The French Letter
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Comment from Ulla
Hi Tony, so things are happening in fast order in this chapter. You do have some great description about the ensuing chaos, quite typical if that part of the world. Now, who's following them? Great writing as always. Ulla:))
reply by the author on 26-Aug-2019
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Hi Tony, so things are happening in fast order in this chapter. You do have some great description about the ensuing chaos, quite typical if that part of the world. Now, who's following them? Great writing as always. Ulla:))
Comment Written 26-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 26-Aug-2019
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Thanks again, Ulla. The action is certainly beginning to hot up for these two. A far cry from Henley-on-Thames!
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It sure is!!
Comment from Pam (respa)
-This is a good chapter, Tony, that follows
well from the previous one.
-You develop it well by
describing three main events.
-The first part has very vivid imagery
as Helen appears in her newly acquired outfit.
-Charles is quite amazed, and you include a bit of
humor when he crosses his fingers behind his back.
-That changes dramatically with the explosion.
-The description of the older man shows
one of the impacts of it.
-It seems that he will be okay, and is so
thankful for the kindness shown to him.
-Obviously, mayhem ensues, but
then you bring us back to Rasheed.
-He always seems to know just when to
show up for Charles and Helen!
-He is quite a clever fellow, and the paragraph
about being "a bad penny" is pretty funny.
-Finally, you end with suspense and the
mysterious car that seems to be following them.
-Well done with all of the details and action.
reply by the author on 26-Aug-2019
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-This is a good chapter, Tony, that follows
well from the previous one.
-You develop it well by
describing three main events.
-The first part has very vivid imagery
as Helen appears in her newly acquired outfit.
-Charles is quite amazed, and you include a bit of
humor when he crosses his fingers behind his back.
-That changes dramatically with the explosion.
-The description of the older man shows
one of the impacts of it.
-It seems that he will be okay, and is so
thankful for the kindness shown to him.
-Obviously, mayhem ensues, but
then you bring us back to Rasheed.
-He always seems to know just when to
show up for Charles and Helen!
-He is quite a clever fellow, and the paragraph
about being "a bad penny" is pretty funny.
-Finally, you end with suspense and the
mysterious car that seems to be following them.
-Well done with all of the details and action.
Comment Written 26-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 26-Aug-2019
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Thanks, Pam, for your plot summary and shining stars. You know how much I always appreciate your input. Rasheed turns out to be a little more than the minor character that I first envisaged.
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You are very welcome and deserving, Tony. It was a very good chapter. I am always glad to know the input is appreciated. I think Rasheed could have a story of his own:)
Comment from Mystic Angel 7777
LOL! Rasheed to the rescue!! Her wedding dress sounds quite the thing, but she is pretty cocky about it - he could change his mind as she is NOT exactly the most stable in terms of her allegiances LOL. Well done and thank you very much for sharing it.
BTW - I am sorry it tool so long but it took forever to get here - I REALLY wish the oldest went ahead of the newest OR we could sort by posting.
reply by the author on 25-Aug-2019
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LOL! Rasheed to the rescue!! Her wedding dress sounds quite the thing, but she is pretty cocky about it - he could change his mind as she is NOT exactly the most stable in terms of her allegiances LOL. Well done and thank you very much for sharing it.
BTW - I am sorry it tool so long but it took forever to get here - I REALLY wish the oldest went ahead of the newest OR we could sort by posting.
Comment Written 25-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 25-Aug-2019
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Yes, it would be great if there was a sort feature in the inbox. I miss dozens of good postings because they get submerged.
Comment from rspoet
Hello Tony,
The beginning of this chapter would make a great scene in a movie. I wonder who would play Helen? A goddess of wisdom and guardian of secrets in a purple kameez...
Explosions portend bad things to come, as do black saloon cars.
I guess we'll find out how good a driver Rasheed really is.
Exciting chapter, and we haven't even met The Lion yet.
Robert
reply by the author on 26-Aug-2019
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Hello Tony,
The beginning of this chapter would make a great scene in a movie. I wonder who would play Helen? A goddess of wisdom and guardian of secrets in a purple kameez...
Explosions portend bad things to come, as do black saloon cars.
I guess we'll find out how good a driver Rasheed really is.
Exciting chapter, and we haven't even met The Lion yet.
Robert
Comment Written 25-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 26-Aug-2019
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At the rate they are going, they may never reach Chitral! Thanks for the comments about the visual nature of the writing in this chapter, and, of course, for the sixth star. Much appreciated, as always. Tony
Comment from Susan X Smith
This was a good read and an entertaining story. I remember reading a previous chapter and I look forward to the next one. Note that while the couple might be "living in sin" I doubt whether they are actually promiscuous (having many partners).
reply by the author on 26-Aug-2019
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This was a good read and an entertaining story. I remember reading a previous chapter and I look forward to the next one. Note that while the couple might be "living in sin" I doubt whether they are actually promiscuous (having many partners).
Comment Written 25-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 26-Aug-2019
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Very many thanks for returning to the story, Susan, and for your comments. You are right about 'promiscuous' - not the right word here, and I've removed it. I appreciate your sharp eye.
Comment from Terri joy
Hi there,
I loved this chapter. I loved the little giggles in between. So Aussie.( I also live on the Fleurieu Peninsula. Gorgeous isnt it? )
The end is terrific. Leaves me wanting to read more. Good on you Tony.
Terri Joy
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reply by the author on 26-Aug-2019
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Hi there,
I loved this chapter. I loved the little giggles in between. So Aussie.( I also live on the Fleurieu Peninsula. Gorgeous isnt it? )
The end is terrific. Leaves me wanting to read more. Good on you Tony.
Terri Joy
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Comment Written 25-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 26-Aug-2019
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Good to hear from you, Terri. I appreciate your comments and am delighted that you are hanging out for the next chapter!
We've been down here on the Fleurieu for twenty years now. Wouldn't change it for anything!
Comment from Hitcher
Your chapter was easy to follow, well written and offered up strong visuals and powerful emotions making it a very pleasurable and entertaining read. I would have no problems reading more but unfortunately do not have time to go back and start from the beginning. If I did I would though : ))
reply by the author on 26-Aug-2019
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Your chapter was easy to follow, well written and offered up strong visuals and powerful emotions making it a very pleasurable and entertaining read. I would have no problems reading more but unfortunately do not have time to go back and start from the beginning. If I did I would though : ))
Comment Written 25-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 26-Aug-2019
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Thanks very much for dropping by, Hitch. Appreciated. I value your supportive comments. Only a few more chapters, and I'll have finished the first draft of this blessed thing. All good wishes, Tony.
Comment from Pearl Edwards
Beautiful descriptions of - When Helen finally emerged
Like the way you put in a little bit of humour amongst the drama
to me that's pure Aussie. Great chapter Tony, and a dramatic end to it.
cheers,
valda
reply by the author on 26-Aug-2019
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Beautiful descriptions of - When Helen finally emerged
Like the way you put in a little bit of humour amongst the drama
to me that's pure Aussie. Great chapter Tony, and a dramatic end to it.
cheers,
valda
Comment Written 25-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 26-Aug-2019
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Thanks, Valda, both for the review and stars, Glad you're enjoying the humour. I'd find it hard to write this drivel with a straight face! LOL
All good wishes, Tony.
Comment from barbara.wilkey
You left a fantastic hook. I can't wait to read about who is following them and why. I really enjoyed the description of Helen's purchase. You are doing a great job writing this.
reply by the author on 26-Aug-2019
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You left a fantastic hook. I can't wait to read about who is following them and why. I really enjoyed the description of Helen's purchase. You are doing a great job writing this.
Comment Written 24-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 26-Aug-2019
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I always look forward to your reviews, Barbara. So supportive! Many thanks. All the best, Tony
Comment from rockmann
Wow! I really like this and wish I had read earlier chapters. I have to admit I did not understand what Helen was trying on, but it didn't really matter as the message came through loud and clear. Since I've gotten back on Fanstory I haven't found any chapters that kept me as interested as yours did, and was disappointed when I came to the end.
reply by the author on 26-Aug-2019
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Wow! I really like this and wish I had read earlier chapters. I have to admit I did not understand what Helen was trying on, but it didn't really matter as the message came through loud and clear. Since I've gotten back on Fanstory I haven't found any chapters that kept me as interested as yours did, and was disappointed when I came to the end.
Comment Written 24-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 26-Aug-2019
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Thanks, rockmann, both for your review and for the extra star. Most generous of you. I very much appreciate your supportive comments. All good wishes, Tony
