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He couln't take chances13 total reviews
Comment from Willie P. Smith
Excellent. I wonder how many readers will get the gist of this poem. It
is very well written, and the punch line at the end is well placed. My mind
isn't that sharp. Very well done.
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Excellent. I wonder how many readers will get the gist of this poem. It
is very well written, and the punch line at the end is well placed. My mind
isn't that sharp. Very well done.
Comment Written 08-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 08-Oct-2019
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You are the first reviewer that has got it. Halleluyah. Thanks
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
The local priest had to deliver his lecture on the subject of Catholic birth control, he could not take chance, he was pulled out at the last moment; well said.
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He couln't take chances - He couldn't take chances
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The local priest had to deliver his lecture on the subject of Catholic birth control, he could not take chance, he was pulled out at the last moment; well said.
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He couln't take chances - He couldn't take chances
Comment Written 08-Oct-2019
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Thanks
Comment from Iza Deleanu
Sometimes is better to be safe than sorry, usually the talks about birth control could end in blood-shed. Thanks for sharing and good luck with the contest.
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Sometimes is better to be safe than sorry, usually the talks about birth control could end in blood-shed. Thanks for sharing and good luck with the contest.
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Comment Written 08-Oct-2019
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Thanks
