The Two of Me
Viewing comments for Chapter 46 "A Soul's Glow?"Chochee Medina Life and Times
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Comment from lyenochka
Thanks for sharing this uplifting spiritual message in your loop poem! You're so right that when a lost soul becomes a repentant soul who knows the Light, he/she glows and shines out in the darkness!
reply by the author on 28-Sep-2019
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Thanks for sharing this uplifting spiritual message in your loop poem! You're so right that when a lost soul becomes a repentant soul who knows the Light, he/she glows and shines out in the darkness!
Comment Written 28-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 28-Sep-2019
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Thank you for the time to read and the Great reviewof this poem. Blessings to you.
Comment from dejohnsrld (Debbie)
Below Lost Souls Walk in Sins Vast Darkness! (sin's) This is an excellent loop poem, my friend. I was halfway through it before I realized it was a loop poem because it flowed together so well. The ones that are obviously loop poems usually sound forced. Best wishes in the contest, my friend~Debbie
reply by the author on 27-Sep-2019
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Below Lost Souls Walk in Sins Vast Darkness! (sin's) This is an excellent loop poem, my friend. I was halfway through it before I realized it was a loop poem because it flowed together so well. The ones that are obviously loop poems usually sound forced. Best wishes in the contest, my friend~Debbie
Comment Written 27-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 27-Sep-2019
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Thank you for the review and compliments, I appreciate your help on the punctuation it's still the thing I struggle with since my strokes. Blessings to You for your valued time to review.
Comment from Y. M. Roger
What a wonderful offering of wisdom and simple daily direction -- and that pic with your presentation is so cool! ;) :) This is an awesome loop, sir -- smooth and not at all 'contrived'.... thank you for sharing! ;)
Be sure to pop back in there and add an apostrophe to your title:
A Soul's Glow?
reply by the author on 27-Sep-2019
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What a wonderful offering of wisdom and simple daily direction -- and that pic with your presentation is so cool! ;) :) This is an awesome loop, sir -- smooth and not at all 'contrived'.... thank you for sharing! ;)
Be sure to pop back in there and add an apostrophe to your title:
A Soul's Glow?
Comment Written 27-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 27-Sep-2019
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Thank you for review and positive encouragement. I do struggle with remembering proper punctuation since my strokes. God's Blessings to you for your time and assistance.