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Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written poem and an excellent interpretation of the pix this picture challenge. The poor duck thougt he will cool off in the bowl of water and nearly ends up in the boiling water.
reply by the author on 17-Aug-2019
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A very well-written poem and an excellent interpretation of the pix this picture challenge. The poor duck thougt he will cool off in the bowl of water and nearly ends up in the boiling water.
Comment Written 17-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 17-Aug-2019
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Thanks Sandra, for your positive review.
Hugs, Trisha
Comment from BeasPeas
Hi Trisha. I'm glad you made it in for this post. No-no duck l'orange or any other kind of cooked duck for me. I'm glad he flew away. I like your a-b-d rhyme scheme. Marilyn
reply by the author on 17-Aug-2019
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Hi Trisha. I'm glad you made it in for this post. No-no duck l'orange or any other kind of cooked duck for me. I'm glad he flew away. I like your a-b-d rhyme scheme. Marilyn
Comment Written 17-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 17-Aug-2019
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Thanks, Marilyn. I had difficulty composing anything for this challenge, hence procrastination set in . I?m happy that you enjoyed the poem.
Hugs, Trisha
Comment from Y. M. Roger
LOL! Yep! Leave it to the ekphrastic queen to make us smile about eating duck at the same time we're looking a t a pic of one!! ;) :) You are too good, Trisha -- thanx for the smile, ma'am!! ;) ;) Yvette
reply by the author on 17-Aug-2019
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LOL! Yep! Leave it to the ekphrastic queen to make us smile about eating duck at the same time we're looking a t a pic of one!! ;) :) You are too good, Trisha -- thanx for the smile, ma'am!! ;) ;) Yvette
Comment Written 16-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 17-Aug-2019
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Girl, you analyze me too much!, I?m not the queen of anything ,and certainly not the ?queen bee.) Laughter makes the world go round tis said, so I just hope to add a little bit of humor where I can. Thanks for your complimentary review
Hugs, Trisha
Comment from Rikki66
Excellent One pic and you arrive at two clever poems in both the ducky was the brain, Keep up the good work.*************************************************************
Rikki LXVI
reply by the author on 16-Aug-2019
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Excellent One pic and you arrive at two clever poems in both the ducky was the brain, Keep up the good work.*************************************************************
Rikki LXVI
Comment Written 16-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 16-Aug-2019
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I try! Thanks so much, I?m glad the duck prevailed! Have a great weekend
Hugs, Trisha
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Smiles and kisses.
Comment from Teri7
This is a very well written poem you have penned for the Cooling Off event in the Pix This Challenge . You used very good words that went well with the picture. Great job my friend. love and blessings, Teri
reply by the author on 16-Aug-2019
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This is a very well written poem you have penned for the Cooling Off event in the Pix This Challenge . You used very good words that went well with the picture. Great job my friend. love and blessings, Teri
Comment Written 16-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 16-Aug-2019
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I?m glad you enjoyed the poem. Thanks for a great review.
Hugs, Trisha
Comment from LisaMay
Cute poem with good rhyming! That duck had a very strong survival instinct while you were arguing over its fate. You probably were left with just the orange to eat.
reply by the author on 16-Aug-2019
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Cute poem with good rhyming! That duck had a very strong survival instinct while you were arguing over its fate. You probably were left with just the orange to eat.
Comment Written 16-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 16-Aug-2019
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Good for vegetarians! Thanks, Lisa for your positive review.
Hugs, Trisha
Comment from Mystic Angel 7777
This meets the Club Challenge splendidly as you deliver a delightfully fun piece that embraces the artwork with a story. Well done and thank you very much for sharing it.
reply by the author on 16-Aug-2019
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This meets the Club Challenge splendidly as you deliver a delightfully fun piece that embraces the artwork with a story. Well done and thank you very much for sharing it.
Comment Written 16-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 16-Aug-2019
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Thank you! I really couldn?t create much more that this rhyme! I?m so glad you enjoyed reading the poem. Your complimentary review was appreciated.
hugs, Trisha
Comment from Elaine Chiodi
I loved the story you tell in your poem. The rhyming is truly great, though some of the meter is off, i.e., third stanza, third line is too short. Maybe add "out" after "stressed", or "both" before "were".
Last stanza sums up your tale beautifully, but might flow better if the word "if" is deleted from the third line, and "a ducks" changed to "my". It's such a common phrase I think most people would automatically read it as "duck's" even if the actual word isn't there.
I hope I've been helpful. I enjoyed your poem so much just as you've written it. ...ec
reply by the author on 16-Aug-2019
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I loved the story you tell in your poem. The rhyming is truly great, though some of the meter is off, i.e., third stanza, third line is too short. Maybe add "out" after "stressed", or "both" before "were".
Last stanza sums up your tale beautifully, but might flow better if the word "if" is deleted from the third line, and "a ducks" changed to "my". It's such a common phrase I think most people would automatically read it as "duck's" even if the actual word isn't there.
I hope I've been helpful. I enjoyed your poem so much just as you've written it. ...ec
Comment Written 16-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 16-Aug-2019
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Thanks for reviewing kindly.
Hugs, Trisha
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you're quite welcome... ...ec
Comment from Roxanna Andrews
The duck does look like he is being served alive. Poor thing. It is always good to hear they escaped being dinner. I have only had duck a few times. I can't remember what it even tasted like. This is fun, I saw no errors. Rox
reply by the author on 16-Aug-2019
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The duck does look like he is being served alive. Poor thing. It is always good to hear they escaped being dinner. I have only had duck a few times. I can't remember what it even tasted like. This is fun, I saw no errors. Rox
Comment Written 16-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 16-Aug-2019
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I?m glad you enjoyed the duck?s getaway, thank you for you
appreciative review
Hugs, Trisha
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
I liked your popular sayings riddled within your poem that made me smile Trisha, an appropriate write for this picture challenge, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 16-Aug-2019
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I liked your popular sayings riddled within your poem that made me smile Trisha, an appropriate write for this picture challenge, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
Comment Written 16-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 16-Aug-2019
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Thanks, I appreciate your kind review,
Hugs, Trisha