Rose Petal Tears
Forsaken...22 total reviews
Comment from Y. M. Roger
Wow.... now there's an offering of melancholy for the morning -- well done in only those 15 syllables to be able to change the mood of the reader!! ;) :) Thanx for sharing and best of luck in the contest! ;) Yvette
reply by the author on 09-Oct-2019
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Wow.... now there's an offering of melancholy for the morning -- well done in only those 15 syllables to be able to change the mood of the reader!! ;) :) Thanx for sharing and best of luck in the contest! ;) Yvette
Comment Written 09-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 09-Oct-2019
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Awe! I hope it didn?t change a beautiful mood in you! I?m so happy though that you decided to read it! xoxo
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Naaah.... takes more than that to turn the blonde's mood during FALL BREAK!! Hooray!! No school!! LOL! Can you tell I'm excited..??!! ;) Take care!
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Haha! Woo hoo! Party time!!! xoxo
Comment from Mystic Angel 7777
This meets the contest requirements splendidly you deliver a well penned poem in exactly 15 syllables. The content is haunting as it leaves the reader with a lingering sense of loss and despair. Good luck in the judging and thank you very much for sharing it.
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This meets the contest requirements splendidly you deliver a well penned poem in exactly 15 syllables. The content is haunting as it leaves the reader with a lingering sense of loss and despair. Good luck in the judging and thank you very much for sharing it.
Comment Written 09-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 09-Oct-2019
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Thanks so much! It?s not that I?m a sad person, but I have experienced sad times and find love and sadness the best inspiration to draw from! I appreciate you took time to offer me feedback on it! xoxo
Comment from Teri7
Diana, This is a very well written 15 syllable poem you have penned for the contest. You used very good words that seemed to flowed into each other. Very nice imagery from the art work. Best wishes in the contest. Blessings, Teri
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Diana, This is a very well written 15 syllable poem you have penned for the contest. You used very good words that seemed to flowed into each other. Very nice imagery from the art work. Best wishes in the contest. Blessings, Teri
Comment Written 09-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 09-Oct-2019
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Thanks so much! I greatly appreciate you took time to read! xoxo
Comment from Janetsue
This whole posting emotes sorrow...the kind when we are no longer connected to someone who was previously very close. It is an excellent entry for the 15 syllable poem contest, my friend. Best wishes always!
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This whole posting emotes sorrow...the kind when we are no longer connected to someone who was previously very close. It is an excellent entry for the 15 syllable poem contest, my friend. Best wishes always!
Comment Written 09-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 09-Oct-2019
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Thank you for your always supportive feedback! xoxo
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Return xoxo's !! :-)
Comment from Sally Law
This is altogether beautiful, Diana. Please accept my six stars although a six doesn't seem sufficient. And a forsaken cello song to go with your poetry. The full package once again, dear poet of mine. Sending you my best today as always,
Sally xoxo
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This is altogether beautiful, Diana. Please accept my six stars although a six doesn't seem sufficient. And a forsaken cello song to go with your poetry. The full package once again, dear poet of mine. Sending you my best today as always,
Sally xoxo
Comment Written 09-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 09-Oct-2019
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Awe! Awe!! You make my day! It?s hard to know how these sad ones will be received. Thank you for seeing the beauty in the sorrow and honoring it with precious rating. Hope your day has been as awesome as you! xoxo
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You deserved this and it is always a pleasure to review such outstanding work. XO
Me :]
Comment from Shirley E Kennedy
An interesting image and lovely poem.
Roses are by far my favourite flower yet sadly are often central
in love and loss.
The term 'rods petal tears' is quite powerful to me.
Blessings
Shirley
reply by the author on 09-Oct-2019
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An interesting image and lovely poem.
Roses are by far my favourite flower yet sadly are often central
in love and loss.
The term 'rods petal tears' is quite powerful to me.
Blessings
Shirley
Comment Written 09-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 09-Oct-2019
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Thank you so much! I love roses too! Maybe they are used so much in reference to love because they are so utterly unique! Appreciate you took time to read! xoxo
Comment from CrystieCookie999
This absolutely, positively and definitely fits 15 syllables! (I counted). I get some 's' consonance in 'eyes' and 'tears' at ends of two lines. There is an implied metaphor by saying the tears are rose petal, in shape it appears. Good luck in the contest!
reply by the author on 09-Oct-2019
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This absolutely, positively and definitely fits 15 syllables! (I counted). I get some 's' consonance in 'eyes' and 'tears' at ends of two lines. There is an implied metaphor by saying the tears are rose petal, in shape it appears. Good luck in the contest!
Comment Written 09-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 09-Oct-2019
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LoL! You are so funny!! Thank you for getting it and appreciating! xoxo
Comment from Ricky1024
This is a "15 Syllable Contest Entry" rich in Theme and Imagery.
It read well and Flowed well with no Grammar Issues, as well
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Adjective and Objective Contents were both Excellent and Exceptional.
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Decrepitive Measures aligned Perfectly
Good luck with and and have a Blessed day.
Doctor Ricky 1024
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This is a "15 Syllable Contest Entry" rich in Theme and Imagery.
It read well and Flowed well with no Grammar Issues, as well
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Adjective and Objective Contents were both Excellent and Exceptional.
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Decrepitive Measures aligned Perfectly
Good luck with and and have a Blessed day.
Doctor Ricky 1024
Comment Written 09-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 09-Oct-2019
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Thanks Doc! Your approval is sincerely appreciated!! xoxo
Comment from Sharon Feldt
The poem, the music and the illustration work together to set the mood of sadness and loss expressed in your short but powerful poem. With only 15 syllables you have conveyed a universal feeling of despair at losing love.
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The poem, the music and the illustration work together to set the mood of sadness and loss expressed in your short but powerful poem. With only 15 syllables you have conveyed a universal feeling of despair at losing love.
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 09-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 09-Oct-2019
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Thank you! I sincerely appreciate that you took time to stop and leave me feedback on it!!! xoxo
Comment from Iza Deleanu
Wow I love the image you are creating with the personification and metaphors."Rose petals tears" "the love that has forsaken." Thank you for sharing and let the inspiration guide you
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Wow I love the image you are creating with the personification and metaphors."Rose petals tears" "the love that has forsaken." Thank you for sharing and let the inspiration guide you
Comment Written 09-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 09-Oct-2019
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Thank you! Sometimes even simple words can have such a powerful impact! So appreciate you took time to read it! xoxo
