You tell me, are you?
The mirror talks back...42 total reviews
Comment from Nowhereman1
Very well written poem. I like the structure and the style was very easy to read and understand. Thanks for sharing this look at who you are
reply by the author on 01-Oct-2019
Very well written poem. I like the structure and the style was very easy to read and understand. Thanks for sharing this look at who you are
Comment Written 01-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 01-Oct-2019
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thank you..
Comment from Bill Schott
This free verse poem, You Tell Me, Are You?, seems to mine the depths of the man in the mirror. One can see that you give him the benefit of a doubt. Nice reflection on you.
reply by the author on 01-Oct-2019
This free verse poem, You Tell Me, Are You?, seems to mine the depths of the man in the mirror. One can see that you give him the benefit of a doubt. Nice reflection on you.
Comment Written 01-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 01-Oct-2019
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thanks Bill...
Comment from aanneee
I like the YOU wriite by you and it reads actually, whether really you or not a truthful piece at looking at oneself. YOU sound like a really okay YOU. Thanks for the read...Dinah
reply by the author on 01-Oct-2019
I like the YOU wriite by you and it reads actually, whether really you or not a truthful piece at looking at oneself. YOU sound like a really okay YOU. Thanks for the read...Dinah
Comment Written 01-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 01-Oct-2019
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thanks Dinah, the old trick try it someone --look in a mirror close your right eye and ask yourself a question or make a statement about yourself. Then do the same thing with your left eye. Notice your feelings.....
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I myself have told others to talk to themselves whilst looking in a mirror, I myself have used that tip myself many times over many years. I will try with the eyes next time I do it...thank you.
Comment from Susan X Smith
This cute poem is about many things but ends up being about the art of writing. It is an excellent contest entry. The picture you chose illustrates the words very well.
reply by the author on 01-Oct-2019
This cute poem is about many things but ends up being about the art of writing. It is an excellent contest entry. The picture you chose illustrates the words very well.
Comment Written 01-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 01-Oct-2019
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Thank you Susan..
Comment from papa55mike
I can sling those words too. My problem is, they don't make much sense. I love this well-written little bit of whimsy and the picture is perfect.
Good luck in the contest!
Have a great day, and God bless.
mike
reply by the author on 01-Oct-2019
I can sling those words too. My problem is, they don't make much sense. I love this well-written little bit of whimsy and the picture is perfect.
Good luck in the contest!
Have a great day, and God bless.
mike
Comment Written 01-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 01-Oct-2019
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Thank you so much Mike
Comment from Boogienights
You sound fascinating. A great fellow indeed, and a poet, which is always a plus. I love your free verse description of yourself, it is done very nicely. A like rhyme best, but keep those words falling to the page and I'll be sure to read them. :)
reply by the author on 01-Oct-2019
You sound fascinating. A great fellow indeed, and a poet, which is always a plus. I love your free verse description of yourself, it is done very nicely. A like rhyme best, but keep those words falling to the page and I'll be sure to read them. :)
Comment Written 01-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 01-Oct-2019
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Thanks, you are so very kind...
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
I enjoyed your contest entry, Mystery Author. Good job with the prompt. Your lines flow smoothly with good rhymes and details. Thanks for sharing and best wishes. Respectfully with Love, Jan.
reply by the author on 01-Oct-2019
I enjoyed your contest entry, Mystery Author. Good job with the prompt. Your lines flow smoothly with good rhymes and details. Thanks for sharing and best wishes. Respectfully with Love, Jan.
Comment Written 01-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 01-Oct-2019
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thank you, my poet friend.
Comment from dmt1967
Oh, you are() person quick to blush (a)
This is a well written poem and I loved the way it flowed. Thank you for sharing and good luck in the contest,
reply by the author on 01-Oct-2019
Oh, you are() person quick to blush (a)
This is a well written poem and I loved the way it flowed. Thank you for sharing and good luck in the contest,
Comment Written 01-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 01-Oct-2019
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thank you for the good wishes
Comment from Ben Colder
Now, this is something to think about. The poet places the reader in front of the realness of life. I find no mistakes and wish the poet the best in the contest.
reply by the author on 01-Oct-2019
Now, this is something to think about. The poet places the reader in front of the realness of life. I find no mistakes and wish the poet the best in the contest.
Comment Written 01-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 01-Oct-2019
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Thank you Ben
Comment from dragonpoet
This tells of a person who is questioning if what is said about him/her is true. Or maybe just realizing he/she is hiding true feelings behind a mask.
You followed the prompt well.
Good luck in the contest. Keep writing
drgonpoet
reply by the author on 01-Oct-2019
This tells of a person who is questioning if what is said about him/her is true. Or maybe just realizing he/she is hiding true feelings behind a mask.
You followed the prompt well.
Good luck in the contest. Keep writing
drgonpoet
Comment Written 01-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 01-Oct-2019
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Thank you
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Don't mention it. It's what we are here to do.
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