Love Life
Live life as if you meant it.31 total reviews
Comment from kiwigirl2821
Hello J I really like this style of poetry. I must try one. I love the concept of this one you have written but, then I'm a sucker for love in any format. Favorite line:
"...roll the dice, take a chance."
Yeah I think that way too. Nothing to offer as everything here is really great to read and visualize. Good luck.
xoxo Kiwi
reply by the author on 20-Sep-2019
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Hello J I really like this style of poetry. I must try one. I love the concept of this one you have written but, then I'm a sucker for love in any format. Favorite line:
"...roll the dice, take a chance."
Yeah I think that way too. Nothing to offer as everything here is really great to read and visualize. Good luck.
xoxo Kiwi
Comment Written 20-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 20-Sep-2019
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Your comments are well received, thank you.
Comment from LisaMay
Your poem finds an appreciative audience with me... you are preaching to the converted as I am someone who grabs life by the throat (in a nice way, not violently). So many people miss exciting opportunities by playing it safe all the time... but then, if they are happy that way, why should we criticize? I prefer to be a dancing explorer, like in your energetic poem.
reply by the author on 20-Sep-2019
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Your poem finds an appreciative audience with me... you are preaching to the converted as I am someone who grabs life by the throat (in a nice way, not violently). So many people miss exciting opportunities by playing it safe all the time... but then, if they are happy that way, why should we criticize? I prefer to be a dancing explorer, like in your energetic poem.
Comment Written 19-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 20-Sep-2019
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My sincere thanks for your kind review and comments. I am so pleased that you fill your life in joyous wonder.
Comment from lyenochka
A wonderful and uplifting loop poem. Your looping was very expertly down and the repeated words flowed naturally from one line end to the beginning of the other. Best wishes in the contest!
reply by the author on 20-Sep-2019
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A wonderful and uplifting loop poem. Your looping was very expertly down and the repeated words flowed naturally from one line end to the beginning of the other. Best wishes in the contest!
Comment Written 19-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 20-Sep-2019
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Your kind editorial suggestion is most welcomed, You are a wonderful person for trusting this process to inform and suggest without being harsh about your thoughts
Comment from Janice Canerdy
Your loop poem conveys a powerful theme about life and how to live it.
We must be willing to go out on a limb sometimes. We will miss so much if we don't.
reply by the author on 20-Sep-2019
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Your loop poem conveys a powerful theme about life and how to live it.
We must be willing to go out on a limb sometimes. We will miss so much if we don't.
Comment Written 19-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 20-Sep-2019
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Thank you for your review and kind comments.
Comment from Hitcher
Live every day like you believe it could be your last and you will have a life filled with excitement and wonder : )) I enjoyed your impressive little loop poem friend and I do like to dance my way through life : )) Good luck!
reply by the author on 19-Sep-2019
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Live every day like you believe it could be your last and you will have a life filled with excitement and wonder : )) I enjoyed your impressive little loop poem friend and I do like to dance my way through life : )) Good luck!
Comment Written 19-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 19-Sep-2019
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We are all so capable of living so much more freely, but we don't always.
Comment from Joan E.
Your fascinating artwork selection beckoned me into your poem. Your Loop Poem effectively encourages us to live life to the fullest and take chances. Best wishes in the contest- Joan
reply by the author on 19-Sep-2019
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Your fascinating artwork selection beckoned me into your poem. Your Loop Poem effectively encourages us to live life to the fullest and take chances. Best wishes in the contest- Joan
Comment Written 19-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 19-Sep-2019
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I delight in you comments enjoy your coming weekend
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Happy weekend to you as well and keep up the splendid work- Joan
Comment from Patty Palmer
I keep seeing more and more this loop poem. I haven't really tried it myself yet but I think I'm figuring it out. This a great poem! I hope you do well at the polls!
reply by the author on 18-Sep-2019
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I keep seeing more and more this loop poem. I haven't really tried it myself yet but I think I'm figuring it out. This a great poem! I hope you do well at the polls!
Comment Written 18-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 18-Sep-2019
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Thank you much, jump into the water, you can learn to float also...:)
Comment from DonandVicki
a very skillfully executed Loop poem, a poem that gives good advice about how to live your life, in a positive way. So many squander the little time they have with the negative side of life.
reply by the author on 18-Sep-2019
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a very skillfully executed Loop poem, a poem that gives good advice about how to live your life, in a positive way. So many squander the little time they have with the negative side of life.
Comment Written 18-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 18-Sep-2019
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Thank you much!
Comment from harmony13
The author's words are deep, interesting, creative and thought provoking.
The reader pondered on the words and theme of this poem. I like the title of your poem - I feel life is a gift. The artwork is perfect and compliments
this poem well.
reply by the author on 18-Sep-2019
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The author's words are deep, interesting, creative and thought provoking.
The reader pondered on the words and theme of this poem. I like the title of your poem - I feel life is a gift. The artwork is perfect and compliments
this poem well.
Comment Written 18-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 18-Sep-2019
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My sincere thank you.
Comment from Susan X Smith
This is an excellent entry for the loop poetry contest. The rhyme scheme works well here, for example, dance and chance. Thanks for sharing. Best wishes in your continued creative writing.
reply by the author on 18-Sep-2019
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This is an excellent entry for the loop poetry contest. The rhyme scheme works well here, for example, dance and chance. Thanks for sharing. Best wishes in your continued creative writing.
Comment Written 18-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 18-Sep-2019
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Thank you very much
