Comment from the13thpoet

Excellent

Hello again Cindy, hope your Thursday is going well. I think I may have read the last two chapters out of order. That being said, I enjoyed this chapter as well. I found it just as engaging and I may have enjoyed it a little more. Great job!

 Comment Written 10-Oct-2019

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reply by the author on 10-Oct-2019

Thanks. Glad you enjoyed it. I think if you reversed the chapters you'd still be able to sort it out. Hope you will stay tuned for more.

Comment from BeasPeas

Excellent

Hi Cindy. This is a fascinating and well written chapter to your story. Excellent descriptions and dialogue. Good detail which backs up your story line. Marilyn

 Comment Written 09-Oct-2019

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reply by the author on 10-Oct-2019

Thanks, I'm so glad you are enjoying it.

Comment from Melonie Kirchoff

Excellent

Great chapter! I feel like I'm invested in this story now and want to know where Duane came from. Good job with the dialogue and interesting story line. Keep it up!

 Comment Written 09-Oct-2019

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reply by the author on 09-Oct-2019

Thanks. Duane has his reasons for not wanting to say who he is.

Comment from Mabaker

Excellent

This is a fine chapter I would like the name of the proceeding chapters so I can catch up. I'm a great dragon fan and wrote a story about a blue dragon. I think yours will be better.

 Comment Written 07-Oct-2019

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reply by the author on 08-Oct-2019

Thanks. I hope you will enjoy catching up. The previous chapters should be available in my portfolio.

Comment from Adri7enne

Excellent

A page is a darn nice touch at this point in the story. Poor Aaron is being pulled every which way. Help is necessary. Nice touch. I'm happy to follow along and see how you and Aaron cope with your clutch of dragons. It's a charming story.

 Comment Written 07-Oct-2019

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reply by the author on 07-Oct-2019

Thanks. Yep, Aaron has his hands full.

Comment from Bill Pinder

Excellent

I appreciate this chapter in your book about the dragons. You have got a great book going. I look forward to the next chapter with the adventure of the boy, the dragons and his newly found page.
Bill

 Comment Written 07-Oct-2019

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reply by the author on 07-Oct-2019

Thanks. I just posted the next chapter.

Comment from Iza Deleanu

Excellent

Our little hero got another human helping hand, that must be good for the little team of dragons. I like how the boy said that before he was found he was dead. Thank you for sharing and waiting for the next chapter.

 Comment Written 07-Oct-2019

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reply by the author on 07-Oct-2019

Thanks. Obviously he wasn't dead, but he could have been. I thought Aaron needed some help, and somebody to talk to.

Comment from Mistydawn

Excellent

That was quick thinking of Aaron doing what he did. I hope the pink dragon is right and the boy doesn't betray him. Otherwise, Aaron might be in a world of hurt. The story is very well-written, interesting start to finish. I look forward to reading more.

 Comment Written 07-Oct-2019

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reply by the author on 07-Oct-2019

Thanks. Yes, Aaron could be in trouble, but the dragon and the witch are pretty clever. He has his own reasons for not running to the king.

Comment from Diana L Crawford

Excellent

Thank you for not making us wait too long for the next chapter! So glad he has a companion now. And it is obviously a godsend for "Duane" too. Purple is my favorite color so excited to see how this hatching unfolds!! xoxo

 Comment Written 06-Oct-2019

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reply by the author on 06-Oct-2019

Thanks. I thought Aaron needed a little help, and someone to talk to besides his horse.

reply by Diana L Crawford on 06-Oct-2019

Yes I agree! LoL!

Comment from damommy

Excellent

I'm so glad for both Aaron and Duane to come together. They both need someone. The dragons seem to be accepting him. Another dragon on the way, and purple. I'm eager to see what this one will be able to do.

 Comment Written 06-Oct-2019

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reply by the author on 06-Oct-2019

Thanks. Yes, they need each other and I need someone for Aaron to talk to besides his horse! And the dragons, of course.