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Cancelled

He couln't take chances

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Comment from Raul1
Excellent
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I have enjoyed reading this story. It is well written. Excellent work! No grammatical errors. Thanks for sharing! Good luck in the contest! I like this story.

 Comment Written 10-Oct-2019


reply by the author on 10-Oct-2019
    Thanks a lot
reply by Raul1 on 10-Oct-2019
    You're welcome.
Comment from Mia Twysted
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This made me laugh out loud. What a funny pun to include in your piece. I felt like I was sitting beside you while you just opened up and started telling the room a joke.

 Comment Written 10-Oct-2019


reply by the author on 10-Oct-2019
    Thank you so much
Comment from Susan Morritt
Exceptional
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This is a very clever piece of flash fiction. The dry, factual manner in which you began up until the hilarious ending is brilliant. Good luck in the contest!

 Comment Written 10-Oct-2019


reply by the author on 10-Oct-2019
    Many thanks
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
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Ha ha ha, this is my favourite flash fiction, a clever write and you made me smile, a magical post that amused me, well you get my vote here, good luck, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 10-Oct-2019


reply by the author on 10-Oct-2019
    Thanks dolly
Comment from juliaSjames
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This is funny. I really didn't see the twist coming. Well written dribble. I suppose one could say that the priest successfully practised what he preached. Good luck in the voting booth, my friend.

 Comment Written 09-Oct-2019


reply by the author on 10-Oct-2019
    Many thanks. So glad you liked it.
Comment from Cindy Warren
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Haha, I guess that's why there are so many Catholics. Love your little pun, but I think I'd bail too if I had to give a talk on birth control to Catholics.

 Comment Written 08-Oct-2019


reply by the author on 09-Oct-2019
    Many thanks Cindy
Comment from tim dodd
Exceptional
This work has reached the exceptional level

ha ha ha that made me chuckle thank you
I just finished a quiz on pediatric disorders andI needed a
pick me up. You got my vote if there is one.
Thanks again.

 Comment Written 08-Oct-2019


reply by the author on 08-Oct-2019
    There is. Thanks for the great review and stars.
Comment from Mrs. KT
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Hello Mystery Writer!
Good ending! In fact, this flash fiction has potential, but it needs some editing:

The chairs had been arranged in rows
In (in) front of the stage in the church hall
for tonight's lecture by the local priest.
Most of the nearby residents would have attended.
He was to talk on the subject of Catholic birth control, (;)
however (,) he pulled out at the last minute.

Best Wishes!

diane

Editing noted!
Best Wishes!
diane

 Comment Written 08-Oct-2019


reply by the author on 08-Oct-2019
    Thanks for your help
reply by Mrs. KT on 08-Oct-2019
    Did I help?
    That was my intention!
    Please let me know!
    diane
reply by the author on 08-Oct-2019
    Of course. I appreciate it.
reply by the author on 08-Oct-2019
    Of course. I appreciate it.
reply by the author on 08-Oct-2019
    Of course. I appreciate it.
reply by the author on 08-Oct-2019
    Of course. I appreciate it.
Comment from Y. M. Roger
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LOL! Funny little play on words there... be sure to pop back in and remove all the unnecessary breaks in your first and last sentences. Thank you for sharing and best of luck at the polls! :)


rows In front --> rows in front

control, however he --> control; however, he

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 Comment Written 08-Oct-2019


reply by the author on 08-Oct-2019
    Thanks for your help
Comment from Willie P. Smith
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Excellent. I wonder how many readers will get the gist of this poem. It
is very well written, and the punch line at the end is well placed. My mind
isn't that sharp. Very well done.

 Comment Written 08-Oct-2019


reply by the author on 08-Oct-2019
    You are the first reviewer that has got it. Halleluyah. Thanks