, all seasons are feminine except summer which is neuter.
Comment from Mystic Angel 7777
This is a beautifully penned piece and quite poetic in both form and content. We al seem to love Spring and Fall because they are both so vibrant and temperate - we forget what follows LOL. Well done and thank you very much for sharing it.
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This is a beautifully penned piece and quite poetic in both form and content. We al seem to love Spring and Fall because they are both so vibrant and temperate - we forget what follows LOL. Well done and thank you very much for sharing it.
Comment Written 11-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2019
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Thanks for reading, Monica.
Comment from Louise Michelle
Well, up until an hour ago our weather was just like yours. The cold front is now blowing in. Humanizing the weather was a hoot, Maria. Hugs, Lou
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2019
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Well, up until an hour ago our weather was just like yours. The cold front is now blowing in. Humanizing the weather was a hoot, Maria. Hugs, Lou
Comment Written 11-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2019
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Thanks for your kind review, Lou. xxx
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written flash fiction about waiting for a lover that seems to forget to return on the specified time and we just waiting patiently until they come.
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2019
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A very well-written flash fiction about waiting for a lover that seems to forget to return on the specified time and we just waiting patiently until they come.
Comment Written 11-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2019
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Thanks for reading, Sandra.
Comment from Janetsue
We had an unusually long hot spell following September. It has finally dropped below the 90s. I can really relate to this posting and I don't think it is silly at all. Autumn this year is a true sweetheart! lol
reply by the author on 11-Oct-2019
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We had an unusually long hot spell following September. It has finally dropped below the 90s. I can really relate to this posting and I don't think it is silly at all. Autumn this year is a true sweetheart! lol
Comment Written 10-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 11-Oct-2019
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Same over here.
Thanks for reading.
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You're very welcome!!
Comment from brenda faye curtis
I take it that summer is the one who won't leave, and autumn can't arrive until he goes. I had to reread couple times to get that. Like you, and most folks, I think, I am very much looking forward to the cooler weather.
reply by the author on 11-Oct-2019
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I take it that summer is the one who won't leave, and autumn can't arrive until he goes. I had to reread couple times to get that. Like you, and most folks, I think, I am very much looking forward to the cooler weather.
Comment Written 10-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 11-Oct-2019
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You understood perfectly. Thanks so much for reading.
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You're welcome, Maria.
Comment from Rikki66
I watch for Orion when it graces the sky Autumn is here. In Louisiana, we had our first kiss with lows in the fifties.
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reply by the author on 11-Oct-2019
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I watch for Orion when it graces the sky Autumn is here. In Louisiana, we had our first kiss with lows in the fifties.
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Comment Written 10-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 11-Oct-2019
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Thanks so much for reading.
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welcome
rikki
Comment from Ulla
Hi Maria Jose, this is a fine little story that I really enjoyed to read. Yeah, maybe it was a silly one and yet it was not. I liked it. It's still warm here, as well, and I love it. We're all enjoying an indian summer or the Santo Miguel. Ulla xx
reply by the author on 11-Oct-2019
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Hi Maria Jose, this is a fine little story that I really enjoyed to read. Yeah, maybe it was a silly one and yet it was not. I liked it. It's still warm here, as well, and I love it. We're all enjoying an indian summer or the Santo Miguel. Ulla xx
Comment Written 10-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 11-Oct-2019
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Thanks so much for reading.xxx
Comment from robyn corum
MJ,
Funny you say you rolled up your (short) sleeves...? hahaha
You must like autumn much more than I do. I am not ready for summer to end. We finally, FINALLY got a pool - just in time to close it pretty much. Grrrrrr....
hahaha Cute. Thanks for the smile!
reply by the author on 11-Oct-2019
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MJ,
Funny you say you rolled up your (short) sleeves...? hahaha
You must like autumn much more than I do. I am not ready for summer to end. We finally, FINALLY got a pool - just in time to close it pretty much. Grrrrrr....
hahaha Cute. Thanks for the smile!
Comment Written 10-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 11-Oct-2019
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LOL
Thanks so much for reading.
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
It has arrived here! All my leafed plants and trees are changing colour and dropping in the garden. I do love Autumn. Going into the forest is a delight. Your ending to this flash fiction took me by surprise, I truly wasn't expecting that! Well done, my friend. :) Sandra xx
reply by the author on 11-Oct-2019
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It has arrived here! All my leafed plants and trees are changing colour and dropping in the garden. I do love Autumn. Going into the forest is a delight. Your ending to this flash fiction took me by surprise, I truly wasn't expecting that! Well done, my friend. :) Sandra xx
Comment Written 10-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 11-Oct-2019
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Thanks so much for reading.xxx
