Eerie
Dust mites are evolving6 total reviews
Comment from Sallyo
it's daughter
its (I think...)
Eek, now I'm itching... great story and one of the most original I've read at FS or anywhere else for that matter. Dust mites indeed!
reply by the author on 17-Aug-2019
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it's daughter
its (I think...)
Eek, now I'm itching... great story and one of the most original I've read at FS or anywhere else for that matter. Dust mites indeed!
Comment Written 17-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 17-Aug-2019
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Thank you very much Sallyo for reading my little story. Your comments and stars are a delight.
Comment from Lobber
Hi Henry,
Very fresh and clever story .... like the use of the inner dialogue....effective line: >human skin is better than deep-fried duck skin< Nice job. ... - Lobber
reply by the author on 16-Aug-2019
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Hi Henry,
Very fresh and clever story .... like the use of the inner dialogue....effective line: >human skin is better than deep-fried duck skin< Nice job. ... - Lobber
Comment Written 16-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 16-Aug-2019
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Lobber, thank you very much for reading my story and your comments.
Comment from Mystic Angel 7777
This meets the contest requirements as you deliver a complete story on the theme required. I am sorry to say that while human conversation progresses logically and is easy to follow - the whole bit with the mites just isn't working for me at all. Good luck in the voting and thank you very much for sharing it.
reply by the author on 16-Aug-2019
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This meets the contest requirements as you deliver a complete story on the theme required. I am sorry to say that while human conversation progresses logically and is easy to follow - the whole bit with the mites just isn't working for me at all. Good luck in the voting and thank you very much for sharing it.
Comment Written 16-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 16-Aug-2019
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Thank you very much Mystic Angel for your reading my story and your comments. They help me to understand my readers.
Comment from robyn corum
Henry,
hahahahaha! It took me a minute to catch on, but when I did, I got a kick out of this one. I'm used to ghosts and goblins inhabiting the bodies of humans, but hadn't thought about the possibility of dust mites doing so. now, we have to watch out for EVERYTHING! hahaha
Fun one. Thanks!
reply by the author on 16-Aug-2019
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Henry,
hahahahaha! It took me a minute to catch on, but when I did, I got a kick out of this one. I'm used to ghosts and goblins inhabiting the bodies of humans, but hadn't thought about the possibility of dust mites doing so. now, we have to watch out for EVERYTHING! hahaha
Fun one. Thanks!
Comment Written 16-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 16-Aug-2019
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Thank you very much Robin for reading my story. Your rating and comments are inspiring.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Oh my goodness, I am itching all over after reading this post! I hate those damn things and I know they exist in carpets, do they also get into beds too? I thought this was an inventive write and I need to take a shower now! Love Dolly x
reply by the author on 13-Aug-2019
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Oh my goodness, I am itching all over after reading this post! I hate those damn things and I know they exist in carpets, do they also get into beds too? I thought this was an inventive write and I need to take a shower now! Love Dolly x
Comment Written 13-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 13-Aug-2019
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Thank you Dolly for reading the story and your stars.
Comment from Iza Deleanu
Funny I really enjoyed this story, I know first reading doesn't make any sense but when you deeper the secret is in the "dust mites". Good Luck with the contest.
reply by the author on 12-Aug-2019
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Funny I really enjoyed this story, I know first reading doesn't make any sense but when you deeper the secret is in the "dust mites". Good Luck with the contest.
Comment Written 12-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 12-Aug-2019
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Thank you for your awesome review.