Rose Petal Tears
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Comment from Dolly'sPoems
There's much sadness in these few words here Diana, such an eloquent way of being sorrowful here, I enjoyed the sentiment delivered so gently in a few words, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 09-Oct-2019
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There's much sadness in these few words here Diana, such an eloquent way of being sorrowful here, I enjoyed the sentiment delivered so gently in a few words, love Dolly x
Comment Written 09-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 09-Oct-2019
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Thank you Dolly! Even simple words can pack a punch now and then!! LoL! Appreciate that you always take time to share your opinion with me! And can I get one of those drinks you?re holding? It looks so yummy!! xoxoxo
Comment from lyenochka
Your poem fits the 15 syllable limit and it matches the picture perfectly. The second and last lines are easy to understand. The reason for the tears to be "rose petal" ones isn't quite clear to me.
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reply by the author on 09-Oct-2019
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Your poem fits the 15 syllable limit and it matches the picture perfectly. The second and last lines are easy to understand. The reason for the tears to be "rose petal" ones isn't quite clear to me.
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Comment Written 09-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 09-Oct-2019
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Thank you for taking time to read! The rose petal tears are meant to show the tears falling on the rose petal coloring it and hopefully bringing back the rose?s beautiful color just as crying helps to cleanse us! xoxo
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Ah, thanks for the explanation!
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Very welcome! Thanks for being open to my view! xoxo
