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Comment from Y. M. Roger
Love this one, Lady Sal -- love that it's from a little girl's perspective: tried that one in a contest this week....'twas fun!! :) :) Great idea for a Dribble, ma'am, and best of luck in the contest! ;) Yvette
reply by the author on 20-Sep-2019
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Love this one, Lady Sal -- love that it's from a little girl's perspective: tried that one in a contest this week....'twas fun!! :) :) Great idea for a Dribble, ma'am, and best of luck in the contest! ;) Yvette
Comment Written 20-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 20-Sep-2019
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Thank you, dear Yvette, I?m so glad you like this. I?m hoping for the best. Sending you my best today as always,
Sal xo
Comment from ExperiencingLiphe
It's important to find a friend though because my grandpa married his wife cuz he didn't want to be alone and she's a real...hmmm what's the word. Well, we call her Troll soo...lol. Finding the right person is the goal.
reply by the author on 20-Sep-2019
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It's important to find a friend though because my grandpa married his wife cuz he didn't want to be alone and she's a real...hmmm what's the word. Well, we call her Troll soo...lol. Finding the right person is the goal.
Comment Written 20-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 20-Sep-2019
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Finding the right person is a rich blessing. I appreciate the excellent review and insightful comments. Sending you my best today as always,
Sal xo
Comment from Jeffrey L. Michaux
Awe, this is so cute and so sweet. How could you not love that. The sweetness and innocence of children. I think that she's got it all lined out what she wants and expects. I really enjoyed reading this adorable and well written work. The accompanying artwork is priceless, she's so pretty! Well done!
reply by the author on 20-Sep-2019
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Awe, this is so cute and so sweet. How could you not love that. The sweetness and innocence of children. I think that she's got it all lined out what she wants and expects. I really enjoyed reading this adorable and well written work. The accompanying artwork is priceless, she's so pretty! Well done!
Comment Written 20-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 20-Sep-2019
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Thank you so much Jeffrey. Your kind review is so appreciated and encouraging.
Sending you my best today as always,
Sal ,+)
Comment from BeasPeas
Well, I apply for the job, Sally. Not for the pa, but for Samantha. Cute as a button. Best of luck in the contest with this sweet little flash fiction. Marilyn
reply by the author on 20-Sep-2019
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Well, I apply for the job, Sally. Not for the pa, but for Samantha. Cute as a button. Best of luck in the contest with this sweet little flash fiction. Marilyn
Comment Written 20-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 20-Sep-2019
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Thank you very much for your kind review and encouragement. It is always so appreciated. Sending you my very best today as always, dear Marilyn. Sally xo
Comment from Susan Morritt
This is very original. I found it sweet and touching, and your choice of words (and spelling) makes it authentic. My favourite is, "growed up." Your choice of picture fit the story perfectly too. Good luck in the contest.
Susan
reply by the author on 20-Sep-2019
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This is very original. I found it sweet and touching, and your choice of words (and spelling) makes it authentic. My favourite is, "growed up." Your choice of picture fit the story perfectly too. Good luck in the contest.
Susan
Comment Written 20-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 20-Sep-2019
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Thank you, Susan. Your kind review means so much. Sending you my best today as always,
Sally xo
Comment from Janetsue
This is such a touching posting. That little girl is filling her short lines with a lot of emotion, plus exceptional love for her sad Pa. Hope she gets her wish very soon! :-)
reply by the author on 20-Sep-2019
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This is such a touching posting. That little girl is filling her short lines with a lot of emotion, plus exceptional love for her sad Pa. Hope she gets her wish very soon! :-)
Comment Written 20-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 20-Sep-2019
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Thank you very much for the excellent review and kind compliments. It is always so appreciated. Sending you my best today as well, Sally xo
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You're truly welcome, Sally! xoxo
Comment from Gail Denham
Too cute and how many kids would write a letter like that - many, if they could or if they dared. There needs to be two parents - loving each other and the kids. Sad when that isn't so.
Good story.
reply by the author on 20-Sep-2019
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Too cute and how many kids would write a letter like that - many, if they could or if they dared. There needs to be two parents - loving each other and the kids. Sad when that isn't so.
Good story.
Comment Written 20-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 20-Sep-2019
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Thank you very much, dear Gail. Your excellent review and kind comments means so much. Sending you my best today as always, Sally xo
Comment from Ulla
Awe, bless her. She does need some lessons in spelling, but it has the effect of endearing her to me. May she find the person who can make her dad smile again. A lovely entry, Sally. Good luck. Ulla xxx
reply by the author on 20-Sep-2019
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Awe, bless her. She does need some lessons in spelling, but it has the effect of endearing her to me. May she find the person who can make her dad smile again. A lovely entry, Sally. Good luck. Ulla xxx
Comment Written 19-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 20-Sep-2019
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Thank you so much for the excellent review and kind compliments, dear Ulla. Your kind review of my work is always so appreciated. Sending you my best today as always, Sally xo
Comment from Dawn Munro
Oh, Sally! This is a wonderful, poignant piece. If I were to suggest ANYTHING, it would be this minor thing -- the rest of this child's 'voice' is perfect, but I think she would be able to pronounce the full word -- "(im)portant".
My friend, if I had a vote, this would be the winner (and I have an entry too. LOL)
reply by the author on 20-Sep-2019
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Oh, Sally! This is a wonderful, poignant piece. If I were to suggest ANYTHING, it would be this minor thing -- the rest of this child's 'voice' is perfect, but I think she would be able to pronounce the full word -- "(im)portant".
My friend, if I had a vote, this would be the winner (and I have an entry too. LOL)
Comment Written 19-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 20-Sep-2019
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Thank you very much, dear Dawn. I appreciate the excellent review and kind compliments. I couldn?t spell ?important? for the longest time (as a 8-9 year old) and worked it into this piece. Sending you my best today as always, Sally xo
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Oh, that explains it beautifully then! You are very welcome.
Comment from giraffmang
Hi there,
This may well do well in the competition. it certainly has that required subject matter which appears to go down well with the judges. the character-driven voice of the piece works well.
Best of luck
GMG
reply by the author on 20-Sep-2019
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Hi there,
This may well do well in the competition. it certainly has that required subject matter which appears to go down well with the judges. the character-driven voice of the piece works well.
Best of luck
GMG
Comment Written 19-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 20-Sep-2019
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Thank you very much for the excellent review and kind compliments. It is always so appreciated. Sending you my best today as always, Sally :+)
