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Comment from Mystic Angel 7777
This is beautifully penned, Ricky. The imagery is delightful and uplifting. I had to laugh about there being beer is heaven, but I guess that's not so farfetched since it was monks who invented it. Well done and thank you very much for sharing it.
reply by the author on 04-Oct-2019
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This is beautifully penned, Ricky. The imagery is delightful and uplifting. I had to laugh about there being beer is heaven, but I guess that's not so farfetched since it was monks who invented it. Well done and thank you very much for sharing it.
Comment Written 04-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 04-Oct-2019
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the best beer I ever tasted was like champagne beer in a bar in Washington DC when I was competing with international audio poetry in 2005.
I like the thing that the monks originally created beer so beer is religious?
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As for Heaven?
I'm still working on that!
Thanks Angel,
Ricky
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
Nice, you have finished the chapter in a word, fantastic, I do appreciate and understand your current situation; you think it is self-explanatory that is why you have given no further expression, though I think one word is not expressive; well said, well done; visit my profile.
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reply by the author on 04-Oct-2019
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Nice, you have finished the chapter in a word, fantastic, I do appreciate and understand your current situation; you think it is self-explanatory that is why you have given no further expression, though I think one word is not expressive; well said, well done; visit my profile.
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Comment Written 04-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 04-Oct-2019
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Sorry about that Al Creator but it is created now.
Ricky
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
The tragic circumstances of your sonâ??s death has prompted you to write much about this experience and from your heart, buying a new set of wings is a good idea for you Ricky, best regards to you, love Dolly x
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The tragic circumstances of your sonâ??s death has prompted you to write much about this experience and from your heart, buying a new set of wings is a good idea for you Ricky, best regards to you, love Dolly x
Comment Written 04-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 04-Oct-2019
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Done Dolly.
Ricky.
Heavenly?