Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell

Excellent

LOL! LOL! LOL! The pan is mightier than the sword!! This one was fabulous, Bill, so funny, and I have to say, it could be true! We are all mostly addicted to this site. I must keep a skillet handy! Lol. Wonderful job! :)) Sandra xx

 Comment Written 15-Jun-2022

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reply by the author on 15-Jun-2022

The Fanstory-based tales are typically too near reality.

Comment from Phyllis Stewart

Exceptional

Love it! Love it! Love it! Love it! Love it! Love it! Love it! Love it! Love it! Love it! Love it! Love it! Love it! Love it! Love it! Love it! Love it! Love it! Love it! Love it! Love it! Love it! Love it! Love it!

 Comment Written 26-Aug-2019

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reply by the author on 26-Aug-2019

Wow! Thank you, Phyllis, for the positive review. It?s tough for Grace to be creative with so many distractions. : )

Comment from Y. M. Roger

Excellent

Sooooo....were you the one with the sword or the pan here..? :) LOL! ;) Loved this Flash offering, Bill -- so very relatable in some ways but more than that, the humor is REAL!! ;) :) Thanx for sharing and best of luck in the contest! ;) ;) Yvette

P.S. So sorry for the delayed review - the beginning of school combined with getting the boys off to college (they're all out there now - so quiet round here!!) has me struggling to find a routine... I PROMISE to be there soon - and, believe me, that's more for the OCD blonde over here than for you - LOL! ;) ;) Take care!

 Comment Written 23-Aug-2019

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reply by the author on 23-Aug-2019

I know some folks are glued to the site and must review for hours and hours. The same people also post twice a day with well developed work. That activity might take an unequal share of time from the rest of life.

Comment from kahpot

Excellent

Very, very humorous and an excellent read, I wonder who wrote that life saving haiku? your artwork fits wonderfully with this work, very well done and best wishes for your contest****kahpot

 Comment Written 23-Aug-2019

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reply by the author on 23-Aug-2019

Thank you, kahpot.

Comment from nancy_e_davis

Excellent

Really Bill? How funny! This is really a hoot. Good imagery. I was watching it in my minds eye. The iron
skillet is a lethal weapon. I have seen it used in numerous movies and TV shows. LOL well done my friend. Nancy:)

 Comment Written 22-Aug-2019

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reply by the author on 22-Aug-2019

Thank you, Nancy, for the great review. Bill

Comment from humpwhistle

Exceptional

If there's one thing I hate about living in this epoch, it's boxed macaroni in cheese. I swear, the stuff is radioactive. It makes all our kids morons.

I know many people associate woks with Chinese cuisine, but they're used all over Asia. Might a wok be more ironic than a skillet? You can still call it a pan in the last line.

Just a thought, Bill.

Good luck.

Peace, Lee

 Comment Written 22-Aug-2019

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reply by the author on 22-Aug-2019

Guess I was sleepy and not in a ?wok?ful state when selecting synonyms for pan. I was resisting using the word sword as best I could.

Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

Ha ha ha, this made me laugh Bill, we hate being disturbed when we are writing our poetry don't we? As the interruption brings out the worst in us! Ha ha ha, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 22-Aug-2019

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reply by the author on 22-Aug-2019

I always blame SPAG on interruptions while posting. :)

Comment from Pam (respa)

Excellent

-Good image and story, Bill.
-It make me laugh at the end.
-Grace definitely loves FS.
-I love how you incorporate
that into the plot.
-She reviews and she writes, and
George is not going to stop her!
-Great comment by her as she
begins her new poem-I wonder
if it will be about George?!
-A very good entry; good luck.

 Comment Written 22-Aug-2019

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reply by the author on 22-Aug-2019

Thanks, Pam.

reply by Pam (respa) on 22-Aug-2019

You are welcome, Bill.

Comment from damommy

Excellent

Hahahaha. I like that. The pan is mightier than the sword. Good play on words. You always have such creative ideas.

Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 21-Aug-2019

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reply by the author on 21-Aug-2019

Thanks, Yvonne

Comment from Teri7

Excellent

Bill, This is a really cute 150 word Flash Fiction story you have penned for the contest. All your words went together well and this was a very good short story. The art work you chose went well with your words. Best wishes in the contest. Blessings, Teri

 Comment Written 21-Aug-2019

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reply by the author on 21-Aug-2019

Thanks, Teri