You tell me, are you?
The mirror talks back...42 total reviews
Comment from Sandra Ludwick
Thank you for sharing your thoughts through your poem. I enjoyed reading it very much, and I felt that you probably described yourself very well. Good luck.
reply by the author on 05-Oct-2019
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Thank you for sharing your thoughts through your poem. I enjoyed reading it very much, and I felt that you probably described yourself very well. Good luck.
Comment Written 05-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 05-Oct-2019
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Thank you...
Comment from rjuselius
this is a brilliant example of this format dear anonymous! I like the subtle humor. I think this would do well.
thank you for sharing!
blessings and a super squeeze!
Rebekka x
reply by the author on 03-Oct-2019
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this is a brilliant example of this format dear anonymous! I like the subtle humor. I think this would do well.
thank you for sharing!
blessings and a super squeeze!
Rebekka x
Comment Written 03-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 03-Oct-2019
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Thank you Rebekah!
Comment from Sallyo
I'd tell the mirror to go and bag its head! But never mind, you (the narrator) can shut that mirror up any old time. Just turn its face to the wall. Oh, petty are you? You bet!
reply by the author on 03-Oct-2019
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I'd tell the mirror to go and bag its head! But never mind, you (the narrator) can shut that mirror up any old time. Just turn its face to the wall. Oh, petty are you? You bet!
Comment Written 03-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 03-Oct-2019
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The true human condition, the yin and yang of duality. :)
Comment from royowen
Well that's humour, as a rhymer I can't help myself, on the odd time I've tried to "free verse" a poem, the desire to rhyme is overwhelming, and I do it anyway. I like the way you laugh at yourself here, you've done a smack up job in this "oh you are, are you" contest, well done, blessings, Roy
reply by the author on 02-Oct-2019
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Well that's humour, as a rhymer I can't help myself, on the odd time I've tried to "free verse" a poem, the desire to rhyme is overwhelming, and I do it anyway. I like the way you laugh at yourself here, you've done a smack up job in this "oh you are, are you" contest, well done, blessings, Roy
Comment Written 02-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 02-Oct-2019
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Thank you Roy
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A pleasure
Comment from Elaine Chiodi
An excellent description of yourself, physically, mentally and capably. The image depicts more sides to you than you're telling us. In another poem perhaps? I hope so.
I'm mostly a rhyming poet, but I really enjoyed your free verse. It fit the subject well. good luck in the contest... ...ec
reply by the author on 02-Oct-2019
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An excellent description of yourself, physically, mentally and capably. The image depicts more sides to you than you're telling us. In another poem perhaps? I hope so.
I'm mostly a rhyming poet, but I really enjoyed your free verse. It fit the subject well. good luck in the contest... ...ec
Comment Written 02-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 02-Oct-2019
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Thank
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You're welcome
Comment from Wabigoon
You seem a bit more hard on yourself than, say, taking a humorous look. Or, that's how the poem comes across to me. Congratulation for writing the poem, though -- I don't think I would ever write such a poem though they are all looks in the mirror of one sort of other, eh?
Thanks
Wabigoon/Jeff
reply by the author on 02-Oct-2019
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You seem a bit more hard on yourself than, say, taking a humorous look. Or, that's how the poem comes across to me. Congratulation for writing the poem, though -- I don't think I would ever write such a poem though they are all looks in the mirror of one sort of other, eh?
Thanks
Wabigoon/Jeff
Comment Written 02-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 02-Oct-2019
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Thanks Jeff I?m retired my ego is in coat check.
Comment from kahpot
This is a very intriguing free verse poem, I can read of a very busy life even for one who is retired, with a great talent and need to write, very well written and best wishes for your contest****kahpot
reply by the author on 02-Oct-2019
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This is a very intriguing free verse poem, I can read of a very busy life even for one who is retired, with a great talent and need to write, very well written and best wishes for your contest****kahpot
Comment Written 01-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 02-Oct-2019
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Thank you
Comment from Gloria ....
Neat contest idea. You have managed to fill us in on quite of bit of the essential you that you keep under wraps in public. lol.
Great job with this and the artwork with all the appropriate cultural logos helps with the interpretation.
Much luck to you in the booths.
Gloria
reply by the author on 02-Oct-2019
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Neat contest idea. You have managed to fill us in on quite of bit of the essential you that you keep under wraps in public. lol.
Great job with this and the artwork with all the appropriate cultural logos helps with the interpretation.
Much luck to you in the booths.
Gloria
Comment Written 01-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 02-Oct-2019
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Thank you Gloria
Comment from Raul1
I like how you structured this poem. I think that this poem has a chance of winning the contest! Excellent work! No grammatical errors. Nice work. Good luck in the contest!
reply by the author on 02-Oct-2019
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I like how you structured this poem. I think that this poem has a chance of winning the contest! Excellent work! No grammatical errors. Nice work. Good luck in the contest!
Comment Written 01-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 02-Oct-2019
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Thank you
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You're welcome
Comment from evesayshi
In my opinion, q sterling write, in light of the contest prompt requirements - an admirable effort in smooth flow and random rhyme. Best of luck in the contest...
reply by the author on 01-Oct-2019
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In my opinion, q sterling write, in light of the contest prompt requirements - an admirable effort in smooth flow and random rhyme. Best of luck in the contest...
Comment Written 01-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 01-Oct-2019
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I am humbled by your gracious comments.
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You are so welcome - once again, my best wishes in the contest...Eve
