She is the rhythm in my heart
For my Soulmate who has given her all...47 total reviews
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
Your words are from your heart. It is easy for readers to see/feel that, Mystery Author. I enjoyed reading your poem to the life long marriage the tow of you have and too wish you many more years of happiness. Thanks for sharing and best wishes. Jan
reply by the author on 12-Jul-2019
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Your words are from your heart. It is easy for readers to see/feel that, Mystery Author. I enjoyed reading your poem to the life long marriage the tow of you have and too wish you many more years of happiness. Thanks for sharing and best wishes. Jan
Comment Written 12-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 12-Jul-2019
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Thank you Jan, for taking the time to read and comment on my work.
Comment from misscookie
I love the artwork you choose to go with your poem which is a perfect match
I knew just looking at the artwork this was going to be deep... until I read what you and your beloved wife went though and praise she is doing great.
Your words touched my heart and soul when I read couples like you guys let the young know what true love means
thank you for sharing and stay on praying ground
Cookie
reply by the author on 12-Jul-2019
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I love the artwork you choose to go with your poem which is a perfect match
I knew just looking at the artwork this was going to be deep... until I read what you and your beloved wife went though and praise she is doing great.
Your words touched my heart and soul when I read couples like you guys let the young know what true love means
thank you for sharing and stay on praying ground
Cookie
Comment Written 12-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 12-Jul-2019
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I appreciate your thoughts and comments.
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Your very welcome
Have a nice evening
Cookie
Comment from poetwatch
This is a very beautiful poem dedicated to your wife, Author. I can relate with you. I do not know what I would do if I could not hold my wife's hand. I'm happy for you and your wife, may you have many, many years together and may you always be blessed by God. He and His Son will always be there with you. :) This is a very good entry for the Light and Sweet contest.
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This is a very beautiful poem dedicated to your wife, Author. I can relate with you. I do not know what I would do if I could not hold my wife's hand. I'm happy for you and your wife, may you have many, many years together and may you always be blessed by God. He and His Son will always be there with you. :) This is a very good entry for the Light and Sweet contest.
Comment Written 12-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 12-Jul-2019
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My thanks to you for reading and commenting on my work.
Comment from Mystic Angel 7777
This meets the contest requirements nicely with a correct them and line count. You deliver an inspiring piece which speaks to enduring love and a lasting relationship - a rare commodity these days. Good luck in the voting and thank you very much for sharing it.
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This meets the contest requirements nicely with a correct them and line count. You deliver an inspiring piece which speaks to enduring love and a lasting relationship - a rare commodity these days. Good luck in the voting and thank you very much for sharing it.
Comment Written 12-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 12-Jul-2019
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I thank you for your good wishes and taking the time to read and comment.
Comment from Ogden
Your poem is, indeed, 'light and sweet,' yet, the story behind it is anything but. Your love for your wife is beautifully expressed, and very touching.
Best wishes for her sustained and complete recovery,
Don
reply by the author on 12-Jul-2019
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Your poem is, indeed, 'light and sweet,' yet, the story behind it is anything but. Your love for your wife is beautifully expressed, and very touching.
Best wishes for her sustained and complete recovery,
Don
Comment Written 12-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 12-Jul-2019
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My sincere thanks, One learns to keep things pretty upbeat and on the up and up when faced with health issues that are threatening.
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You are very welcome.
Don
Comment from Teri7
This is a very beautiful and very heart felt poem you have penned about the love of your life who survived and is with you now. You used very good descriptive words and very lovely imagery. I thank God that she is still here with you! Blessings, Teri
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This is a very beautiful and very heart felt poem you have penned about the love of your life who survived and is with you now. You used very good descriptive words and very lovely imagery. I thank God that she is still here with you! Blessings, Teri
Comment Written 12-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 12-Jul-2019
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I am truly blessed and my life is rich, your kind comments are humbling.
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you are so welcome! Blessings!
Comment from Heather Knight
You have the best kind of love. The one that lasts forever, even when things go wrong.
I'm happy to hear your wife is cancer-free.
Thanks for sharing your beautiful poem. Good luck in the contest.
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reply by the author on 12-Jul-2019
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You have the best kind of love. The one that lasts forever, even when things go wrong.
I'm happy to hear your wife is cancer-free.
Thanks for sharing your beautiful poem. Good luck in the contest.
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Comment Written 12-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 12-Jul-2019
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Your kind comments are a reflection of a person who has a good heart, thank you for the good wishes for my wife.
