Outside the Box
A Senryu Entry4 total reviews
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
I liked these words, thinking outside the box is what many struggle with and this is because we have been brought up inside boxes for most of our lives! Love Dolly x
reply by the author on 09-Aug-2019
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I liked these words, thinking outside the box is what many struggle with and this is because we have been brought up inside boxes for most of our lives! Love Dolly x
Comment Written 09-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 09-Aug-2019
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Thank you, Dolly. I alwas appreciate your feedback.
Comment from Iza Deleanu
Nice concentration of thoughts and feelings that culminates with the free will, the will to create. The image you choose to accompany your senryu is very expressive and in the same tonality with your writing. Good luck with the contest
reply by the author on 09-Aug-2019
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Nice concentration of thoughts and feelings that culminates with the free will, the will to create. The image you choose to accompany your senryu is very expressive and in the same tonality with your writing. Good luck with the contest
Comment Written 08-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 09-Aug-2019
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Thank you so much for your encouraging feedback!
Comment from LeftHandedScribe
The picture and your choice of words express the necessary risk we all should take to step out of our comfort zone and feel true liberation. This piece is crisp and staccato in its brief form. Well done.
reply by the author on 07-Aug-2019
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The picture and your choice of words express the necessary risk we all should take to step out of our comfort zone and feel true liberation. This piece is crisp and staccato in its brief form. Well done.
Comment Written 07-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 07-Aug-2019
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Thank you for dropping by to read and share your insights!
Comment from Nike23
Your poem adheres to the constraints of the senryu poem. Your word choice is vivid and descriptive. Your words create images in the reader's mind. When I am out of my comfort zone I am the most creative as well. It is just hard to push myself to get to that zone. Good Job.
reply by the author on 07-Aug-2019
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Your poem adheres to the constraints of the senryu poem. Your word choice is vivid and descriptive. Your words create images in the reader's mind. When I am out of my comfort zone I am the most creative as well. It is just hard to push myself to get to that zone. Good Job.
Comment Written 07-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 07-Aug-2019
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Thank you for dropping by to read and share your insights!
