Upon the Stormy Deep
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Comment from Raul1
The ship for sure sailed through the rough seas. I like that you stayed with one tense in this story. This is past tense. I have enjoyed reading this story. Excellent work! Good luck in the contest!
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The ship for sure sailed through the rough seas. I like that you stayed with one tense in this story. This is past tense. I have enjoyed reading this story. Excellent work! Good luck in the contest!
Comment Written 08-Oct-2019
Comment from Teri7
This is a very well written Dribble Flash Fiction story you have penned for the contest. You used very good and amazing descriptive words with lovely imagery from the art work you chose. Best wishes in the contest. Blessings, Teri
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This is a very well written Dribble Flash Fiction story you have penned for the contest. You used very good and amazing descriptive words with lovely imagery from the art work you chose. Best wishes in the contest. Blessings, Teri
Comment Written 08-Oct-2019
Comment from Rikki66
Good luck in the contest. The pirates seem to have more to worry about than tentacles rising from the sea. The optimistic pirate would say the storm will probably kill us anyway.
lxvi
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Good luck in the contest. The pirates seem to have more to worry about than tentacles rising from the sea. The optimistic pirate would say the storm will probably kill us anyway.
lxvi
Comment Written 08-Oct-2019
Comment from Sally Law
A good entry for the dribble flash fiction, Miranda. You told your story well, and all within the strict criteria for the contest. Your artwork was the perfect choice.
Sending you my best today and for the upcoming contest,
Sally xo
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A good entry for the dribble flash fiction, Miranda. You told your story well, and all within the strict criteria for the contest. Your artwork was the perfect choice.
Sending you my best today and for the upcoming contest,
Sally xo
Comment Written 08-Oct-2019
Comment from Nowhereman1
Very well written flash fiction. You did a great job painting the story with your words. It was easy to follow and entertaining. Thank you for sharing.
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Very well written flash fiction. You did a great job painting the story with your words. It was easy to follow and entertaining. Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 08-Oct-2019
Comment from dmt1967
The words in the story painted a picture that was spine tingling and gruesome. The picture fitted into the story but, in my opinion, there was no need for it. Good luck in the contest and thank you for sharing.
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The words in the story painted a picture that was spine tingling and gruesome. The picture fitted into the story but, in my opinion, there was no need for it. Good luck in the contest and thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 08-Oct-2019
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written dribble flash fiction about the monstrous creatures deep down in the ocean that show their tentacles during stormy weather and raging storms.
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A very well-written dribble flash fiction about the monstrous creatures deep down in the ocean that show their tentacles during stormy weather and raging storms.
Comment Written 08-Oct-2019
Comment from Willosa
Your words vividly painted the picture. Even if you had not included the illustration this is exactly what I saw as I read it. A great example of dribble flash fiction, it left me wanting more of the story, what happens next?
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Your words vividly painted the picture. Even if you had not included the illustration this is exactly what I saw as I read it. A great example of dribble flash fiction, it left me wanting more of the story, what happens next?
Comment Written 08-Oct-2019
Comment from brenda bickers
Oh my goodness,
I want to read more. What a great descriptive write in so few words.
If this was a precursor to the start of a book I would be snuggled up reading it by now.
Well done.
Brenda.x
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Oh my goodness,
I want to read more. What a great descriptive write in so few words.
If this was a precursor to the start of a book I would be snuggled up reading it by now.
Well done.
Brenda.x
Comment Written 08-Oct-2019
Comment from patcelaw
This is a very well written Dribble Flash Fiction. I wish you the very best in the contest, Many your ship pf life always sail on calm seas,
Patricia
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This is a very well written Dribble Flash Fiction. I wish you the very best in the contest, Many your ship pf life always sail on calm seas,
Patricia
Comment Written 08-Oct-2019
