The Gardens at Weatherbury
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Comment from Rosemary Everson1
Are most of these characters, fictional creatures, except Nicholas? That is what I have noticed as I read the story. The one that has the slick tongue, going in and out, must be a little creepy....onto the next chapter.
reply by the author on 31-Oct-2020
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Are most of these characters, fictional creatures, except Nicholas? That is what I have noticed as I read the story. The one that has the slick tongue, going in and out, must be a little creepy....onto the next chapter.
Comment Written 30-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 31-Oct-2020
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Totally fictional -- Nicholas is the only 'person' in the gardens... so far. ;) :)
Comment from Mary Kay Bonfante
Delightful introduction to Sir Archie. I like the charming armadillo. He's a regal and curious character.
I love your picture of the garden with the pink door. It's a positively charming story!
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2020
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Delightful introduction to Sir Archie. I like the charming armadillo. He's a regal and curious character.
I love your picture of the garden with the pink door. It's a positively charming story!
Comment Written 11-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2020
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Hooray - you're still enjoying!! ;) thanx so much, Mary Kay! ;) Yvette
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You're welcome, dear Yvette. Yes, very enjoyable indeed! Love, Mary Kay xoxo
Comment from RShipp
'...releasing a comfortable nearly musical snort as his tongue disappeared.' (I love this detail!)
'"Sir Archie, will do, Groundskeeper." He raised his head proudly again and stood as tall as his armor would allow.' (And this one as well!)
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2020
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'...releasing a comfortable nearly musical snort as his tongue disappeared.' (I love this detail!)
'"Sir Archie, will do, Groundskeeper." He raised his head proudly again and stood as tall as his armor would allow.' (And this one as well!)
Comment Written 09-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2020
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LOL!! Gotta try to get the reader inside the blonde's craziness, ya know?! :) So glad you seem to be sliding in there! ;) :) Yvette
Comment from Loren .
New characters entering and all with histories and background and yes, personalities. My question, at this point, do they all somehow play a part in the unfolding of the plot line of the story? It's sad to get to know (even vaguely) a character and find he's only a one liner with a walk-on roll. On the other hand, it does speak to the interesting population of this wonderful garden. Loren
reply by the author on 18-Sep-2020
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New characters entering and all with histories and background and yes, personalities. My question, at this point, do they all somehow play a part in the unfolding of the plot line of the story? It's sad to get to know (even vaguely) a character and find he's only a one liner with a walk-on roll. On the other hand, it does speak to the interesting population of this wonderful garden. Loren
Comment Written 18-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 18-Sep-2020
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Sure... we'll get there. But 500 words just really isn't a lot and I want to keep it in that realm for 'attention' spans of the pre-teen mind. Thanx so much for continuing with me! ;) Yvette
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
C4 - A New Cohort
by Y. M. Roger
Hello, Yvette,
Archie is quite a character lol ... Constantine too. They are cute but not to be underestimated. Well done my friend.
Gypsy
reply by the author on 20-Mar-2020
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C4 - A New Cohort
by Y. M. Roger
Hello, Yvette,
Archie is quite a character lol ... Constantine too. They are cute but not to be underestimated. Well done my friend.
Gypsy
Comment Written 16-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 20-Mar-2020
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Hooray!! ;) so good to see you getting acquainted, my lady!! Thank you! ;)
Comment from Lu Saluna
Such a fun story. I don't see any errors at all. Not in any of the previous chapters either. It makes for a very easy read that flows so well.
It's so nice when you're reading something this enjoyable.
So far the pink armadillo is my favourite character.
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2020
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Such a fun story. I don't see any errors at all. Not in any of the previous chapters either. It makes for a very easy read that flows so well.
It's so nice when you're reading something this enjoyable.
So far the pink armadillo is my favourite character.
Comment Written 13-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2020
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Hooray for Sir Archie... he is certainly a unique individual, yes?! ;) :)
Comment from susand3022
So... I wonder what could be in the cabinet? And what does it mean to be THE groundskeeper? Obviously, he's magical... he can speak with gnomes and little armadillo's. I wonder what he's going to be able to do with the gardens! :)
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2020
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So... I wonder what could be in the cabinet? And what does it mean to be THE groundskeeper? Obviously, he's magical... he can speak with gnomes and little armadillo's. I wonder what he's going to be able to do with the gardens! :)
Comment Written 13-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2020
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Weeeeeellll, we're getting there.... !!! ;) It is for the pre-teen mind...! ;) LOL! ;)
Comment from MamaBebop
Yvette,
I wish I had a 6 for this chapter! Sir Archie is a delightful character (I love that he is PINK!) and Nicholas appears to be a most perceptive young man (be still my heart~ as a young lady reading this, I would have a total crush on him already!!). Dialogue still awesome.
On to Chap 5..
Beth
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2020
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Yvette,
I wish I had a 6 for this chapter! Sir Archie is a delightful character (I love that he is PINK!) and Nicholas appears to be a most perceptive young man (be still my heart~ as a young lady reading this, I would have a total crush on him already!!). Dialogue still awesome.
On to Chap 5..
Beth
Comment Written 13-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2020
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Oh, he's gonna grow up to be a heart-breaker to be sure! ;) Thanx, ma'am!! ;)
Comment from w.j.debi
Sir Archibald is a delightful creature and Nicholas appears to be a perceptive young man. As the "real" grounds keeper it seems he will have quite a crew to assist him.
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2020
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Sir Archibald is a delightful creature and Nicholas appears to be a perceptive young man. As the "real" grounds keeper it seems he will have quite a crew to assist him.
Comment Written 15-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2020
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Pink Armadillos are certainly good knights to have around, yes?! ;) Thanx for the review... glad to have you on-board! ;) Yvette
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
Well, YM, Archie is going to take over being the star of your story--love him! I enjoyed this chapter. You did a great job with the dialogue, the setting, and the imagery. Thanks for sharing, I'm about caught up. Respectfully with Love and Admiration, Jan
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2020
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Well, YM, Archie is going to take over being the star of your story--love him! I enjoyed this chapter. You did a great job with the dialogue, the setting, and the imagery. Thanks for sharing, I'm about caught up. Respectfully with Love and Admiration, Jan
Comment Written 13-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2020
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Pink Armadillos are certainly good knights to have around, yes?! ;) Thanx for the review... glad to have you on-board, Jan! ;) Yvette
