Divine showcase
Just look with eyes hear with your ears to Gods' presen25 total reviews
Comment from A. Willow Bends
This piece is quite beautiful and it is clear you have reached that point in your life (as have I) where beauty (and joy) are available if we just open our eyes and mind. You have so wonderfully conveyed this in your poem.
Quite lovely. The flow and simple honesty of it is calming and informative without being preachy or didactic. I love it. Great job!
Wendy
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2019
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This piece is quite beautiful and it is clear you have reached that point in your life (as have I) where beauty (and joy) are available if we just open our eyes and mind. You have so wonderfully conveyed this in your poem.
Quite lovely. The flow and simple honesty of it is calming and informative without being preachy or didactic. I love it. Great job!
Wendy
Comment Written 17-Sep-2019
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Wendy you are so kind....JLR
Comment from Rosemary Everson1
your poem is so creative. It shows many of the activities that we see like leaves swirling, dancing in the wind. Bees buzzing, children swimming, and the ducks waddling. Very scenic.
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your poem is so creative. It shows many of the activities that we see like leaves swirling, dancing in the wind. Bees buzzing, children swimming, and the ducks waddling. Very scenic.
Comment Written 17-Sep-2019
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Thank you Rosemary
Comment from June Sargent
Our journey through life contains so many lovely scenarios we could easily miss. We just need to open our hearts and minds to be receptive to the simple things - butterfly wings fluttering above the blossoms. A butterfly lives just weeks or months. Yet they enjoy every moment. Live life to the fullest with the awareness that someone created it all just for us.
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Our journey through life contains so many lovely scenarios we could easily miss. We just need to open our hearts and minds to be receptive to the simple things - butterfly wings fluttering above the blossoms. A butterfly lives just weeks or months. Yet they enjoy every moment. Live life to the fullest with the awareness that someone created it all just for us.
Comment Written 17-Sep-2019
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Thank you so very much June, your rating humbles me.
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written poem about the wonder of nature that we don't always appreciate. God does everything perfectly and we can admire His work everyday instead of messing with his creation.
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A very well-written poem about the wonder of nature that we don't always appreciate. God does everything perfectly and we can admire His work everyday instead of messing with his creation.
Comment Written 17-Sep-2019
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Thank you Sandra.
Comment from Sally Law
What a sweet poetry offering. I spend a lot of time listening since my eyesight is so poor. It's amazing what you hear if you only let it in. I enjoyed this so much. Sending my best today as always, Sally :+)
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What a sweet poetry offering. I spend a lot of time listening since my eyesight is so poor. It's amazing what you hear if you only let it in. I enjoyed this so much. Sending my best today as always, Sally :+)
Comment Written 17-Sep-2019
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Sally, thanks so much for your wonderful and encouraging words, may your day be filled with great aha?s.
Comment from Heather Knight
It's true. Everything that surrounds us is magnificent and we don't always realize it.
Great descriptions in your poem. The title is very good too.
Thanks so much for sharing.
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It's true. Everything that surrounds us is magnificent and we don't always realize it.
Great descriptions in your poem. The title is very good too.
Thanks so much for sharing.
Comment Written 17-Sep-2019
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Thank you Maria, may your week provide you many of the same to witness.
Comment from Gail Denham
Your special place and God's special place. A wonderful area of peace. Nice poem - makes me think of spending quiet time with God - always a good thing - if we just didn't get too busy.
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Your special place and God's special place. A wonderful area of peace. Nice poem - makes me think of spending quiet time with God - always a good thing - if we just didn't get too busy.
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Comment Written 17-Sep-2019
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Thanks
Comment from duchessofdrumborg
"Divine Showcase", is an extremely well-written and spiritually-uplifting piece. This talented poet's work is a pleasure to both read and review. You KEEP WRITING and I'll KEEP READING. I look forward to seeing your next post.
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"Divine Showcase", is an extremely well-written and spiritually-uplifting piece. This talented poet's work is a pleasure to both read and review. You KEEP WRITING and I'll KEEP READING. I look forward to seeing your next post.
Comment Written 17-Sep-2019
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Your encouragement and kindness are my motivators, thank you.
JLR,
As always your more than welcome.
Comment from Janice Canerdy
This is a lovely, well-written, uplifting piece. You have used vivid descriptions to send a message about the beauties to be seen and heard in the forest.
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This is a lovely, well-written, uplifting piece. You have used vivid descriptions to send a message about the beauties to be seen and heard in the forest.
Comment Written 17-Sep-2019
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My greatest gift is reading my creating resonates thoughts in others thank you
Comment from Iza Deleanu
Wow I like the sound of this :"Wisps of mist, swirling, twist" and also I can feel the breeze of the movement. I always stop and wonder at the creation of God. But you capture better my wonder:"It is this, being present, witnessing
the magnificent of God creating each and
every wonder-filled soul
each his uniquely crafted scenes" Thank you for sharing and good luck with your writings.
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Wow I like the sound of this :"Wisps of mist, swirling, twist" and also I can feel the breeze of the movement. I always stop and wonder at the creation of God. But you capture better my wonder:"It is this, being present, witnessing
the magnificent of God creating each and
every wonder-filled soul
each his uniquely crafted scenes" Thank you for sharing and good luck with your writings.
Comment Written 16-Sep-2019
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Thank you I?m glad it resonated for you
