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God Waits

283 word fiction; God waits

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Comment from CrystieCookie999
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I liked the description of someone who I believe you said had passed on, with being "happy, cool, calm, and steady." Those would be amazing attributes to achieve in this life as well. I don't think "sagely" is an adjective the same way "godly" is, but points for being creative in word production.

 Comment Written 18-Jul-2019

Comment from Earl Corp
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I think there are times we all feel we come up short of the HATE and are not worthy of Heaven. Was this a prophetic dream and Daniel really went home?

 Comment Written 18-Jul-2019

Comment from Y. M. Roger
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Wow -- now that is certainly a very original and intriguing dream that you were having -- so very vivid could have almost been a vision... :) ;) Thank you for sharing with all of us! :)

 Comment Written 17-Jul-2019

Comment from DonandVicki
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I like the depth of your poetic/ prose filled story. It make this reader feel the depth of your commitment to God. The image that you chose to complement your work is a good choice.

 Comment Written 16-Jul-2019

Comment from Rdfrdmom2
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ALCREATOR:

I absolutely love what you say the acronym HATE stands for:
Heaven Accession Test Examination - as far as I know, the
test is fairly simple! I think you should continue to share
your dream here. I am glad your friend, Daniel, went to heaven.
There is no better place to be.
Thanks for sharing.
jan

 Comment Written 15-Jul-2019

Comment from Sylvia Page
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Hello Alcreator Litt Dear,
I don't condone hate it will take us nowhere. Each one of us is entitled to our own beliefs and we should respect that and not criticise another's belief. I agree that God is religion. Each individual interprets religion and God the way they were brought up. I believe that all religions abhor hate.
Blessings
Sylvia

 Comment Written 15-Jul-2019

Comment from ExperiencingLiphe
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I'm worried about my creepers getting into Heaven. My husband tells me I just have to trust that the right thing will be done. I suppose he's right but it's still hard. You did a great job with this

 Comment Written 15-Jul-2019

Comment from Dean Kuch
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As mere mortals we know not the time or the place when our Heavenly Father will call us home.
Therefore we must be diligent in our faith in Him and resolve that when the time does arrive, we'll be ready.
Life is fleeting. These mortal husks of flesh, sinew and bone are merely on loan while we're here. They do not make us who we are but what we are while here in this earthly realm.
One day we'll be given a new & glorified body free from pain and afflictions for all eternity.
That is something all believers and followers of Christ can look forward to.
God bless,

~Dean

 Comment Written 15-Jul-2019

Comment from Dolly'sPoems
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Everyone in life should be able to pray and have their believe in God in whatever religion they choose without chastisement. This is having respect for each other, we are all different and 'live and let live' is how we need to behave. In the animal world there is cruelty because all animals want to live and survive but they do 'live and let live,' something we need to learn and not fill ourselves with prejudice against others. Hate features far too often these days with devastating consequences, a fine write, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 15-Jul-2019

Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
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I don't think we will learn Truth until we pass over. Hate abounds everywhere, but we should try to steer clear of that as there is no room for it in God's house. This is a well-written article, and very enjoyable to read. :) Sandra xx

 Comment Written 13-Jul-2019