Rock a Bye
Childrens Poem Quatrains9 total reviews
Comment from Raul1
This is a very good poem. I think that this poem has a chance of winning the contest! Excellent work! No grammatical errors. Good luck in the contest!
reply by the author on 09-Sep-2019
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This is a very good poem. I think that this poem has a chance of winning the contest! Excellent work! No grammatical errors. Good luck in the contest!
Comment Written 09-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 09-Sep-2019
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Thank you very much!
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You're welcome! :)
Comment from Diana L Crawford
Awesome! This is such a touching wonderful poem. What a lucky child to be safely in the arms of a loving mother.
Thanks for sharing! This got my vote!!! xoxo
reply by the author on 09-Sep-2019
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Awesome! This is such a touching wonderful poem. What a lucky child to be safely in the arms of a loving mother.
Thanks for sharing! This got my vote!!! xoxo
Comment Written 09-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 09-Sep-2019
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Thank you!
Comment from Mia Twysted
Very touching. It makes you think about how them being babies doesn't last that long. All you want to do is hold them tight and protect them from the world.
Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 09-Sep-2019
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Very touching. It makes you think about how them being babies doesn't last that long. All you want to do is hold them tight and protect them from the world.
Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 09-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 09-Sep-2019
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Thank you!!
Comment from Y. M. Roger
Such a gentle poem that whispers just as a mother would while holding her little one at the end of the day. :) Your quatrains of abcb rhyme scheme are a wonderfully relaxing offering for the contest... good luck ! ;)
reply by the author on 09-Sep-2019
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Such a gentle poem that whispers just as a mother would while holding her little one at the end of the day. :) Your quatrains of abcb rhyme scheme are a wonderfully relaxing offering for the contest... good luck ! ;)
Comment Written 09-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 09-Sep-2019
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Thank you. :)
Comment from RodG
I read this out loud and it has the musical lily of a lullaby. I love hearing the comforting words of Mommy rocking her son to sleep. Especially noteworthy is your final stanza. Rod
reply by the author on 09-Sep-2019
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I read this out loud and it has the musical lily of a lullaby. I love hearing the comforting words of Mommy rocking her son to sleep. Especially noteworthy is your final stanza. Rod
Comment Written 09-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 09-Sep-2019
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Thank you!!
Comment from QC Poet
Format fitting and charming entry to the children's rhyming contest. A little of beat in flow and rhythm, but easy to follow nevertheless. Blessings to you and Good Luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 09-Sep-2019
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Format fitting and charming entry to the children's rhyming contest. A little of beat in flow and rhythm, but easy to follow nevertheless. Blessings to you and Good Luck in the contest.
Comment Written 09-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 09-Sep-2019
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Thank you.
Comment from JLR
You certainly complete the requirements of the contest. However, you are already a winner, regardless of the contest. Only a mother, who is so truly loving and caring could craft such wonderful words. Your child(ren) are much blest with your depth of love. write on and write often,
reply by the author on 09-Sep-2019
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You certainly complete the requirements of the contest. However, you are already a winner, regardless of the contest. Only a mother, who is so truly loving and caring could craft such wonderful words. Your child(ren) are much blest with your depth of love. write on and write often,
Comment Written 09-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 09-Sep-2019
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Thank you!!
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
This is a sweet and endearing write for the Children's rhyming contest and I wish you luck. There is nothing like a Mother's love, best wishes, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 09-Sep-2019
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This is a sweet and endearing write for the Children's rhyming contest and I wish you luck. There is nothing like a Mother's love, best wishes, love Dolly x
Comment Written 09-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 09-Sep-2019
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Thank you.
Comment from JudyE
These gentle verses are ideal for a lullaby for a sleepy, little boy. The rhythm and rhyming are very effective making the poem easy to read.
Just one spag in the first line: Your sailing off to dreamy land - should be 'You're...'
Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 09-Sep-2019
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These gentle verses are ideal for a lullaby for a sleepy, little boy. The rhythm and rhyming are very effective making the poem easy to read.
Just one spag in the first line: Your sailing off to dreamy land - should be 'You're...'
Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 09-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 09-Sep-2019
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Thank you for the heads up!
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No problem. :)
