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What else are you going to say in this situation?27 total reviews
Comment from Sankey
For some reason only FIVES left over here. Good read and says it all plain and simple or complicated. Great picture that is very appropriate as well. I am still planning on going.
reply by the author on 09-Sep-2019
For some reason only FIVES left over here. Good read and says it all plain and simple or complicated. Great picture that is very appropriate as well. I am still planning on going.
Comment Written 06-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 09-Sep-2019
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Glad you enjoyed this poem. Much appreciate the review.
Comment from Tootsie55
Well done and glad I had some sixes. How do I find where to vote for this or is it passed? No spags and an excellent picture that says it all. Dunno why I am still building up funny as I am still planning on leaving. You obviously still hang around, though.
reply by the author on 09-Sep-2019
Well done and glad I had some sixes. How do I find where to vote for this or is it passed? No spags and an excellent picture that says it all. Dunno why I am still building up funny as I am still planning on leaving. You obviously still hang around, though.
Comment Written 06-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 09-Sep-2019
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I hang around for a while, until I transfer my previous writings posted here elsewhere, which I am in the process of. Glad you enjoyed this poem.
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Yeah well I want to do the same over to Feral's or that other place or both. Good seeing you keep in touch, please.
Comment from Darlene Franklin
What else, indeed? Except for those rare souls who somehow find a way to forget and move on. (I don't know how). A powerful poem that sounds a bit like a country and western song.
reply by the author on 09-Sep-2019
What else, indeed? Except for those rare souls who somehow find a way to forget and move on. (I don't know how). A powerful poem that sounds a bit like a country and western song.
Comment Written 06-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 09-Sep-2019
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Glad you enjoyed this poem Appreciate your insights and the review. Yes, since I write Country lyrics (a lot) these could easily be turned into them. As I asked, what else is one going to say in a situation like this?
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Heart-breaking, for sure.
Comment from Mystic Angel 7777
This meets the contest requirements nicely as you deliver a Rhymed Poem. The rhyme sequence is generally supposed to be consistent throughout and your first and last stanza don't fit and are not rhymed (it's not close enough to even be considered near rhyme); what I chose to do was consider the first and last stanza as an offsetting pattern since they are identical which allowed me to evaluate the rest for a true pattern - who knows if the Committee will do the same LOL (the tend t be less lenient). Good luck in the judging and thank you very much for sharing it.
reply by the author on 08-Sep-2019
This meets the contest requirements nicely as you deliver a Rhymed Poem. The rhyme sequence is generally supposed to be consistent throughout and your first and last stanza don't fit and are not rhymed (it's not close enough to even be considered near rhyme); what I chose to do was consider the first and last stanza as an offsetting pattern since they are identical which allowed me to evaluate the rest for a true pattern - who knows if the Committee will do the same LOL (the tend t be less lenient). Good luck in the judging and thank you very much for sharing it.
Comment Written 06-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 08-Sep-2019
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Reconsidered, and now all couplets rhyme. Glad you enjoyed this poem. Appreciate the insight and review. As I asked, what else would one say in this situation.
Comment from lyenochka
A very true to emotion descriptive poem about how one feels about someone who would throw away a love commitment. And anyone who lures someone else away from marriage is surely not trustworthy.
reply by the author on 08-Sep-2019
A very true to emotion descriptive poem about how one feels about someone who would throw away a love commitment. And anyone who lures someone else away from marriage is surely not trustworthy.
Comment Written 06-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 08-Sep-2019
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Glad you enjoyed this poem. Appreciate your insights and the review. As I asked, what else would one say in this situation?
Comment from Ulla
Wow, Brett, I liked this poem a lot. It's brimming with anger and very rightfully so. He's disappointed and feels betrayed. He loved her, but she threw it all overboard. What a great entry for the contest. It's a shame I don't have a six left. Good luck. Ulla:))
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reply by the author on 08-Sep-2019
Wow, Brett, I liked this poem a lot. It's brimming with anger and very rightfully so. He's disappointed and feels betrayed. He loved her, but she threw it all overboard. What a great entry for the contest. It's a shame I don't have a six left. Good luck. Ulla:))
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Comment Written 06-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 08-Sep-2019
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Glad you enjoyed this poem. Appreciate your insights and the review. As I said, what else could one say in this situation?
Comment from Y. M. Roger
A very well-written offering for this contest that not only flows with the anger that you clearly present but resonates throughout with your internal rhymes as well -- great job!! ;) :) And, yeah, great pic, too -- looks like the tramp you've introduced your reader to... ;/ :/ Thanx for sharing and best of luck in the contest! ;)
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reply by the author on 08-Sep-2019
A very well-written offering for this contest that not only flows with the anger that you clearly present but resonates throughout with your internal rhymes as well -- great job!! ;) :) And, yeah, great pic, too -- looks like the tramp you've introduced your reader to... ;/ :/ Thanx for sharing and best of luck in the contest! ;)
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Comment Written 06-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 08-Sep-2019
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Glad you enjoyed this poem. Appreciate your insights and the review. As I asked, what else would one say in this situation?