My Last Tear
A good cry.37 total reviews
Comment from Carla Trinklein
Even the layout of this poem is sad, resembling the trickle of a teardrop on a cheek, but then, that was intentional, wasn't it? Very well done. Best wishes in the contest!
reply by the author on 18-Aug-2019
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Even the layout of this poem is sad, resembling the trickle of a teardrop on a cheek, but then, that was intentional, wasn't it? Very well done. Best wishes in the contest!
Comment Written 18-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 18-Aug-2019
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Thank you so much for the excellent review and kind compliments. I appreciate you so much. I am on my way to your page to congratulate you on your win! Way to go, Carla.
Sending you my best today as always,
Sally xo
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Thanks so much, Sally! So nice of you to extend your congratulations. I was very surprised...and delighted!
Comment from Lance S. Loria
An amazing one line poem. Mine reads like, See Fido run. LoL. A very smooth flow. A single line with an emotional message. Nicely done. No edits or adjustments necessary.
reply by the author on 18-Aug-2019
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An amazing one line poem. Mine reads like, See Fido run. LoL. A very smooth flow. A single line with an emotional message. Nicely done. No edits or adjustments necessary.
Comment Written 17-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 18-Aug-2019
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Thank you so much for the wonderful review and gracious six stars. I apologize I am so late responding. I?ve been visiting my grandchildren. :+)
Sending you my best today always,
Sally:+)
Comment from misscookie
You captured my attention when I saw the photo you choose to go with your poem, they are a perfect match your words I can relate to, when I don't know when my last tear fell, was it the time I was rape an not by a stranger or the seven deaths of loves one right after each other with in three months time frame.Thank you for sharing, have a safe and blessed week end.
Cookie
reply by the author on 16-Aug-2019
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You captured my attention when I saw the photo you choose to go with your poem, they are a perfect match your words I can relate to, when I don't know when my last tear fell, was it the time I was rape an not by a stranger or the seven deaths of loves one right after each other with in three months time frame.Thank you for sharing, have a safe and blessed week end.
Cookie
Comment Written 16-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 16-Aug-2019
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Thank you, dear Miss Cookie. I appreciate the review from someone who has shed many a tear. I pray Jesus has dried them all.
Sending you my best today as always,
Sally xo
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Your very welcome thank you for those uplifting comments.
Have a safe and blessed week-end.
Cookie
Comment from poetwatch
Don't cry Sally. I don't want to be the one to tell you this, but I think you have nineteen sentences, :) I know it is one line, but a line is horizontal, laying flat, not standing straight up. (I think) I just wanted to point that out because I know that you know that you have one line. I don't know what other people think. I'm playing with you Sally. :) This is a good entry for the One Line Poem contest.
reply by the author on 15-Aug-2019
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Don't cry Sally. I don't want to be the one to tell you this, but I think you have nineteen sentences, :) I know it is one line, but a line is horizontal, laying flat, not standing straight up. (I think) I just wanted to point that out because I know that you know that you have one line. I don't know what other people think. I'm playing with you Sally. :) This is a good entry for the One Line Poem contest.
Comment Written 15-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 15-Aug-2019
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Jose, you are a mess but you gave yourself away with the five star review. Thank you. Keeping it light, I see.
Sending you my best today as always,
Sal :+)
Comment from light
Fascinating one line poem, with a beautiful picture to match the words of the poem. I am so impressed with this contest entry. It looks like a winner to me.
Blessings,
Elaine
reply by the author on 15-Aug-2019
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Fascinating one line poem, with a beautiful picture to match the words of the poem. I am so impressed with this contest entry. It looks like a winner to me.
Blessings,
Elaine
Comment Written 15-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 15-Aug-2019
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Thank you, dear Elaine. I thought I?d try something different and pushed the button before I could talk myself out of it. I?m delighted you liked it.
Sending you my best today as always,
Sally xo
Comment from Mastery
Indeed, this style is different for you Sal. I is similar to e.e. cummings writing the way it dribbles down the page. This is a good entry in the one-line poetry. I liked it..Good luck in the contest. Bob
reply by the author on 15-Aug-2019
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Indeed, this style is different for you Sal. I is similar to e.e. cummings writing the way it dribbles down the page. This is a good entry in the one-line poetry. I liked it..Good luck in the contest. Bob
Comment Written 15-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 15-Aug-2019
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Thank you for the excellent review and kind comments, Bob. I wrote this really quick and pushed the button before I had a chance to change my mind. LOL!
Sending you my best today as always,
Sal :+)
Comment from barkingdog
Oh, so sad, but so well put. When we have cried and cried, there does come a point where there is no more to give. We are empty. Feelings are spent.
Very well said, Sally.
I hope you do well in the contest.
reply by the author on 15-Aug-2019
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Oh, so sad, but so well put. When we have cried and cried, there does come a point where there is no more to give. We are empty. Feelings are spent.
Very well said, Sally.
I hope you do well in the contest.
Comment Written 15-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 15-Aug-2019
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Thank you very much for the excellent review and kind compliments, dear Ellen. It is always so appreciated.
Sending you my best today with kind regards,
Sally xo
Comment from A. Willow Bends
So sad, yet sweet. O.K., I am going to have to pretend they are tears of joy or I will cry. Love the format, love the photo choice. Love everything you write. Does this explain that I am a HUGE FAN? You may reply like this:
:)
Wendy
reply by the author on 15-Aug-2019
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So sad, yet sweet. O.K., I am going to have to pretend they are tears of joy or I will cry. Love the format, love the photo choice. Love everything you write. Does this explain that I am a HUGE FAN? You may reply like this:
:)
Wendy
Comment Written 15-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 15-Aug-2019
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Thank you, dear Wendy. If ever I am depressed, I must pull up your reviews. I wrote this really quick and pushed the button before I had the chance to object. Love your new profile picture!
Sending you my best today as always,
Sal xo
Comment from Sugarray77
This is so well done. The presentation alone is stellar and keeps the reader avidly engaged as the read is sped through. I commend you, Sally, on the theme and photo. So very well done, my friend.
Melissa
reply by the author on 15-Aug-2019
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This is so well done. The presentation alone is stellar and keeps the reader avidly engaged as the read is sped through. I commend you, Sally, on the theme and photo. So very well done, my friend.
Melissa
Comment Written 15-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 15-Aug-2019
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Thank you very much for the excellent review and kind comments. I?m so glad you like this different style and formatting. Sending you my best today as always, Sally xo
Comment from Ronni
There truly is a point one reaches or realizes regarding certain woes
or travesties, they are 'all cried out' and there are no more tears left
to fall. This event referencing this tear empty point is most compellingly
thrust into senses regarding this ill fated dress. The resemblance
to e.e.Cummings is indeed captured most illustrously and memorably.
Great job, dramatic pic and theme awesome! Thanks for sharing dear!
Blessings always, Ronni
reply by the author on 15-Aug-2019
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There truly is a point one reaches or realizes regarding certain woes
or travesties, they are 'all cried out' and there are no more tears left
to fall. This event referencing this tear empty point is most compellingly
thrust into senses regarding this ill fated dress. The resemblance
to e.e.Cummings is indeed captured most illustrously and memorably.
Great job, dramatic pic and theme awesome! Thanks for sharing dear!
Blessings always, Ronni
Comment Written 14-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 15-Aug-2019
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Dear Ronni, thank you for the wonderful review and kind of compliments. I?m so glad you like this as it was a little different for me. Sending you my best as always with kind regards, Sally xo
