Lady
She came for a reason.33 total reviews
Comment from Mama Baer
Dear TPA, I discovered you because of your very helpful review of one of my pieces. This flash fiction you authored is fantastic! I will watch for your work now. Sending good wishes!
reply by the author on 29-Sep-2021
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Dear TPA, I discovered you because of your very helpful review of one of my pieces. This flash fiction you authored is fantastic! I will watch for your work now. Sending good wishes!
Comment Written 28-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 29-Sep-2021
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Thank you for your words and taking the time to read my work.
Comment from Rosemary Everson1
Excellent writing. Such a wonderful story. You had an angel in your story who walked in front of your car or was it a ghost? Whoever she was, the lady saved you from going to your cottage.
reply by the author on 29-Aug-2019
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Excellent writing. Such a wonderful story. You had an angel in your story who walked in front of your car or was it a ghost? Whoever she was, the lady saved you from going to your cottage.
Comment Written 29-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 29-Aug-2019
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thank you
Comment from john mallahan
Love your ending! The ironies of life sometimes do present themselves. Right place, right time. Situations, we all could find ourselves in. Think, there is something higher, out there...
reply by the author on 29-Aug-2019
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Love your ending! The ironies of life sometimes do present themselves. Right place, right time. Situations, we all could find ourselves in. Think, there is something higher, out there...
Comment Written 29-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 29-Aug-2019
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thank you
Comment from dragonpoet
So her mother came back as a ghost to save her life. But she has another has the loss of her mother and her family cabin to mourn now. Where does she go now for the solitude she seeks? Well crafted short story.
Congratulations on the contest win.
Keep writing
Joan
reply by the author on 29-Aug-2019
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So her mother came back as a ghost to save her life. But she has another has the loss of her mother and her family cabin to mourn now. Where does she go now for the solitude she seeks? Well crafted short story.
Congratulations on the contest win.
Keep writing
Joan
Comment Written 29-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 29-Aug-2019
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thank you for your kind words.
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My pleasure.
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Comment from JudyE
Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading your flash fiction story. You've made good use of the available words and you've introduced a nice surprise ending.
reply by the author on 29-Aug-2019
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Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading your flash fiction story. You've made good use of the available words and you've introduced a nice surprise ending.
Comment Written 29-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 29-Aug-2019
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thank you so much
Comment from JanPerry
Congratulations for a wonderful story with a twist of fate and fortune for u. You have won this challenge. Trying to stick to the word count is hard so well done!
reply by the author on 28-Aug-2019
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Congratulations for a wonderful story with a twist of fate and fortune for u. You have won this challenge. Trying to stick to the word count is hard so well done!
Comment Written 28-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 28-Aug-2019
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Thank you for your kind words. Your stars made my day.
Comment from Contests
reply by the author on 28-Aug-2019
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 A contest winning entry! A seven star rating from the Contest Committee for posting the winning contest entry. |
Comment Written 28-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 28-Aug-2019
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I'm so grateful to the committee and can't thank you enough for this recognition.
Comment from giraffmang
Hi there,
There's a very nice tonal quality to this write. it's wistful and eerie which suits things perfectly.
You're precious," she always said. - need opening speech marks here.
Nice little piece.
GMG
reply by the author on 18-Aug-2019
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Hi there,
There's a very nice tonal quality to this write. it's wistful and eerie which suits things perfectly.
You're precious," she always said. - need opening speech marks here.
Nice little piece.
GMG
Comment Written 18-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 18-Aug-2019
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thank you.
Comment from Iza Deleanu
Beyond the picture, there is a lady who could be anybody, but the rain brought closer to you the one you miss - your mom. Good luck with the contest and your writing
reply by the author on 17-Aug-2019
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Beyond the picture, there is a lady who could be anybody, but the rain brought closer to you the one you miss - your mom. Good luck with the contest and your writing
Comment Written 16-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 17-Aug-2019
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thank you.
Comment from tfawcus
I like the way you have used several of the senses to enhance the visualisation of this fine entry to the contest. Writing in the present tense also adds to the immediacy. Just one small typo to fix before the deadline:
Wreathes of thick fog swirl(s) around me.
reply by the author on 17-Aug-2019
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I like the way you have used several of the senses to enhance the visualisation of this fine entry to the contest. Writing in the present tense also adds to the immediacy. Just one small typo to fix before the deadline:
Wreathes of thick fog swirl(s) around me.
Comment Written 16-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 17-Aug-2019
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thank you.
