She is the rhythm in my heart
For my Soulmate who has given her all...47 total reviews
Comment from royowen
Oh yes, I agree with you, I don't what I would do if my wife had faced the things your wife. It sounds like many of us need a jolt to mak us aware of the value of a wife, a child, a friend, is when death rears its scaly head, I've lost mum, dad, a brother, and many friends, s I can identify with your work. Beautifully written my friend, blessings, Roy
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Oh yes, I agree with you, I don't what I would do if my wife had faced the things your wife. It sounds like many of us need a jolt to mak us aware of the value of a wife, a child, a friend, is when death rears its scaly head, I've lost mum, dad, a brother, and many friends, s I can identify with your work. Beautifully written my friend, blessings, Roy
Comment Written 12-Jul-2019
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My sincere thank you.
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Most welcome
Comment from LisaMay
You have truly faced the notion of 'until death do us part.' and this poem shows the deep bond of love you have shared for so long. The 'light and sweet' is still there, but you touch on deeper connections that time will have imposed.
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You have truly faced the notion of 'until death do us part.' and this poem shows the deep bond of love you have shared for so long. The 'light and sweet' is still there, but you touch on deeper connections that time will have imposed.
Comment Written 12-Jul-2019
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My sincere thank you.
Comment from victor 66
This is a very well done poem about love that is both sincere and heartfelt. I understand your concern about someone so terribly special, that if anything happened to her, it would turn your world upside down. I am happy for both of you.
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This is a very well done poem about love that is both sincere and heartfelt. I understand your concern about someone so terribly special, that if anything happened to her, it would turn your world upside down. I am happy for both of you.
Comment Written 12-Jul-2019
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My sincere thank you.
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You are most welcome.
Comment from Rachelle Allen
First, I am so glad to read that your soulmate has been cancer-free for two years now. That is wonderful.
Second, this is SUCH an loving, honoring poem for the woman who obviously means absolutely everything to you. (No wonder she wanted to stay around! Who in her right mind wouldn't fight to have more time with a husband and appreciative and loving as you.)
Best of luck to you in the contest. xo
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First, I am so glad to read that your soulmate has been cancer-free for two years now. That is wonderful.
Second, this is SUCH an loving, honoring poem for the woman who obviously means absolutely everything to you. (No wonder she wanted to stay around! Who in her right mind wouldn't fight to have more time with a husband and appreciative and loving as you.)
Best of luck to you in the contest. xo
Comment Written 12-Jul-2019
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My sincere thank you.
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You are so welcome. xo
Comment from Sally Law
I believe true is ever hopeful. My husband has been by side through many sickness and now in blindness. He loves me more than ever. You men are rare who love like this. Thank you. You poem is beautiful penned and most of all your wife and life is blessed.
Sending you both my best today as well,
Sally Law xo
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I believe true is ever hopeful. My husband has been by side through many sickness and now in blindness. He loves me more than ever. You men are rare who love like this. Thank you. You poem is beautiful penned and most of all your wife and life is blessed.
Sending you both my best today as well,
Sally Law xo
Comment Written 12-Jul-2019
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My sincere thank you.
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I meant to type?true love is ever hopeful. I?m glad you could read past my typo. Sal
Comment from Kingsrookviii
Wow, This is a really good tribute to your wife and your shared story. I am extremely happy that she has beaten the cancer. I know from experience what that's like. Great work and keep up the good work. By the way, great picure, to.
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Wow, This is a really good tribute to your wife and your shared story. I am extremely happy that she has beaten the cancer. I know from experience what that's like. Great work and keep up the good work. By the way, great picure, to.
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Comment Written 12-Jul-2019
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My sincere thank you.
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Very nice image.
-I appreciate your notes
and story, and am glad to
hear your wife is doing well.
-This is a very good poem
that comes directly from your heart.
-Congratulations on the 36 years
of marriage.
-The last verse is a perfect
ending for your poem.
-A strong entry for the contest;
good luck!
-As a side note,
we are the same age.
It's interesting to me
to find similarities when
we don't know who we
are responding to!
reply by the author on 12-Jul-2019
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-Very nice image.
-I appreciate your notes
and story, and am glad to
hear your wife is doing well.
-This is a very good poem
that comes directly from your heart.
-Congratulations on the 36 years
of marriage.
-The last verse is a perfect
ending for your poem.
-A strong entry for the contest;
good luck!
-As a side note,
we are the same age.
It's interesting to me
to find similarities when
we don't know who we
are responding to!
Comment Written 12-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 12-Jul-2019
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My sincere thank you, I am new to this site and I feel so fortunate to find this safe space to share works that I have held in secret for a long time. Your kinds words help to motivate to keep improving. I think the positive attraction of this site brings like-minded souls forward.
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You are very welcome and thank you for the reply. I hope you enjoy FS. I think many on this site are very like-minded. I look forward to seeing who you are.
Comment from Lance S. Loria
A nice love tribute poem. Congratulations on 36 years! You have produced a "Light and Sweet" work. Good luck in the contest. No edits or adjustments necessary
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A nice love tribute poem. Congratulations on 36 years! You have produced a "Light and Sweet" work. Good luck in the contest. No edits or adjustments necessary
Comment Written 12-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 12-Jul-2019
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You are a kind person for taking the time to read and comment on my work, thank you.
Comment from Hitcher
Finding the ONE is by no means easy, if you look at the world today, One in every three marriages end in divorce. You and your wife hit the jackpot and struck gold when you met and married. One can feel the love you have for her, a love that has only grown stronger as time has gone by. Your poem is a great entry into the light and sweet contest, good luck!
reply by the author on 12-Jul-2019
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Finding the ONE is by no means easy, if you look at the world today, One in every three marriages end in divorce. You and your wife hit the jackpot and struck gold when you met and married. One can feel the love you have for her, a love that has only grown stronger as time has gone by. Your poem is a great entry into the light and sweet contest, good luck!
Comment Written 12-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 12-Jul-2019
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I know the fortune that we both have and we treat it with great respect. Thank you for your comments and good wishes.
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written heartfelt love poem. When a couple can still be in love after a life time together and can honestly say they love each other still, it is indeed pure true love.
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A very well-written heartfelt love poem. When a couple can still be in love after a life time together and can honestly say they love each other still, it is indeed pure true love.
Comment Written 12-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 12-Jul-2019
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My sincere thanks for reading and commenting on my entry.
