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My Nonet for October 9th.

38 total reviews 
Comment from brenda bickers
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Hi Sally,
I find thee strict forms so challenging. You have written this one with ease and it is beautiful read aloud. I love the picture you chose. Just beautiful.
Well done
Brenda.x

 Comment Written 22-Oct-2019


reply by the author on 22-Oct-2019
    Thank you so much, dear Brenda. I'm so glad you liked it. I just checked on this poem, and noticed it somehow got knocked out of its form. I'm glad you called attention to this as I like the form to stay smooth and consistent without any breaks. I like the Nonet centered like a vase. Thanks again for the lovely review and kind compliments. Have a wonderful day, Brenda. Sally xo
Comment from l.raven
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Hi Sally, I am so sorry I don't have a six for you...
I love your poem my sweet friend...He will always be there
for us...keep us in a safe place...just ask...I love your words...and your picture is priceless...precious...so very well written sweet girl...love you...Linda xxoo

 Comment Written 11-Oct-2019


reply by the author on 12-Oct-2019
    Thank you very much for the excellent review and kind comments, dear Linda. It was always so good to see you and to read your sweet reviews.
    Sending you my best today as always,
    Sally xoxo
reply by l.raven on 13-Oct-2019
    your always so welcome sweet girl...and it is always goof to see you...sanding my best back at you...and lots of love...xxoo
Comment from Sugarray77
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This Nonet is so lovely and well written, Sally. I think the reverse form was perfect for the thoughts you wanted to convey. Soooo well done!!

Melissa

 Comment Written 11-Oct-2019


reply by the author on 12-Oct-2019
    Thank you so much for the lovely review and generous six stars, Melissa. Your kind words of affirmation mean the world to me.
    Sending you my best today as always.
    Sally XO
Comment from Katherine M. Kean
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This is a very satisfying nonet poem. It is extremely clever to put the strongest physical structures that could serve as barriers against a storm before the haven offered by religion. This makes both this shelter, and the end of the poem, extremely strong, so the crescendo is a resounding one.

 Comment Written 11-Oct-2019


reply by the author on 12-Oct-2019
    Thank you very much for the excellent review and kind comments. I?m so pleased you enjoyed my Nonet.
    Sending you my best today as always, dear Katherine.
    Sally xo
Comment from Ulla
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Hi Sally, this is such a lovely nonet, and it is so very well written with a great message within. I wish it had been for a contest,because it would have done so very well. Ulla xxx

 Comment Written 11-Oct-2019


reply by the author on 12-Oct-2019
    Thank you, Ulla. I?m so glad you enjoyed my Nonet for the 9th. Feel free to join in any ninth day of the month. (Hint, hint.)

    I think the Nonet is the loveliest poetry form, especially centered.

    Sending you my best today as always
    Sally xoxo
Comment from Roxanna Andrews
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Amen!! There is nothing and no one like our savior. What would I be without Him I cringe to think. This is so well done and counting all those syllables deserves a 6. =} Rox

 Comment Written 11-Oct-2019


reply by the author on 12-Oct-2019
    Dear, thank you. I?m so glad you are in my amen corner, Rox. Your words and six stars means so much to me. Thank you, again. :]
    Sending you my best today as always,
    Sally xo
Comment from Spangle
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This is a precious picture with an eternal message. It is such an uplift to encounter. I love the Psalms, and you have cited a wonderful one that I have called upon and lifted up concerning problems that seemed to be getting close to becoming overwhelming. Relief and peach of mind always arrives without fail. Love your posting! xoxo

 Comment Written 10-Oct-2019


reply by the author on 10-Oct-2019
    Thank you so much for the excellent review and kindest compliments, dear Janet. It is always so good to see your name and read your kind reviews. Sending you my best today as always, Sally xo
reply by Spangle on 10-Oct-2019
    xoxo Janet
reply by Anonymous Member on 10-Oct-2019
    xoxo Janet
Comment from Gail Denham
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And we are hidden under his wings - there we'd like to abide. A good poem to show how much we depend on the shelter of his wings. And I'm thankful he's much higher, wiser - we can pray for our government with that in mind I think, and pray for others in the same way.

 Comment Written 10-Oct-2019


reply by the author on 10-Oct-2019
    Thank you very much for the excellent review and kind comments. Yes, he is the safe refuge for all who put their trust in Him. Sending you my best today as always amd blessings in our Lord Jesus Christ,
    Sally xo
Comment from BeasPeas
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Hi Sally. This is a lovely Nonet, written and illustrated well. I like the premise and feel the same. We don't have to "go" anywhere, just acknowledge him and we know we are safe and not alone. Marilyn

 Comment Written 10-Oct-2019


reply by the author on 10-Oct-2019
    Thank you so much for the excellent review and encouraging comments. It?s always so good to see your name and read your reviews. Sending my best today along with blessings in Christ. Sally xo
reply by BeasPeas on 11-Oct-2019
    Same to you, Sally. :)
Comment from Barb Hensongispsaca
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I am mesmerized by your very well constructed nonet and the addition of the authors notes. I am trying to find the rules for the challenge of nonets, please let me know

 Comment Written 10-Oct-2019


reply by the author on 10-Oct-2019
    Thank you so much, Barb. I appreciate the excellent review and kindest compliments. At the bottom portion of my Nonet, in the author?s note section, is the Nonet criteria. I do these every ninth of the month as a challenge to myself as a new poet. This particular style is lovely to me and is my favorite. Thank you, again.
    Sending you my best today as always,
    Sally Law xo
reply by Barb Hensongispsaca on 10-Oct-2019
    The awdl gynt and the nonet are my favortite forms of expression