Comment from Bill Pinder

Excellent

Another excellent chapter in your fanciful tale about the dragons and the dangers they face in that kingdom. I like how you continue to develop the individual dragons and their differences. Bill

 Comment Written 04-Oct-2019

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reply by the author on 04-Oct-2019

Thanks. I'm so glad you're still enjoying it.

Comment from Sylvia Page

Exceptional

No wonder the red dragon was so determined to attack the pink dragon even before it hatched. It knew that the pink sibling would be the one to control it. Love the way you write about them and looking forward to following the story.
I consider myself lucky with my flightless dragons that live in my garden as they keep pests under control. The water monitor is the rough one as it loves to eat my best looking Koi carp!
Best,

 Comment Written 04-Oct-2019

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reply by the author on 04-Oct-2019

Thanks for the six! I agree, you are lucky to have them in your garden. You must live someplace warm. We don't have many reptiles in this my of the world.

Comment from Diana L Crawford

Excellent

Your imagination is so refreshing! I love each and every dragon! I can't wait to see how they develop. Glad the pink one has gotten the fire starter under control! I love how each has its own unique personality and also the concept of determining later which sex to become! So creative! xoxo

 Comment Written 03-Oct-2019

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reply by the author on 04-Oct-2019

Thanks. People do like to tell me I have a wild imagination. Might as well put it to good use. Glad you're enjoying the story.

reply by Diana L Crawford on 04-Oct-2019

write on you wild woman, you! LOL!

Comment from Nowhereman1

Excellent

This was a very well written story. My daughter loves dragons and she would love to hear more about the pink dragon. Thank you for sharing

 Comment Written 02-Oct-2019

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reply by the author on 02-Oct-2019

Thanks. More should be coming later tonight.

Comment from Iza Deleanu

Excellent

Man your story is wrapping up so beautifully. The story has finece, and nothing is forced into the narrative. My favorite is still the water dragon. Thank you for sharing yet another amazing chapter.

 Comment Written 01-Oct-2019

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reply by the author on 02-Oct-2019

Thanks. These wonderful reviews keep me motivated to keep writing it.

Comment from Gert sherwood

Excellent

Hello Cindy Warren

You know with out a doubt how to keep us readers desiring-to read to keep a reader desiring to keep reading your fiction story about the eggs hatching and telling us each of the dargons personality, so far are great.

Gert

 Comment Written 01-Oct-2019

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reply by the author on 02-Oct-2019

Thanks. Your reviews keep me motivated to keep writing it.

reply by Gert sherwood on 02-Oct-2019

You are welcome Cindy Warren
Gert

Comment from Adri7enne

Exceptional

Again, you introduce us to another interesting character in the green dragon. A very creative, imaginative write. With such interesting dragon characters, we can just wait to see what happens to the humans while we adjust to so many new dragons in the world. Wish we had something like that these days. The world could use a few stabilizing influences. Well done, Cindy.

 Comment Written 01-Oct-2019

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reply by the author on 01-Oct-2019

Thanks for the six!. Yes, the world needs all the help it can get. Too bad I can't bring them from the page into reality.

Comment from Jannypan (Jan)

Excellent

I enjoyed your chapter, Cindy. Good job with the dialogue with the dragons. It makes for some interesting reading. The last little dragon seemed so cute. The red one sure is feisty. I like how you emphasize about Aaron listening to the water dragon Thanks for sharing. Respectfully with Love, Jan.

The red one jumped of (off)

 Comment Written 01-Oct-2019

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reply by the author on 01-Oct-2019

Thanks. I'm so glad you're still enjoying the story. That little red one has turned out to be a favorite.

Comment from damommy

Excellent

Ha! Aaron called the red dragon's bluff. She may turn out to be sweet once she realizes no one's threatening her. It will be said when Aaron has to let them go, but I suspect there will be many adventures before then.

 Comment Written 01-Oct-2019

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reply by the author on 01-Oct-2019

Thanks. The red dragon is still plenty feisty, but the dunking in the pail has taken her down a notch.

Comment from juliaSjames

Excellent

So the sassy red dragon knows she's met her match. I like the device of using the pink dragon to pass on dragon lore to Aaron.

Another well written chapter, Cindy.

Blessings Julia

 Comment Written 01-Oct-2019

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reply by the author on 01-Oct-2019

Thanks. That red one still has plenty of sass.