Cheater
What else are you going to say in this situation?27 total reviews
Comment from Bill Schott
This poem, Cheater, sounds a bit like a lyrical work fit to be twanged and moaned out in a country song. Those cheating wives need to all get together and defuse a bomb.
reply by the author on 09-Sep-2019
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This poem, Cheater, sounds a bit like a lyrical work fit to be twanged and moaned out in a country song. Those cheating wives need to all get together and defuse a bomb.
Comment Written 09-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 09-Sep-2019
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Glad you enjoyed this poem. Appreciate your insights and review.
Comment from Raffaelina Lowcock
Well no two ways about it, you have made up your mind and if you are the narrator, you have nothing but contempt in your heart. The poem certainly flows well and the composition of words are well chosen. The picture certainly tells all. Very well done.
But, one last comment "To Forgive Is Divine" and frees your heart of hate.
reply by the author on 08-Sep-2019
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Well no two ways about it, you have made up your mind and if you are the narrator, you have nothing but contempt in your heart. The poem certainly flows well and the composition of words are well chosen. The picture certainly tells all. Very well done.
But, one last comment "To Forgive Is Divine" and frees your heart of hate.
Comment Written 08-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 08-Sep-2019
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I won't tell you if this is a true event or not, but you go ahead and forgive someone who cheats on you if that makes you feel better. Should you do so, you would be in a very small minority of people. Anyway, appreciate the review.
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I know.
Comment from Susan X Smith
This poem had a very catchy rhythm. I liked the repetition of the phrase "you're a cheater, not a keeper." Indeed, why would you wish such a person well? Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 09-Sep-2019
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This poem had a very catchy rhythm. I liked the repetition of the phrase "you're a cheater, not a keeper." Indeed, why would you wish such a person well? Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 08-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 09-Sep-2019
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Glad you enjoyed this poem. Appreciate your insights and the review. As I asked, what else is someone going to say in this situation?
Comment from BeasPeas
This is a very good poem on the theme of a two-timing spouse. Not much else can be done, but to send him/her packing. Interesting artwork. Your poem is well rhymed and on an always timely topic. Marilyn
reply by the author on 09-Sep-2019
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This is a very good poem on the theme of a two-timing spouse. Not much else can be done, but to send him/her packing. Interesting artwork. Your poem is well rhymed and on an always timely topic. Marilyn
Comment Written 07-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 09-Sep-2019
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Glad you enjoyed this poem. Appreciate your insights and the review. As I asked, what more can be said in a situation like this?
Comment from Heather Knight
This is a great poem. The narrator sounds extremely angry.
The line:'I don't wish you well. May you roast in hell! My love for you is gone' would be funny if it wasn't tragic.
Thanks for sharing and good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 09-Sep-2019
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This is a great poem. The narrator sounds extremely angry.
The line:'I don't wish you well. May you roast in hell! My love for you is gone' would be funny if it wasn't tragic.
Thanks for sharing and good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 07-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 09-Sep-2019
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Glad you enjoyed this poem. Appreciate your insights and the review. As I asked, what else would one say in this situation?
Comment from jenintorre
I really enjoyed reading your poem. It is very well written. I do hope this is not true for you. The rhyme is excellent and the repitition really works. Good luck in the competition. Best wishes. Jen.
reply by the author on 09-Sep-2019
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I really enjoyed reading your poem. It is very well written. I do hope this is not true for you. The rhyme is excellent and the repitition really works. Good luck in the competition. Best wishes. Jen.
Comment Written 07-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 09-Sep-2019
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Glad you enjoyed this poem. Appreciate your insights and review. Like I asked, what else are you going to say in a situation like this one?
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written rhyming poem about the cheater that when caught is not worth keeping after the happy home is torn apart. Once a cheater wI'll always be a cheater.
reply by the author on 09-Sep-2019
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A very well-written rhyming poem about the cheater that when caught is not worth keeping after the happy home is torn apart. Once a cheater wI'll always be a cheater.
Comment Written 07-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 09-Sep-2019
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Glad you enjoyed this posting. Much appreciate your insights and review.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
I enjoyed the repeated lines here to make your point and cheaters never keep a happy home because once a cheater, always a cheater, there's sadness in these words Brett, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 09-Sep-2019
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I enjoyed the repeated lines here to make your point and cheaters never keep a happy home because once a cheater, always a cheater, there's sadness in these words Brett, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
Comment Written 07-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 09-Sep-2019
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Glad you enjoyed this poem. Appreciate your insights and the review. As I asked, what else is one going to say in this situation?
Comment from karenina
You really must learn to express yourself clearly...stop holding back on your anger. (It's a JOKE!)
Holy embittered poet Bat Man! Great rhyming, great cathartic spewing of all the BS she put you through (assuming you aren't extremely good at making me think this is non-fiction when in fact you came up with it with a vivid imagination and a few shots of Jameson)---
My point? I'd feel the same way.
Karenina
reply by the author on 09-Sep-2019
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You really must learn to express yourself clearly...stop holding back on your anger. (It's a JOKE!)
Holy embittered poet Bat Man! Great rhyming, great cathartic spewing of all the BS she put you through (assuming you aren't extremely good at making me think this is non-fiction when in fact you came up with it with a vivid imagination and a few shots of Jameson)---
My point? I'd feel the same way.
Karenina
Comment Written 07-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 09-Sep-2019
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Glad you enjoyed this poem. Appreciate your insights and the review. As I said, what else are you going to say in a situation like this?
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I say let it spew! (It's therapeutic)----Karenina
Comment from Sallyo
A purist might suggest a lack of punctuation, but I see this as performance poetry, delivered in a vengeful rush. Nice bit of aggro and plenty of rhyme and rhythm to drive it along. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 09-Sep-2019
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A purist might suggest a lack of punctuation, but I see this as performance poetry, delivered in a vengeful rush. Nice bit of aggro and plenty of rhyme and rhythm to drive it along. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 06-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 09-Sep-2019
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Yes, it could very easily be Country lyrics. Appreciate your insights and the review.
