Maiden voyage
Exhilarating, quiet floating in air without a care.53 total reviews
Comment from Richard Van Kirk
Your poem is well done. I felt, I heard, I saw. I became part of the crew as I sailed with you through the air on an autumn evening. I felt the balloon as it raised, then lowered at its landing spot. I especially liked: "The collision of autumnal colors,/Fading away from the clutch of summer" a beautiful metaphor. Thank you and good luck
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2019
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Your poem is well done. I felt, I heard, I saw. I became part of the crew as I sailed with you through the air on an autumn evening. I felt the balloon as it raised, then lowered at its landing spot. I especially liked: "The collision of autumnal colors,/Fading away from the clutch of summer" a beautiful metaphor. Thank you and good luck
Comment Written 06-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2019
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Thank you very, very much!
Comment from Cindy Warren
That looks like fun. I'd like to try it one of these days. I love airplanes, so why not a hot air balloon? You'd get a much better view. Love the picture.
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2019
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That looks like fun. I'd like to try it one of these days. I love airplanes, so why not a hot air balloon? You'd get a much better view. Love the picture.
Comment Written 06-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2019
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Thank you very, very much!
Comment from Y. M. Roger
What a wonderful free verse offering that so eloquently and almost excitingly has the reader join the hot air balloon ride.... think you've got just the right feel to each of the verses so that the reader can keep up with the images yet feel that the rhythm is consistent and flowing... :) :) Thanx for sharing! ;) Yvette
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reply by the author on 06-Oct-2019
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What a wonderful free verse offering that so eloquently and almost excitingly has the reader join the hot air balloon ride.... think you've got just the right feel to each of the verses so that the reader can keep up with the images yet feel that the rhythm is consistent and flowing... :) :) Thanx for sharing! ;) Yvette
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Comment Written 06-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2019
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Thank you very, very much!
