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The Gardens at Weatherbury

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Comment from CrystieCookie999
Exceptional
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I could not find anything to improve in this chapter. I guess even an armadillo has to affect an air of macho bravado to justify being pink and a shorty. Constantine brings Sir Archie back to reality, of course. I like this descriptive line: His snort that followed sounded less melodic, like the lower note of a saxophone. The last line definitely leads the reader on to wanting to read more. Good job.

 Comment Written 09-Oct-2019


reply by the author on 10-Oct-2019
    Wow, Crystie!! ;) :) Thanx so much for your wonderful review and those lovely stars -- so glad this little fantasy fun is making you smile!! ;) :) Take care and have a wonderful day!! ;) :)
Comment from Iza Deleanu
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The adventure continues, Archie and Constantine go on. One is the master of the garden; the other one is the keeper of the secrets of the shade. Thank you for sharing and good luck with your next chapter.

 Comment Written 09-Oct-2019


reply by the author on 10-Oct-2019
    Thanx so much for your review on this one, Iza -- much appreciated, ma'am! ;) :) I am so very grateful for your support!! ;) :) Yvette
Comment from Joan E.
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I enjoyed this chapter in the adventures of Nicholas, the young groundskeeper. Your character of Sir Archibald was an appealing surprise as a pink armadillo! Cheers- Joan

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 Comment Written 08-Oct-2019


reply by the author on 10-Oct-2019
    Thanx so much for your review on this one, Joan -- much appreciated, ma'am! ;) :) I am so very grateful for your support!! ;) :) Yvette
Comment from Robert Zimmerman
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Hi Yvette. I'm a little surprised by a pink Armadillo. I lived in Tx for 3 years and saw lots of them but not a pink one. I do remember where I am. If a garden gnome is the boss, there is nothing unusual about a pink Armadillo. I liked this line a LOT! " "Still in my squatting position, I offered my hand in greeting." For some reason, that cracked me up. :) Z

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 Comment Written 08-Oct-2019


reply by the author on 10-Oct-2019
    LOL! Well, no matter it what it was, I'm glad this made you smile! ;) My job here is finished, so to speak -- take care today, Z, and thanx for the review!! ;) :)
reply by Robert Zimmerman on 10-Oct-2019
    You're so welcome