The Everlasting Dance
Waltzing through life together63 total reviews
Comment from Mrs. KT
Good Morning, Rachelle!
Your poetic offering possesses the rhythm of a dance...who knew? :)
Of course, I was drawn to it not only because you wrote it, but, hey...with my last name of "Truelove" you know I'm going to love it!
But I truly do love the simplicity and cadence, and of course the message!
I've not been able to review much lately, but your work is just wonderful.
Hoping to read and review more in the coming weeks!
Take Care!
diane
reply by the author on 14-Jul-2019
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Good Morning, Rachelle!
Your poetic offering possesses the rhythm of a dance...who knew? :)
Of course, I was drawn to it not only because you wrote it, but, hey...with my last name of "Truelove" you know I'm going to love it!
But I truly do love the simplicity and cadence, and of course the message!
I've not been able to review much lately, but your work is just wonderful.
Hoping to read and review more in the coming weeks!
Take Care!
diane
Comment Written 14-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 14-Jul-2019
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Have you been okay, Diane? Or just busy with summer?
Thank you for this lovely and encouraging review. I appreciate it very much, as always. xo
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Hello Rachelle!
Yes!
I am wonderful!
Just remodeling our home, company, and traveling.
Hope to slow down in August!
Thank you for caring!
Keep writing!
Your work is wonderful!
diane
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Oh, good. That's the way summers should be --filled with life and joy. xo
Comment from Benny Beeharry
This is a lovely and excellent write. Simple ,put into the rhythm of an old song, become more beautiful and full of life...more real and close to life. I love it.
Benny
reply by the author on 14-Jul-2019
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This is a lovely and excellent write. Simple ,put into the rhythm of an old song, become more beautiful and full of life...more real and close to life. I love it.
Benny
Comment Written 14-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 14-Jul-2019
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Nothing says love quite like a waltz! Thank you for noticing and commenting accordingly. I appreciate your review very much. xo
Comment from pome lover
very good, Rachelle.
A lovely, happy poem - airy and lyrical.
It says it all. Very nice!
A great entry for the dancing contest.
Katharine - pome lover
reply by the author on 13-Jul-2019
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very good, Rachelle.
A lovely, happy poem - airy and lyrical.
It says it all. Very nice!
A great entry for the dancing contest.
Katharine - pome lover
Comment Written 13-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 13-Jul-2019
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Thanks, Katharine! I especially appreciate that from an exceptional poet like yourself. xo
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you're turning my head. :)
Comment from Sugarray77
What a great verse to showcase your life together as one big and wonderful dance. I like the pairing of the two dancers in the artwork. It blends the verse with the reality of two people joining in the moves together. Good luck, my friend.
Melissa
reply by the author on 13-Jul-2019
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What a great verse to showcase your life together as one big and wonderful dance. I like the pairing of the two dancers in the artwork. It blends the verse with the reality of two people joining in the moves together. Good luck, my friend.
Melissa
Comment Written 13-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 13-Jul-2019
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I couldn't believe I found that picture!! Shutterstock has been such a great find for me. It's pricey, but for me, it's been worth it because it doesn't take but a few minutes to find exactly the perfect shot.
I appreciate your nice review very much, Melissa. Thank you.
Comment from Tootie
What a happy and beautiful poem! It made me smile. Thank you! I'm all out of 6-stars, so have to give you a virtual one. I really enjoyed this and wish you the best in the contest. Blessings, Cathy
reply by the author on 13-Jul-2019
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What a happy and beautiful poem! It made me smile. Thank you! I'm all out of 6-stars, so have to give you a virtual one. I really enjoyed this and wish you the best in the contest. Blessings, Cathy
Comment Written 13-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 13-Jul-2019
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I'll happily take a virtual six when it comes with such a lovely review as this. Thank you, Tootie!
Comment from Y. M. Roger
What a light-hearted free verse to the wonderful rhythm that is life...so glad you made it a waltz so that you both can slowly see the whole 'room' as you move together!! ;) ;) Just beautiful, Lady Rachelle! ;) :) Thanx for sharing and best of luck in the contest (you got my vote)! ;) Yvette
*Sorry behind on reviews...just getting home from my youngest's 2-day college orientation (and of course travel time!) plus prep for same's wisdom teeth removal early Monday....can you say 'no time on computer'....LOL!
reply by the author on 13-Jul-2019
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What a light-hearted free verse to the wonderful rhythm that is life...so glad you made it a waltz so that you both can slowly see the whole 'room' as you move together!! ;) ;) Just beautiful, Lady Rachelle! ;) :) Thanx for sharing and best of luck in the contest (you got my vote)! ;) Yvette
*Sorry behind on reviews...just getting home from my youngest's 2-day college orientation (and of course travel time!) plus prep for same's wisdom teeth removal early Monday....can you say 'no time on computer'....LOL!
Comment Written 13-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 13-Jul-2019
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Oy! I appreciate that you made the time for this lovely review (and feel simultaneously guilty for the exact same reason.) Thank you, and good luck on Monday! Oy.
Comment from Janet Foor
A lovely poem about the everlasting dance in the waltz rhythm. Excellent artwork to compliment your work. Very nicely done and good luck in the contest.
Blessings
Janet
reply by the author on 13-Jul-2019
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A lovely poem about the everlasting dance in the waltz rhythm. Excellent artwork to compliment your work. Very nicely done and good luck in the contest.
Blessings
Janet
Comment Written 13-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 13-Jul-2019
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Thank you for recognizing that it's a waltz! I appreciate that very much. And thank you for all your well-wishes, too. xo
Comment from Mark D. R.
Dancing cheek to cheek is carefree fun too! You ably described a dance move most of us enjoy throughout our lives.
When it is right, then you are tight with your life's partner.
A very nice 'heart' illustration to accompany your contest entry. Best wishes in the same.
reply by the author on 13-Jul-2019
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Dancing cheek to cheek is carefree fun too! You ably described a dance move most of us enjoy throughout our lives.
When it is right, then you are tight with your life's partner.
A very nice 'heart' illustration to accompany your contest entry. Best wishes in the same.
Comment Written 13-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 13-Jul-2019
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Thank you for this understanding and validating review! Very much appreciated.
Comment from RPSaxena
Hello Rachelle Allen,
Lovely piece of poetry having enchanting, and charming musical flow throughout from top to bottom.
One-two-three...and SIX!
SUPERB.
reply by the author on 13-Jul-2019
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Hello Rachelle Allen,
Lovely piece of poetry having enchanting, and charming musical flow throughout from top to bottom.
One-two-three...and SIX!
SUPERB.
Comment Written 13-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 13-Jul-2019
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I love this review! Thank you very much, RPSaxena! I couldn't appreciate this more. xo
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Rachelle Allen, Most Welcome!
with best wishes,
~ RP
Comment from Yuna Akil
Hi! Great poem and choice of picture. It was interesting that because the poem started with one-two-three I kind of read it in Britney Spears voice.
I enjoyed how you ended both stanzas with the word life. It added a nice ring to it! I also thought it was interesting how in the three sentences found in the poem, the first was a command, the second an affirmative with "you" as the noun, and the third with "I" as the noun. I enjoyed it!
Yuna.
reply by the author on 12-Jul-2019
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Hi! Great poem and choice of picture. It was interesting that because the poem started with one-two-three I kind of read it in Britney Spears voice.
I enjoyed how you ended both stanzas with the word life. It added a nice ring to it! I also thought it was interesting how in the three sentences found in the poem, the first was a command, the second an affirmative with "you" as the noun, and the third with "I" as the noun. I enjoyed it!
Yuna.
Comment Written 12-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 12-Jul-2019
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This is the nicest review yet. Thank you SO very much for all your noticings They mean the world.
