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I will return more beautiful than before

54 total reviews 
Comment from Susan X Smith
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This is an interesting personification of a tree. The meter meets the specifications outlined in the writing prompt. The poem is well written. Thanks for sharing.

 Comment Written 10-Oct-2019


reply by the author on 11-Oct-2019
    Thanks Susan. I appreciate your thoughtful and encouraging comments along with the excellent review. Bless you!
Comment from NickieT
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I appreciate how this piece makes me think. The idea of glory being stripped away to leave vulnerability and nakedness in its place makes me wonder what the clothing of the last line will be comprised of.

 Comment Written 10-Oct-2019


reply by the author on 11-Oct-2019
    It will be even greater than the former glory. I'm glad that you like it and approve. Thank you for sharing your supportive and thoughtful comments along with the excellent review. Bless you!
Comment from Nowhereman1
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Very well written poem. You follow the structure of the poem and create a interesting narrative with out needing a lot of words. Thank you for sharing.

 Comment Written 10-Oct-2019


reply by the author on 11-Oct-2019
    Thank you kindly! I appreciate your encouraging and thoughtful comments along with the excellent review. Bless you!
Comment from Hitcher
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This one could have spiritual or moral undertones as well as describing the power of the seasons. The Transformation of the soul, the strength of men or the beauty of nature. Food for thought and thought provoking... Nice!

 Comment Written 10-Oct-2019


reply by the author on 11-Oct-2019
    Thank you Hitcher! I'm glad that you approve and it spoke to you. Thanks for sharing your thoughtful and supportive comments along with the excellent review. Bless you!
Comment from djeckert
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A great poem, and congrats on the win. I love Stark tree pictures ,so I just had to check out your write. Well done, with lots to say. God surely Blesses.

 Comment Written 10-Oct-2019


reply by the author on 11-Oct-2019
    God indeed does truly bless! I thank you for the congratulations, the very kind and encouraging comments along with the excellent review. Bless you!
Comment from Mastery
Exceptional
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Excellent poetry here, Jeff. I see you won the contest and rightly so. Good, well thought out poem with a great last line impact:

"I'll be clothed again......:

Bless you, my friend. : ) Bob

 Comment Written 10-Oct-2019


reply by the author on 11-Oct-2019
    Thank you kindly sir! Your encouraging and supportive comments are always heartwarming and greatly appreciated. Also, many, many thanks for the exceptional review. I hope to continue to write work worthy of such reviews. Bless you my friend!
reply by Mastery on 15-Oct-2019
    Bless you Jeff. : ) Bob
Comment from Teri7
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This is a very well written poem that has a good meaning to it spiritually. You used very good descriptive words and very nice imagery from the art work you chose. When we are stripped of our glory and we are standing before the Lord naked He can clothe us again in His righteousness. I enjoyed reading and reviewing this, Blessings, Teri

 Comment Written 10-Oct-2019


reply by the author on 11-Oct-2019
    Thank you Teri! That's exactly right! I appreciate your insightful and thought provoking comments along with the excellent review. Bless you!
Comment from songlines
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I really liked this piece. It can be subject to interpretation - which I always think is clever, but for me it has an understanding of hope in adversity. I look forward to reading more of your work.

 Comment Written 10-Oct-2019


reply by the author on 11-Oct-2019
    Thank you kindly! I'm so glad you liked it. I appreciate you sharing your thoughtful and supportive comments along with the excellent review. Bless you!
Comment from Bill Schott
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This 5-7-5, Exposed, has the right set up and allows the noble tree to submit the obvious reality and announce the coming return of its leafy splendor.

 Comment Written 10-Oct-2019


reply by the author on 11-Oct-2019
    Thank you sir! I'm so glad that you approve. I appreciate your kind and encouraging comments along with the excellent review. Bless you!
Comment from Willosa
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Well executed and highly descriptive using just these few words. The image fits perfectly and I like that although you are describing the magnificent tree there are many parallels that may be drawn by the reader.

 Comment Written 10-Oct-2019


reply by the author on 11-Oct-2019
    Thank you. Your insightful, encouraging, and thoughtful comments along with the excellent review are greatly appreciated. Bless you!