Passing
A Nonet16 total reviews
Comment from duchessofdrumborg
"Passing", is an extremely well-written and deftly descriptive piece. To me this is a six, but unfortunately I only have fives left. You KEEP WRITING and I'll KEEP READING. I look forward to seeing your next post.
reply by the author on 03-Aug-2019
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"Passing", is an extremely well-written and deftly descriptive piece. To me this is a six, but unfortunately I only have fives left. You KEEP WRITING and I'll KEEP READING. I look forward to seeing your next post.
Comment Written 03-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 03-Aug-2019
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Thank you very much for your wonderful review****kahpot
Comment from royowen
I don't believe anyone truly dies, but that they survive in any number of ways, probably through the continuing human organism, even the devil is a tool in God's hands. A beautifully written nonet my friend, a profoundly chosen theme, good luck in the contest. Blessings, Roy
reply by the author on 02-Aug-2019
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I don't believe anyone truly dies, but that they survive in any number of ways, probably through the continuing human organism, even the devil is a tool in God's hands. A beautifully written nonet my friend, a profoundly chosen theme, good luck in the contest. Blessings, Roy
Comment Written 02-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 02-Aug-2019
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Thank you my friend for this wonderful and understanding review, very much appreciated****kahpot
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Welcome dear friend
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
This is a poignant nonet that reminds us that life goes on. You did a great job with your contest entry, kapot. I like the image selected and your words speak to a forever bond with those family members that have passed, but their memories remain in our hearts. Great job and thanks for sharing. Jan
reply by the author on 02-Aug-2019
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This is a poignant nonet that reminds us that life goes on. You did a great job with your contest entry, kapot. I like the image selected and your words speak to a forever bond with those family members that have passed, but their memories remain in our hearts. Great job and thanks for sharing. Jan
Comment Written 02-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 02-Aug-2019
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Thank you very much, yes I like to think our loved stay with us in memory, as always very much appreciated ****kahpot
Comment from Tanvi Pauddar
Wow. This is such a fun poem, and I really, really enjoyed reading it. Also, your syllable count is prefect, which is kind of hard to get. I had a ton of fun reading this. Thank you for sharing, and good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 02-Aug-2019
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Wow. This is such a fun poem, and I really, really enjoyed reading it. Also, your syllable count is prefect, which is kind of hard to get. I had a ton of fun reading this. Thank you for sharing, and good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 02-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 02-Aug-2019
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Thank you very much for your wonderful review
Comment from Pearl Edwards
Lovely Nonet about the continuance of love and memories though a loved one is no longer with us. That is what gives us everlasting life, if we live on in their memory, their heart. Lovely poem and presentation.
cheers.
reply by the author on 02-Aug-2019
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Lovely Nonet about the continuance of love and memories though a loved one is no longer with us. That is what gives us everlasting life, if we live on in their memory, their heart. Lovely poem and presentation.
cheers.
Comment Written 02-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 02-Aug-2019
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Thank you very much
Comment from Sallyo
I like the repeated "passing" in this one, because it reminds me of the theme/subject each few lines. Lovely piece, and the picture with it suits it down to the ground.
reply by the author on 02-Aug-2019
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I like the repeated "passing" in this one, because it reminds me of the theme/subject each few lines. Lovely piece, and the picture with it suits it down to the ground.
Comment Written 02-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 02-Aug-2019
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Thank you very much
Comment from Janice Canerdy
Your well-written, thoughtful nonet speaks movingly of the importance
of leaving behind a legacy. Just my opinion, of course: In a poem so short, you might want to avoid repetition of "pass on" or some form of it.
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2019
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Your well-written, thoughtful nonet speaks movingly of the importance
of leaving behind a legacy. Just my opinion, of course: In a poem so short, you might want to avoid repetition of "pass on" or some form of it.
Comment Written 01-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2019
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Thank you very much, I went for a re-read and understand, a bit much of the same thing eh! very much appreciated
Comment from ExperiencingLiphe
Memories definitely don't die when someone we love passes. And sometimes even the ones too little to remember will do things that remind us of those no longer with us. It's crazy when stuff like that happens. The circle of life I guess. Great job
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2019
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Memories definitely don't die when someone we love passes. And sometimes even the ones too little to remember will do things that remind us of those no longer with us. It's crazy when stuff like that happens. The circle of life I guess. Great job
Comment Written 01-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2019
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Thank you very much
Comment from evesayshi
In my opinion, a eulogy for those who passed and a welcome tribute to those who follow as an everlasting legacy - strikingly rendered in verse and image, and in full compliance with the prompt - my best wishes in the contest...
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2019
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In my opinion, a eulogy for those who passed and a welcome tribute to those who follow as an everlasting legacy - strikingly rendered in verse and image, and in full compliance with the prompt - my best wishes in the contest...
Comment Written 01-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2019
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Thank you very much
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You are very welcome...Eve
Comment from judester
And that can be the best we could wish for as we pass through this life. A respectful memory to be passed on through the family and community. A legacy, like a wake, spreading out and touching the lives that we passed by and left behind. Cheers, judester
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2019
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And that can be the best we could wish for as we pass through this life. A respectful memory to be passed on through the family and community. A legacy, like a wake, spreading out and touching the lives that we passed by and left behind. Cheers, judester
Comment Written 01-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2019
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Thank you very much for your very understanding review
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Cheers.
