Danger Ahead
Be very afraid...9 total reviews
Comment from CrystieCookie999
Delicious 'd' alliteration in 'deep' and 'dungeon's' and 'dark' and 'devour.' I like the way the poem definitely shows what 'insidious' means. Great illustration choice--a lot of mood there. Nice share!
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2019
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Delicious 'd' alliteration in 'deep' and 'dungeon's' and 'dark' and 'devour.' I like the way the poem definitely shows what 'insidious' means. Great illustration choice--a lot of mood there. Nice share!
Comment Written 13-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2019
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thanks so much! it seems recently the horror bug has bitten me! lol! appreciate that you enjoyed! xoxo
Comment from Sally Law
I normally don't do horror, but this was just scary enough. The artwork set up your poem perfectly. Sending you my best today, and best wishes for the Obscure Word Poetry Contest. Spooky good.
Sal xo
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2019
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I normally don't do horror, but this was just scary enough. The artwork set up your poem perfectly. Sending you my best today, and best wishes for the Obscure Word Poetry Contest. Spooky good.
Sal xo
Comment Written 13-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2019
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thanks Sally, it seems the horror bug has bitten and for some reason, i am intrigued with writing both poetry and story (which is strange as I did not see myself writing stories on here) but i'm loving the challenge! have a great weekend my dear! :) xoxo
Comment from Rosemary Everson1
congratulations. I like your word, insidious. Not so complicated either. The image makes the word a little mystery looking. Great writing. Keep up the good work.
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2019
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congratulations. I like your word, insidious. Not so complicated either. The image makes the word a little mystery looking. Great writing. Keep up the good work.
Comment Written 13-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2019
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thanks Rosemary! i think the horror bug has bitten. All the sudden, i want to write in this genre and I have never even thought of it before. Even got me writing a story! haha! love this site for bringing out things in me I'd never dreamed I write about! have a great weekend! xoxo
Comment from Y. M. Roger
Congrats on winning, my lady -- such an awesome offering!! ;) :) Love the eerie aura you create for us! ;) Thanx for entering and thanx so much lending us your own brand of obscurity! ;) Yvette
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2019
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Congrats on winning, my lady -- such an awesome offering!! ;) :) Love the eerie aura you create for us! ;) Thanx for entering and thanx so much lending us your own brand of obscurity! ;) Yvette
Comment Written 13-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2019
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Awe! thank you so much! I think the horror bug has bitten me lately! Maybe its just because Halloween is on its way! LOL! thanks for reaching out! xoxoxo
Comment from LisaMay
Get that insidious creature out of the hallway and into the dungeon itself then I'd recommend keeping the door shut!! And give all the souls a map or a GPS unit... there, problem solved.
Your poem reads well, descriptive of menace, and a good dash of alliteration going on.
reply by the author on 11-Sep-2019
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Get that insidious creature out of the hallway and into the dungeon itself then I'd recommend keeping the door shut!! And give all the souls a map or a GPS unit... there, problem solved.
Your poem reads well, descriptive of menace, and a good dash of alliteration going on.
Comment Written 11-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 11-Sep-2019
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haha! I'll pass along the info cuz I ain't going there myself, that's for sure!! hahahaha!!
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You'd be OK - you're not a lost soul.
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Thank God!!!! xoxoxo lolol!
Comment from Gypsymooncat
I thought I was reading something by our much-honoured and missed Dean Kuch at first! This is very eerie, very well presented, definitely up there with one of his works, and included great word choices. I do love that word "insidious"; it says so much and even has a threatening lilt to it. Good luck!
reply by the author on 09-Sep-2019
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I thought I was reading something by our much-honoured and missed Dean Kuch at first! This is very eerie, very well presented, definitely up there with one of his works, and included great word choices. I do love that word "insidious"; it says so much and even has a threatening lilt to it. Good luck!
Comment Written 09-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 09-Sep-2019
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What an honor for you to compare! since he has gone, i have been inspired to try my hand at horror! I love anything spooky (except most films these days lol), but have never tried to write spooky before this time in my life! thanks so much for your supportive feedback! xoxo
Comment from Iza Deleanu
I like the title Danger ahead -be very afraid. Beautiful imagine the picture but also the one created by your words - an insidious creature creeping from the dungeon hallway devouring lost souls. Good luck with the contest.
reply by the author on 08-Sep-2019
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I like the title Danger ahead -be very afraid. Beautiful imagine the picture but also the one created by your words - an insidious creature creeping from the dungeon hallway devouring lost souls. Good luck with the contest.
Comment Written 08-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 08-Sep-2019
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Thank you so much! xoxo
Comment from RodG
Insidious has long been one of my favorite words, and I applaud how you use it to set a scene for a horror thriller. One quickly wonders what kind of creature awaits in the dark hallway. Rod
reply by the author on 08-Sep-2019
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Insidious has long been one of my favorite words, and I applaud how you use it to set a scene for a horror thriller. One quickly wonders what kind of creature awaits in the dark hallway. Rod
Comment Written 08-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 08-Sep-2019
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Awesome! And I think I would prefer to leave what that creature may look like to the imagination rather than being confronted and knowing for sure! Haha!!! Thanks for stopping to read and giving me feedback on this!!! xoxo
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My pleasure. Rod
Comment from Susan Larson
I love how your poem in and of itself defines the word insidious by showing, not telling what the word means. While this may not be what you intended, the first time I read it over I saw the devil between the lines. Exceptional.
reply by the author on 08-Sep-2019
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I love how your poem in and of itself defines the word insidious by showing, not telling what the word means. While this may not be what you intended, the first time I read it over I saw the devil between the lines. Exceptional.
Comment Written 08-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 08-Sep-2019
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Thank you! I imagine any creature waiting to devour a soul would be a spawn of Satan in one form or another :). Appreciate your awesome feedback! xoxo
