Love of Animals
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12 total reviews
Comment from A. Willow Bends
I am reviewing some of the club members. I love what you have done with this! (esp the last line-me either!) Very creatively done, that his expression leaves us guessing about nearly every aspect of him, his life, his personality, the whole bit. Well done!
A. Willow Bends
reply by the author on 08-Aug-2019
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I am reviewing some of the club members. I love what you have done with this! (esp the last line-me either!) Very creatively done, that his expression leaves us guessing about nearly every aspect of him, his life, his personality, the whole bit. Well done!
A. Willow Bends
Comment Written 08-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 08-Aug-2019
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I?m honored that you thought highly of my poem. Thank youit was very
Validating for me
Hugs, Trisha
Comment from Pearl Edwards
A face of no emotion and your questions of why, what, where, when and how makes up the man behind the face make for an interesting interpretation of this artwork for the Pix this club.
cheers,
valda
reply by the author on 24-Jul-2019
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A face of no emotion and your questions of why, what, where, when and how makes up the man behind the face make for an interesting interpretation of this artwork for the Pix this club.
cheers,
valda
Comment Written 20-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 24-Jul-2019
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Thank you so much, Valda
Hugs, Trisha
Comment from Darlene Franklin
You captured what I felt when I saw the picture. An expressionless face. And you addressed that question. Who is he? And all those W questions, unanswered. I think that's I made him a hustler in my poem. A mask for a face that he changes at will.
reply by the author on 18-Jul-2019
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You captured what I felt when I saw the picture. An expressionless face. And you addressed that question. Who is he? And all those W questions, unanswered. I think that's I made him a hustler in my poem. A mask for a face that he changes at will.
Comment Written 18-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 18-Jul-2019
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Thank your for your kind review
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You're welcome
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Thank your for your kind review
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You're welcome.
Comment from Heather Knight
You are so right. This face doesn't express any kind of emotion. The truth is I don't care for this painting much.
Your poem, however, is cool and very perceptive.
Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 16-Jul-2019
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You are so right. This face doesn't express any kind of emotion. The truth is I don't care for this painting much.
Your poem, however, is cool and very perceptive.
Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 16-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 16-Jul-2019
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Me neither, I?m fact I almost ignored it! Thank you for your complimentary review
Hugs,Trisha
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
This is a strange picture and you bravely wrote a poem about it. A man with a secret maybe, this picture is flat and emotionless as you say, your last line seems unfinished Trisha, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 16-Jul-2019
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This is a strange picture and you bravely wrote a poem about it. A man with a secret maybe, this picture is flat and emotionless as you say, your last line seems unfinished Trisha, love Dolly x
Comment Written 16-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 16-Jul-2019
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I?m having trouble with the edit to add the final word , thanks for your kind review
Hugs, Trisha
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written poem and an excellent interpretation of the man in the hat, with no expression on his face it is hard to see what and who he is inside, he made me think of a street artist that bring joy to the people in the street while he cries within.
reply by the author on 16-Jul-2019
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A very well-written poem and an excellent interpretation of the man in the hat, with no expression on his face it is hard to see what and who he is inside, he made me think of a street artist that bring joy to the people in the street while he cries within.
Comment Written 16-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 16-Jul-2019
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Thanks, Sandra, for your kind review
Hugs, Trisha
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
I enjoyed your poem for the Picture This challenge, Bucketlist. Your words flow well, are descriptive, and the rhymes are great. I would delete the extra 'i' at the end of the word all and delete the large 'A' at the end of the poem. Thanks for sharing your interpretation of the picture. Jan
reply by the author on 16-Jul-2019
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I enjoyed your poem for the Picture This challenge, Bucketlist. Your words flow well, are descriptive, and the rhymes are great. I would delete the extra 'i' at the end of the word all and delete the large 'A' at the end of the poem. Thanks for sharing your interpretation of the picture. Jan
Comment Written 15-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 16-Jul-2019
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Thanks so much. I?m having trouble editing for some reason. It just gets worse each time I try!
Hugs, Trisha
Comment from JLR
A wonderful parody to the graphic selection, the truth about our eyes reaching into the human....the soul.. you have a couple of extra characters I know you did not intend....good success!
reply by the author on 15-Jul-2019
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A wonderful parody to the graphic selection, the truth about our eyes reaching into the human....the soul.. you have a couple of extra characters I know you did not intend....good success!
Comment Written 15-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 15-Jul-2019
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Hi, welcome to my edge of FS world. I appreciate your positive review of my poem
Hugs, Trisha
Comment from royowen
A very good interpretation of the photo in this picture this prompt. Your poem is a very insightful look at the indomitable human persona, and one of its many faces. I love this beautifully metered and articulate scribing of this work. Written in no fixed meter and aabb rhyming, well done, blessings, Roy
reply by the author on 15-Jul-2019
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A very good interpretation of the photo in this picture this prompt. Your poem is a very insightful look at the indomitable human persona, and one of its many faces. I love this beautifully metered and articulate scribing of this work. Written in no fixed meter and aabb rhyming, well done, blessings, Roy
Comment Written 15-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 15-Jul-2019
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Bless you Roy for your wonderful compliments. I am honored by your review
Hugs, Trisha
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Well done
Comment from BeasPeas
Hi Trisha. This is a very nicely composed poem for the Picture This challenge for this week. Your image didn't load and I see that you have sent me a private message but there was no message beneath the subject line. To post a poem for the cub ~ click "submit your entry." This should load the image automatically. Marilyn
reply by the author on 15-Jul-2019
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Hi Trisha. This is a very nicely composed poem for the Picture This challenge for this week. Your image didn't load and I see that you have sent me a private message but there was no message beneath the subject line. To post a poem for the cub ~ click "submit your entry." This should load the image automatically. Marilyn
Comment Written 15-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 15-Jul-2019
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All is straight again, thanks for your help
Hugs, Trisha