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2019 part 4

Viewing comments for Chapter 73 "You Truly Need Me"
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Comment from robyn corum
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Barb,

hahahahahahahahaha! Yep, all the things you always loved about your garbage can, but never took the time to consider. hahahaha Great little ode - I wonder what you'll be challenged to next?! haha Thanks!

 Comment Written 11-Oct-2019


reply by the author on 11-Oct-2019
    You know me, I love a challenge except when it involves new forms. Thank you
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
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A very well-written poem about the trash can that we definitely need to have around so that we can clean up our surroundings every day.

 Comment Written 09-Oct-2019


reply by the author on 10-Oct-2019
    We need them. Thank you
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
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I enjoyed your poem, Barb. You did a great job with the topic. Your lines flow smoothly with good rhymes. Each verse builds on the purpose of the trash can with good examples. I hate going into a fast food place and seeing how some use the floor as the trash--even some leave tables in a mess. Thanks for sharing. Respectfully with Love, Jan

 Comment Written 09-Oct-2019


reply by the author on 10-Oct-2019
    Thank you so much for the fun reivew
Comment from Janice Canerdy
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Now, this one deserves a 6 for creativity alone, but it is also skillfully-written. Rhyme and meter are good, and your "character sketch" of the garbage can is descriptive and well-rounded. As one who personified a refrigerator and the period (punctuation mark) in poems, I can appreciate the piece! :-)

 Comment Written 09-Oct-2019


reply by the author on 09-Oct-2019
    I love to put words in the mouths of the things that cant speak. LOL Thank you
Comment from alf collier
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It sure does!! Light with lots of giggles creeping through the lines and yet... the seriousness of the topic belies the light-heartedness. A great write, my friend!!

 Comment Written 09-Oct-2019


reply by the author on 09-Oct-2019
    I am honored and I thank you
Comment from Teri7
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Barb, I have to agree with Dolly! This is a really well written and very neat poem about the garbage can! You used very good descriptive words. I enjoyed reading and reviewing this. love and blessings, Teri

 Comment Written 08-Oct-2019


reply by the author on 09-Oct-2019
    Thank you, it was fun to do
Comment from damommy
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Such fun! You are so right. Many things we take for granted that we use every day. I'm prone to writing about them, too.

The meter and rhyme are great, but the very last line was a little choppy. It's a delightful poem.

 Comment Written 08-Oct-2019


reply by the author on 09-Oct-2019
    Thank you so much and I will see what I can do to the last line.
Comment from Joy Graham
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Well done. Bravo! Garbage cans have feelings too. They take a sense of pride in the work they do. I like the one in your picture. It looks like an organized kind of trash can. Very efficient and pleasing to look at.

Joy xx

 Comment Written 08-Oct-2019


reply by the author on 09-Oct-2019
    I wanted a house can but had to work with it. Thank you so much
Comment from Y. M. Roger
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Well, as per Dolly's claim, you wrote a beautiful offering about a trash can! :) And what a cool offering it is, Barb -- seriously, this would make a WONDERFUL children's book!! ;) :) Thanx so much for putting that big smile on my face about a trashcan, no less!! ;) Yvette

 Comment Written 08-Oct-2019


reply by the author on 09-Oct-2019
    I just love a challenge. LOL Thank you so much
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
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Ha ha ha! I knew it Barb! You can make a trash can sound exciting and you did it here! What would be do without them! Great rhymes and flow Barb and you are a genius with words, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 08-Oct-2019


reply by the author on 09-Oct-2019
    I just love to write and make people smile. Thank you