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Comment from Diana L Crawford
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How special is this one! I can see a little girl writing this from concern for her father. It says so much about the empathy that does exist in children. Sometimes they have mire empathy in their little finger than many adults. Love this! xoxo

 Comment Written 22-Sep-2019


reply by the author on 23-Sep-2019
    Thank you very much for the excellent review and kind comments. I remember encouraging my mother to date, and hoping for a good father. I couldn?t spell important to save my life. Sending you my best today as always, Sally XO
reply by Diana L Crawford on 23-Sep-2019
    awe! I had two step-fathers, the first was a mean kind and the second was ok, but i was already 12 by the time they met and lived with my grandparent for a couple of years from 15-17 and then was in the service by 17 so my sisters spent more time than i did with him.
Comment from jenintorre
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This is a great dribble flash fiction, written in the words of a little girl. Very poignsnt ans believable. I wish you lots of luck in the competition. Jen.

 Comment Written 22-Sep-2019


reply by the author on 23-Sep-2019
    Thank you, Jen. I appreciate the excellent review and kind compliments. It is always so appreciated.
    Sending you my best today as always,
    Sal xo
Comment from Gloria ....
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Aw, this is just such a heartwarming story, Sal. The little girl sending out dating information for her father who might not know how to do it. The conflict, the resolution, the setting and a delightful story has been told by you.

Best wishes to you with the Contest Committee. :)

Gloria

 Comment Written 21-Sep-2019


reply by the author on 21-Sep-2019
    Thank you, dear Gloria. I?m so appreciative of the excellent review and kind compliments. It is so appreciated.
    Sending you my best today as always,
    Sally xo
Comment from Katherine M. Kean
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This is an excellent dribble. There is so much story in it I have trouble believing it is only fifty words. The misspellings are a true stroke of genius. No one could think this was written by anyone but a child. I am only sorry that I do not have any six star ratings left in my reserve to award to this. Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 21-Sep-2019


reply by the author on 21-Sep-2019
    Hello Katherine. Thank you very much for the excellent review and kind compliments. It is so appreciated and encouraging. :+)
    Sending you my best today as always,
    Sally xo
Comment from Kazzawin
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Wow, what a cutie she is! You can just imagine her sitting at the kitchen table and penning this little advertisement to find a love for her 'Pa'
Such a picture of innocence and yet determination in every word, especially the part that matters. Must smile a lot.... because it's real portant.
Lovely little letter for the dribble flash fiction contest...good luck : )

 Comment Written 21-Sep-2019


reply by the author on 21-Sep-2019
    Thank you very much for the marvelous review. It is so appreciated. Sending you my best today as always,
    Sal xo
Comment from pbomar1115
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Samantha's love for her father is unwavering. Her ability to nurture her father and take care of herself shows she will go far in life. She has learned how to sale.


Phillip

 Comment Written 21-Sep-2019


reply by the author on 21-Sep-2019
    Thank you, Phillip. I appreciate the excellent review and kind encouragement in my writing. It is always so appreciated. Sending you my best today as always,
    Sally ,+)
reply by pbomar1115 on 21-Sep-2019
    You're welcome, Sally.

    Phillip
Comment from Sarkems
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Aww. A heartwarming little plea that tells a complete story and manages to do something very difficult - reads like a child really wrote it. Thanks for sharing and good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 21-Sep-2019


reply by the author on 21-Sep-2019
    Thank you, dear Sarkems. I?m glad you enjoyed my contest entry. I am child-like in some ways, so this was not a huge stretch.
    Sending you my best today as always,
    Sally xo
Comment from Sugarray77
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I love this short dribble, Sally. The little story is exquisite, but also sad. This would set up perfectly for a longer story ~ a romance perhaps. Great job and photo to match!

Melissa

 Comment Written 21-Sep-2019


reply by the author on 21-Sep-2019
    Thank you, dear Melissa. What an unexpected blessing today. I am deeply honored by this and the generous six star shower. Sending you my best today as always,
    Sal xo
Comment from Susan X Smith
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How cute and what an adorable picture. This brief story really works well despite the limitations of the flash fiction challenge. Good luck in the contest. Keep writing.

 Comment Written 20-Sep-2019


reply by the author on 20-Sep-2019
    Thank you for the kind review and encouragement, Susan. It is greatly appreciated.
    Sending you my best today as well,
    Sally :+)
Comment from Ben Colder
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Out of six. This touches the old man's heart. So many in need of love. I try and support those in need. A great piece and the photo is tight on. Red hair. Perfect.

 Comment Written 20-Sep-2019


reply by the author on 20-Sep-2019
    There you are. Thank you for the excellent review and kind compliments. I'm so glad it pulled on your heartstrings. Sending you my best today as always,
    Sal :+)