Comment from Gert sherwood

Excellent

Hello Ricky
It was a well told true story about Jason died.
And the way you told your sad story of what caused the accident, must of been difficult to write.

Gert

 Comment Written 29-Sep-2019

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reply by the author on 30-Sep-2019

Not difficult but soothing.
Journaling helps.
The more the merrier.
Thanks,
Doctor Ricky 1024

reply by Gert sherwood on 30-Sep-2019

You are so right Ricky1024
I feel the same way, when I tell others of my dismays, yes I feel re-leaved.
Gert

Comment from Mystic Angel 7777

Excellent

You describe the horrors of that fateful night vividly allowing the reader to experience your grief an pain right along with you. Well done and thank you very much for sharing it.

 Comment Written 29-Sep-2019

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reply by the author on 29-Sep-2019

Thanks ever so much for me and Jay.
Ricky

Comment from Alex Rosel

Excellent

What a harrowing piece of non-fiction.

Here are a couple of points you might like to consider:

'His Heart?' -- I got confused who is supposed to be saying this.
If it's the doctor, then I'd format it as:
'Yes, Nurse? His Heart?'
If it's the nurse then I'd format it as:
'His Heart? His only Heart Doctor Williams?'
If it's someone else, then I think that person needs to be identified.

"It was doing a hundred.miles an hour." -- Unbelievable any driver can think this is what constitutes a "joy ride"! BTW, I'd omit the period after "a hundred".

 Comment Written 29-Sep-2019

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reply by the author on 29-Sep-2019

Thanks Alex for your review and suggestions.
Doctor Ricky 1024

Comment from dejohnsrld (Debbie)

Excellent

This is such a tragic story. I didn't know you had a daughter. How has she coped with all of this? I hope you keep encouraging organ donation, my friend~Debbie

 Comment Written 29-Sep-2019

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reply by the author on 29-Sep-2019

Have four