Poor Puppy
The challenge was to write a SAD Poem4 total reviews
Comment from Rachelle Allen
Yes, this is, indeed, sad. A puppy, alone, cold, wet, hungry, frightened, the dark! You pulled out all the stops!! I'm surprised you took it all back, though, with your Author's Notes! (So you're a softie; no full-out killer instinct...) Very well done. Good luck in the contest! xo
reply by the author on 08-Jul-2019
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Yes, this is, indeed, sad. A puppy, alone, cold, wet, hungry, frightened, the dark! You pulled out all the stops!! I'm surprised you took it all back, though, with your Author's Notes! (So you're a softie; no full-out killer instinct...) Very well done. Good luck in the contest! xo
Comment Written 07-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 08-Jul-2019
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Thank you for the stars and yes you are right I could not leave the puppy alone in the dark. I'll have to work on that character flaw.
Comment from tfawcus
Glad to hear that there was a happy ending. Being alone in a strange place in the dark must be high on the list of any youngster's worst nightmare. Good luck with this in the contest.
reply by the author on 07-Jul-2019
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Glad to hear that there was a happy ending. Being alone in a strange place in the dark must be high on the list of any youngster's worst nightmare. Good luck with this in the contest.
Comment Written 07-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 07-Jul-2019
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Thanks for the stars and the kind words. Hope you remember to vote.
Comment from Brenda Henderson
Well done! Very sweet indeed. I can see the puppy shivering and waiting in the rain. Somehow your words inspire hope that return of the awaited "best friend" is indeed imminent. Excellent imagery depicted here. Good job!
reply by the author on 07-Jul-2019
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Well done! Very sweet indeed. I can see the puppy shivering and waiting in the rain. Somehow your words inspire hope that return of the awaited "best friend" is indeed imminent. Excellent imagery depicted here. Good job!
Comment Written 07-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 07-Jul-2019
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Thank you for the stars and kind words. Do hope that you are able to vote.
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You're Welcome!
Comment from Willie P. Smith
Excellent contest entry. People have full hearts when it comes to puppies.
This poem should do very well in the contest. Good rhyme and sad entry.
Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 07-Jul-2019
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Excellent contest entry. People have full hearts when it comes to puppies.
This poem should do very well in the contest. Good rhyme and sad entry.
Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 07-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 07-Jul-2019
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Thank you for the stars and the kind words. i do hope that you are able to vote.
