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Comment from Pam (respa)
-Very nice image, Sally.
-I really like this story.
-You pull at our heart strings
by using the voice of this
precious girl.
-Through your examples, you
show us how much she loves
her father and wants him to be happy.
-It would make her happy, too.
-This is a winner in my book-
Good Luck!
reply by the author on 19-Sep-2019
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-Very nice image, Sally.
-I really like this story.
-You pull at our heart strings
by using the voice of this
precious girl.
-Through your examples, you
show us how much she loves
her father and wants him to be happy.
-It would make her happy, too.
-This is a winner in my book-
Good Luck!
Comment Written 19-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 19-Sep-2019
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Thank you so much, dear Pam. I am deeply honored by your kind review and six star rating. It means the world to me. I hope this does well and humbly accept you pre-judging!!
Sending you my best today as always,
Sal xo
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You are very welcome and deserving of the stars and review, Sally. I hope it does well, too!
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Thank you, again. :+))
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😊
Comment from the13thpoet
Hello Sally, my friend. This site never ceases to amaze me, dribble flash fiction? As if 75 or 100 words wasn't restrictive enough, now we're down to 50? Anyway, I think you've done a wonderful job executing it. This is a first for me, but it was adorably cute and very sad at the same time. Good job and good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 19-Sep-2019
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Hello Sally, my friend. This site never ceases to amaze me, dribble flash fiction? As if 75 or 100 words wasn't restrictive enough, now we're down to 50? Anyway, I think you've done a wonderful job executing it. This is a first for me, but it was adorably cute and very sad at the same time. Good job and good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 19-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 19-Sep-2019
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Hello to you, dear poet. I?m so pleased you enjoyed this. It?s hard to know what to do with so few words, but hopefully, I?m getting better at this. Sending you my best today as always,
Sal :+)
Comment from Heather Knight
Awww! How very adorable! Lovely piece.
My niece is just the opposite. She's worried my brother-in-law might replace my sister with another woman.
Thanks for sharing and good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 19-Sep-2019
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Awww! How very adorable! Lovely piece.
My niece is just the opposite. She's worried my brother-in-law might replace my sister with another woman.
Thanks for sharing and good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 19-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 19-Sep-2019
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My mother remarried and he was not into little girls or pets. He had no love in his heart and the inspiration for this inquiry. I wished I had had the chance to interview him. Thank you for the kind review and compliments. Sending you my best today as always,
Sal xo
Sending you my best today as always,
Sal xo
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People who have children should be extra careful when they remarry, I think...
Comment from Sallyo
Awww, what a sweet dribble. Okay, that doesn't sound so good, but you know what I mean! The picture backs up the story beautifully, and the homely wording sound quite childlike.
reply by the author on 19-Sep-2019
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Awww, what a sweet dribble. Okay, that doesn't sound so good, but you know what I mean! The picture backs up the story beautifully, and the homely wording sound quite childlike.
Comment Written 19-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 19-Sep-2019
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I know what you mean. I?m so pleased you enjoyed my sweet Dribble.
Sending you my best today as always,
Sally xo
Comment from JudyE
What a lot of emotion you've been able to call up with so few words. This is an excellent dribble flash fiction piece.
I might have put up apostrophes in front of 'cause' and 'portant' but it's probably not necessary.
Good luck in the contest.
Judy
reply by the author on 19-Sep-2019
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What a lot of emotion you've been able to call up with so few words. This is an excellent dribble flash fiction piece.
I might have put up apostrophes in front of 'cause' and 'portant' but it's probably not necessary.
Good luck in the contest.
Judy
Comment Written 18-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 19-Sep-2019
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Thank you for the wonderful review and compliments. I appreciate you so much.
Sending you my best today as always,
Sally xo
Comment from Carla Trinklein
So sweet! This reminds me of "Sarah, Plain and Tall", where the prairie farmer sends away for a mail-order bride back east. You've captured the way a young child would think, talk and write perfectly. Now you need to expand it into a longer story because I want to know how it works out for her! Best wishes in the contest!
reply by the author on 19-Sep-2019
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So sweet! This reminds me of "Sarah, Plain and Tall", where the prairie farmer sends away for a mail-order bride back east. You've captured the way a young child would think, talk and write perfectly. Now you need to expand it into a longer story because I want to know how it works out for her! Best wishes in the contest!
Comment Written 18-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 19-Sep-2019
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It does remind me of Sarah, Plain and Tall. I was thinking of my own life and wished I had had the chance to interview my mother?s second husband. He didn?t like little girls and pets. It ended their unhappy marriage. I think love is the simplest request, don?t you?
Sending you my best today as always,
Sal xo
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
I enjoyed your contest entry, Sally. Good job with the prompt. I could just see/hear this little girl writing her heart out in this heart-felt ad. Your lines flow nicely, the image is perfect, and the idea relevant. Thanks for sharing and best wishes. Respectfully with Admiration, Jan
reply by the author on 20-Sep-2019
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I enjoyed your contest entry, Sally. Good job with the prompt. I could just see/hear this little girl writing her heart out in this heart-felt ad. Your lines flow nicely, the image is perfect, and the idea relevant. Thanks for sharing and best wishes. Respectfully with Admiration, Jan
Comment Written 18-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 20-Sep-2019
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Thank you so much for the excellent review and kind compliments dear Jan. I?m so glad I have you and that you appreciate my work. That always means the most to me. Sending you my best as always, Sally xoxo
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
This is sweet and endearing and brought a tear too, a good dribble flash fiction with a warm sentiment, much enjoyed Sally, best of luck with it, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 18-Sep-2019
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This is sweet and endearing and brought a tear too, a good dribble flash fiction with a warm sentiment, much enjoyed Sally, best of luck with it, love Dolly x
Comment Written 18-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 18-Sep-2019
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Thank you so much, dear Dolly.
Sending you my best today as always,
Sal xo
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
Job wanted offer for a pretty grown up lady for teaching and caring Pa a little girl is nice but Pa is not glad because she does not like learning; well said, well done.
reply by the author on 18-Sep-2019
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Job wanted offer for a pretty grown up lady for teaching and caring Pa a little girl is nice but Pa is not glad because she does not like learning; well said, well done.
Comment Written 18-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 18-Sep-2019
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Thank you for the excellent review and kind encouragement. Sending you my best today as well,
Sal :+)
Comment from royowen
This dear little girl, had my colouring Sally, she's adorable, has my looks, but I'm not her dad, my mum was a redhead, as is my sister, but I sired two blondes, they have a mix of blonde, blue eyed kids, and brunettes...tan, not like me, I freckle. Hah hah. An excellent entry in this contest, I'd apply for the job, but I'm already committed, but can adopt. Beautifully done Sally, blessings, and good luck, Roy
reply by the author on 18-Sep-2019
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This dear little girl, had my colouring Sally, she's adorable, has my looks, but I'm not her dad, my mum was a redhead, as is my sister, but I sired two blondes, they have a mix of blonde, blue eyed kids, and brunettes...tan, not like me, I freckle. Hah hah. An excellent entry in this contest, I'd apply for the job, but I'm already committed, but can adopt. Beautifully done Sally, blessings, and good luck, Roy
Comment Written 18-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 18-Sep-2019
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Thank you, dear Roy. Your kind review is most appreciated.
Sending you my best today as well,
Sal :+)
