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Just look with eyes hear with your ears to Gods' presen

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Comment from lyenochka
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This is such a beautiful spiritual reflection, and it shows me how we need to take time to observe how close God is and the beauty He creates all the time.
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"pestles buried in the center of petals."
(I wonder if you meant "pistils" instead of "pestles" since you are talking about flowers.)

 Comment Written 19-Sep-2019


reply by the author on 20-Sep-2019
    Your kind editorial suggestion is most welcomed, You are a wonderful person for trusting this process to inform and suggest without being harsh about your thoughts.
Comment from Hitcher
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One has to get up early or get out of town to find the kind of peace and tranquility you mention. The beauty of nature and the captured frame by silent frame disturbed only by nature itself. A beautiful poem friend!

 Comment Written 19-Sep-2019


reply by the author on 19-Sep-2019
    Thank you so much, I live in a small village in western NC surrounded by lush trees and a gentle headstream right out my window. It is a blessing to experience daily.
Comment from Susan Larson
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God's special place, an infinite expanse of all His goodness, down to the bees sucking out of the pestles buried beneath the petals, truly a wonder to watch. I was so fulfilled taking in all the wonders of your writing.

 Comment Written 19-Sep-2019


reply by the author on 19-Sep-2019
    Susan thank you. I am so happy that my work resonated for you.
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
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I enjoyed your poem, JLR. Good job on its smooth flow, scattered alliteration, and super image. You are right about God's beauty. We all need to stop and appreciate all the wonderful 'things' He has provided for us every day and night. Thanks for sharing. Respectfully with admiration. Jan

 Comment Written 18-Sep-2019


reply by the author on 18-Sep-2019
    Thank you very much, Jan..
Comment from Diana L Crawford
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So true! People rush around way too much and miss out on all the beauty God has provided everywhere you look. Thankfully my drive to work each day is through about 15 minutes of country and I so appreciate each day having that view before me! This is a wonderful tribute to the gifts God gives us. xoxo

 Comment Written 18-Sep-2019


reply by the author on 18-Sep-2019
    Thank you! You have a nice Celtic experience on every drive to work, very nice...
reply by Diana L Crawford on 18-Sep-2019
    Welcome! And yes I?m quite the lucky one!!
Comment from harmony13
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The author's words are clear, descriptive, interesting and thought provoking. This poem brings a feeling of peace and serenity. The reader enjoyed the poem and agrees totally with the author's notes. The artwork is perfect and compliments this poem well.

 Comment Written 18-Sep-2019


reply by the author on 18-Sep-2019
    My sincere thank you.
Comment from Barb Hensongispsaca
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An excellent message for those that put the minute before the space. It gives us a reminder of the beauty around us that we see once in a lifetime, and makes it simple to understand for those that put the important minute of time first.

 Comment Written 18-Sep-2019


reply by the author on 18-Sep-2019
    Thank you very much for your comments and connection to the poem.
Comment from Mastery
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There certainly is no doubt of God's presence, Jim. You have captured a few glimpses of proof very well in this writing.

"the sudden sounds of splashing
of children swimming over yonder."

Bravo! Bob

 Comment Written 18-Sep-2019


reply by the author on 18-Sep-2019
    Again, I am humbled...
reply by Mastery on 18-Sep-2019
    : ) Bob
reply by Mastery on 18-Sep-2019
    : ) Bob
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
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We don't stop and look often enough and you brought the scenes here as you have taken all that nature has to offer, I heard the sound of a new bird on the block yesterday, I could not see it, but it's sweet song filled my heart with love, much enjoyed, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 18-Sep-2019


reply by the author on 18-Sep-2019
    Thanks Dolly. Love hearing this.
Comment from Spangle
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The wonders God creates are without equal. I felt at peace reading your lovely and soothing poem with strong images to add to the delight. It was a pleasure to experience. Forever blessings!!

 Comment Written 17-Sep-2019


reply by the author on 18-Sep-2019
    Thank you Spangle.
reply by Spangle on 18-Sep-2019
    :You're very welcome!!