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Little Good Morning Quotes

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Greet each morning with entusiasm and expectation

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Comment from LisaMay
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I like the picture you have chosen. Waking to sunshine when there is work to go to must be frustrating for some workers - stuck inside high-rise offices away from nature.

 Comment Written 19-Sep-2019


reply by the author on 24-Sep-2019
    Thank you for your kind comments and feedback. I always appreciate your time to read and review my work.

    Have a beautiful day
    Sandra
Comment from Janice Canerdy
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Your well-written 5-7-5 describes how the sun acts like a wake-up call, telling people it is time to get out of the bed and go about the day, working.

 Comment Written 19-Sep-2019


reply by the author on 24-Sep-2019
    Thank you for your kind comments and feedback. I always appreciate your time to read and review my work.

    Have a beautiful day
    Sandra
Comment from Pearl Edwards
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Oh yes, the sunrise wakes all of us, the city workers or the country folk. It's always a good thing to wake up to a brand new day.
cheers to you Sandra,
valda

 Comment Written 19-Sep-2019


reply by the author on 24-Sep-2019
    Thank you for your kind comments and feedback. I always appreciate your time to read and review my work.

    Have a beautiful day
    Sandra
Comment from lyenochka
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Ah, your morning poem is about the city this time. Interesting how the morning starts differently in the country vs. in the city where everyone wakes up more or less about the same time causing traffic problems.

 Comment Written 18-Sep-2019


reply by the author on 24-Sep-2019
    Thank you for your kind comments and feedback. I always appreciate your time to read and review my work.

    Have a beautiful day
    Sandra
Comment from Joan E.
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It is so much better to wake up to the sunrise rather than the alarm clock, especially when you need to go to work! I very much liked the reinforcing picture you selected. Cheers- Joan

 Comment Written 18-Sep-2019


reply by the author on 24-Sep-2019
    Thank you for your kind comments and feedback. I always appreciate your time to read and review my work.

    Have a beautiful day
    Sandra
Comment from Teri7
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Sandra, This is a very well written 5-7-5 poem about the city sunrise that wakes everyone up. You used very good descriptive words and very good imagery from the art work you chose. love and blessings, Teri

 Comment Written 18-Sep-2019


reply by the author on 20-Sep-2019
    Thank you for the kind comments and feedback.

    Have a great weekend,
    Sandra.
Comment from CrystieCookie999
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Delightful 'w' alliteration in second line with 'wakes' and 'workers' there. I think this has a universality in its tone and subject. Nice photo choice. Lately I have been trying to get up with the sun, too! Not sure what to improve on.

 Comment Written 18-Sep-2019


reply by the author on 20-Sep-2019
    Thank you for the kind comments and feedback.

    Have a great weekend,
    Sandra.
Comment from BeasPeas
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Very good, Sandra. The hustle and bustle of the city each day starts with each sunrise. Your 5-7-5 depicts that journey of work and play. We never know what the day will hold for us. Marilyn

 Comment Written 18-Sep-2019


reply by the author on 20-Sep-2019
    Thank you for the kind comments and feedback.

    Have a great weekend,
    Sandra.
Comment from Sallyo
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That's a rather different topic! Still the good morning cheer, but now we're in a city rather than focused on flowers and the open air. Nice change of pace.

 Comment Written 18-Sep-2019


reply by the author on 20-Sep-2019
    Thank you for the kind comments and feedback.

    Have a great weekend,
    Sandra.
Comment from Bill Pinder
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Thanks for sharing this poem about the sunrise waking up everyone to start a new day. I think the sunrise is a Great way for God to say good morning to us each new day. Have a great day!
Bill

 Comment Written 18-Sep-2019


reply by the author on 20-Sep-2019
    Thank you for the kind comments and feedback.

    Have a great weekend,
    Sandra.