Comment from BeasPeas

Excellent

Great little story of the little fairy with the starfish. Enjoyable to read and with a happy ending. I do not see a pug. I see just the cute little fairy. Nice job. Marilyn

 Comment Written 17-Sep-2019

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reply by the author on 18-Sep-2019

I seem to be the only one who sees the pug and only on Safari. On Mozilla I see the fairy.
Thanks for reading.

Comment from A. Willow Bends

Excellent

Lovely, as usual! You add such a warmth to your stories that involve kindness. I can only imagine this is a reflection of your personality.
Great job, well done and I see a fairy, not a pug! :)
Wendy

 Comment Written 17-Sep-2019

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reply by the author on 18-Sep-2019

That's very kind of you.
Thanks for reading. Hugs.

Comment from Debra White

Excellent

Hi Maria :)
There's definitely a fairy on the picture!
I love this story, it is indeed very sweet. A lovely message - we should always try our best, even if we get it wrong sometimes.
Thanks for sharing :)
Best wishes, Debra x

 Comment Written 13-Sep-2019

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reply by the author on 14-Sep-2019

Thanks so much for another kind review. xxx

Comment from Katherine M. (k-11)

Excellent

A very sweet piece. I especially liked the tags

Again.
As usual.

They immediately characterized Rainbow as somewhat of a hopeless case.
In contrast, I was not too convinced by the absolutely last sentence...

 Comment Written 12-Sep-2019

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reply by the author on 12-Sep-2019

Thanks for reading.

Comment from Diana L Crawford

Excellent

What a sweet, endearing story! Beautiful details! Poor little fairy, so afraid she'd be in trouble. Thankfully Neptune has a bit of clout!! Thanks for sharing this precious work!

xoxo

 Comment Written 11-Sep-2019

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reply by the author on 12-Sep-2019

I'm glad you liked it. Thanks for your very kind review.

reply by Diana L Crawford on 12-Sep-2019

you are so very welcome! xoxo

Comment from Robert Zimmerman

Excellent

Hello Maria. It is a nice fairytale. As I read it but I was thinking is that it would be a good subject for a children's story. It may even be able to read as a fable by adding some metaphors and a moral.

 Comment Written 11-Sep-2019

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reply by the author on 12-Sep-2019

Thanks for reading and for the suggestion, Robert.

reply by Robert Zimmerman on 12-Sep-2019

You're welcome!

Comment from brenda faye curtis

Excellent

Your picture was the fairy, and your story was cute and uplifting. A good moral to the story is that if you need help, ask for it, and that you should always explain all your words and actions. Leave no margin for error.

At least, that's what I got out of it.

 Comment Written 11-Sep-2019

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reply by the author on 12-Sep-2019

Thanks for reading, Brenda.

reply by brenda faye curtis on 12-Sep-2019

You're welcome.

Comment from Rikki66

Excellent

This is a nice blend of Greek and Anglo-Saxon mythology.
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 Comment Written 11-Sep-2019

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reply by the author on 12-Sep-2019

Thanks for reading, Rikki. Take care.

reply by Rikki66 on 12-Sep-2019

You are most welcome.
Rikki

Comment from Teri7

Excellent

Maria, This is a very well written short story about the star and Rainbow the special fairy. You used very good words with very beautiful imagery. I enjoyed reading and reviewing this about the kind fairy. love and blessings, Teri

 Comment Written 11-Sep-2019

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reply by the author on 12-Sep-2019

Thanks for your review, Teri. Take care.

Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

A sweet fantasy write told we a gentle kindness and endearing quality, much enjoyed Maria, we are often never rewarded for our kindness, but then again the act of being kind is a reward in itself, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 11-Sep-2019

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reply by the author on 12-Sep-2019

Thanks for reading, Dolly. Have a lovely day.