The Seashore
Honorable mention in Cinquain Poetry Contest14 total reviews
Comment from dragonpoet
This is a good description of the surf along the coast. I like the blue font color for the water. The picture shows what the tide brings in
Congrats on the honorable mention in the contest.
Keep writing
Have a great weekend.
DP
reply by the author on 07-Sep-2019
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This is a good description of the surf along the coast. I like the blue font color for the water. The picture shows what the tide brings in
Congrats on the honorable mention in the contest.
Keep writing
Have a great weekend.
DP
Comment Written 07-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 07-Sep-2019
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Thank you very much! It was my first attempt at a Cinquain poem. I?m honored you enjoyed! I was quite shocked to get honorable mention as they do not give that often in these contests! :) xoxo
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Don't mention it.
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Comment from Sally Law
A full package in poetry, form and presentation. The song was melodic and gave me hours of pleasure. I swore I was beachside.
Sending you my best today and six star fish review.
Sal xoxo
reply by the author on 25-Aug-2019
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A full package in poetry, form and presentation. The song was melodic and gave me hours of pleasure. I swore I was beachside.
Sending you my best today and six star fish review.
Sal xoxo
Comment Written 25-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 25-Aug-2019
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Thank you my Sally dear! Love and the sea are my very favorite things to write about! If I could spend every single day standing in the ?swash? of the beach shore, I would definitely be there! Sincerely appreciate your support as always! xoxo
Comment from Joan E.
I thoroughly enjoyed your vividly descriptive cinquain and your use of the alliteration of "s's" to intensify it. Your artwork selection is captivating as well. Best wishes in the competition- Joan
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2019
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I thoroughly enjoyed your vividly descriptive cinquain and your use of the alliteration of "s's" to intensify it. Your artwork selection is captivating as well. Best wishes in the competition- Joan
Comment Written 24-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2019
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Thank you! I think it was just a bit much for the voters on this site - haha! The contest wanted to see the passion and heat in the couple and that?s what I gave them!! LOL! Thanks so much though for appreciating it. it means a lot to me! xoxo
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Yes, you conveyed the passion but you did not cross the line! More cheers- Joan
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Thank you it is the support from wonderful people like you that encourages me to not let anything deter me from writing pieces like this!
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Many thanks for your warmhearted response. Smiles- Joan
Comment from Y. M. Roger
Wow -- the reader can almost hear those waves as they swash to and fro across the sand... love your descriptive words as they really give this short form some depth here! ;) Thanx for sharing and best of luck in the contest! ;) Yvette
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2019
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Wow -- the reader can almost hear those waves as they swash to and fro across the sand... love your descriptive words as they really give this short form some depth here! ;) Thanx for sharing and best of luck in the contest! ;) Yvette
Comment Written 23-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2019
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Comment appreciated!!!! It is a first time I?ve tried this style! xoxo
Comment from Ricky1024
This is a "Cinquian Contest Entree.
Rich in Theme and Imagery.
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It read well and Flowed well with no Grammar issues as well.
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Adjective and Objective Contents were both Excellent and Exceptional while Descriptive Measures aligned perfectly.
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Good luck with this Susan and have a Blessed day.
Doctor Ricky 1024
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2019
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This is a "Cinquian Contest Entree.
Rich in Theme and Imagery.
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It read well and Flowed well with no Grammar issues as well.
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Adjective and Objective Contents were both Excellent and Exceptional while Descriptive Measures aligned perfectly.
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Good luck with this Susan and have a Blessed day.
Doctor Ricky 1024
Comment Written 23-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2019
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Thanks Ricky! appreciate your reading and leaving me this feedback!
Comment from Ronni
Ah indeed Diana,
Nothing more mesmerizing and hypnotic than a gorgeous sea scene
or experience! Your breezy, seductive romanticism shared here with
most exhilarating imagery and enticement a joy to read and very
relatable having lived next to a perpetually inviting sea in So. Ca.
Loved the video and delightful music. Thanks for sharing dear!
Sorry out of 6's... Awesome presentation!
Blessings, Ronni
reply by the author on 22-Aug-2019
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Ah indeed Diana,
Nothing more mesmerizing and hypnotic than a gorgeous sea scene
or experience! Your breezy, seductive romanticism shared here with
most exhilarating imagery and enticement a joy to read and very
relatable having lived next to a perpetually inviting sea in So. Ca.
Loved the video and delightful music. Thanks for sharing dear!
Sorry out of 6's... Awesome presentation!
Blessings, Ronni
Comment Written 22-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 22-Aug-2019
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You never have to worry about the rating! It is my greatest pleasure to have you enjoy my writing. I know that your words are sincere and that?s what means the most to me! xoxo
Comment from Janetsue
I used to live across from the Caribbean Sea long ago and this brings back such beautiful memories. It's a beautiful posting!
re: Picture borrowed from Pinterest - No copyright intended
Do you mean: No copyright infringement intended. ????
reply by the author on 22-Aug-2019
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I used to live across from the Caribbean Sea long ago and this brings back such beautiful memories. It's a beautiful posting!
re: Picture borrowed from Pinterest - No copyright intended
Do you mean: No copyright infringement intended. ????
Comment Written 22-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 22-Aug-2019
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Yes I did and thank you so much for catching that! I?ll go make that correction in just a moment! How wonderful that you could live by the Caribbean! What a beautiful sight that must?ve been! Thank you for reading and enjoying and I?m so glad I brought such happy memories back for you! xoxo
Comment from A. Willow Bends
Absolutely lovely. How I want to be there! SWASH. My favorite word in this piece. So aptly describes and conveys the ocean motion. Beautiful words, beautiful photo to match. You should do very well with this one!
Wendy
reply by the author on 22-Aug-2019
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Absolutely lovely. How I want to be there! SWASH. My favorite word in this piece. So aptly describes and conveys the ocean motion. Beautiful words, beautiful photo to match. You should do very well with this one!
Wendy
Comment Written 22-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 22-Aug-2019
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Thank you very much Wendy! The water and love are my two favorite things to write about! Just something about both of those That gives my imagination life! Appreciate your encouraging review! xoxo
Comment from Tanvi Pauddar
I REALLY liked you amazing poem, and I loved your choice of words. I could read your poem multiple times, and not get bored. Once again, lovely poem, and good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 01-Sep-2019
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I REALLY liked you amazing poem, and I loved your choice of words. I could read your poem multiple times, and not get bored. Once again, lovely poem, and good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 22-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 01-Sep-2019
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Thank you my dear! Xoxo
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Thank you my dear! Xoxo
Comment from Mystic Angel 7777
This meets the contest requirements splendidly as you deliver a structurally sound Cinquain. The content has a placid, soothing feel as the imagery evokes the soft murmur of the sea as it washes against the sandy beach. Good luck in the judging and thank you very much for sharing it.
reply by the author on 22-Aug-2019
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This meets the contest requirements splendidly as you deliver a structurally sound Cinquain. The content has a placid, soothing feel as the imagery evokes the soft murmur of the sea as it washes against the sandy beach. Good luck in the judging and thank you very much for sharing it.
Comment Written 22-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 22-Aug-2019
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Thanks, M! This is my first try at this style, and I greatly appreciate your positive and supportive review! xoxo
