The Two of Me
Viewing comments for Chapter 43 "Flying The Two of Me!"Chochee Medina Life and Times
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Comment from karenina
I find this a tough form to tackle. Admiration to you for tackling it and doing a fine job with your theme! I am of two minds when I fly...half of me enjoys the sensation and half of me never lets go of the fear...so that is how I interpreted "the two of me"!--Karenina
reply by the author on 31-Aug-2019
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I find this a tough form to tackle. Admiration to you for tackling it and doing a fine job with your theme! I am of two minds when I fly...half of me enjoys the sensation and half of me never lets go of the fear...so that is how I interpreted "the two of me"!--Karenina
Comment Written 31-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 31-Aug-2019
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Thank you for the review and compliments. Working in the aircraft parts and aircraft interior Mfg. business is not all so innocent. LOL
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Oh geez. I didn't want to hear THAT!---Karenina
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I tend to write dualistic personal poems for my Two of Me poems.
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Oh, there are other dualistic poem sin your portfolio? I will have to make a note to check some out!--Karenina
Comment from dejohnsrld (Debbie)
This is a great poem, my friend, but not quite a villanelle. From Shadow poetry:
A Villanelle is a nineteen-line poem consisting of a very specific rhyming scheme: aba aba aba aba aba abaa.
The first and the third lines in the first stanza are repeated in alternating order throughout the poem, and appear together in the last couplet (last two lines).
One of the most famous Villanelle is "Do not go Gentle into that Good Night" by Dylan Thomas.
I do like your repeating lines~Debbie
reply by the author on 31-Aug-2019
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This is a great poem, my friend, but not quite a villanelle. From Shadow poetry:
A Villanelle is a nineteen-line poem consisting of a very specific rhyming scheme: aba aba aba aba aba abaa.
The first and the third lines in the first stanza are repeated in alternating order throughout the poem, and appear together in the last couplet (last two lines).
One of the most famous Villanelle is "Do not go Gentle into that Good Night" by Dylan Thomas.
I do like your repeating lines~Debbie
Comment Written 31-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 31-Aug-2019
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Thank you, a New genre for me, Appreciate your review.
